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this is the breath
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she/her
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in my head
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kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ

I got some writing done but the scene feels like an absolute disaster... sssssssssssssssssskkkkkkkkkkkkkkkllllldjfdkslaksdjfkla;dkldaksld

If I posted it here, would you guys be willing to give me some detailed feedback?
- July 8, 2023
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2. Going_North_cal
  
  ooooo
  
  hmm feedback
  
  idrk tbh. the descriptive language is pretty good, and it definitely hooked me in. but i feel like i would need more context to fully understand.
  
  either way, it’s well written and i love it :))))))
  
  July 8, 2023
  
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3. kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ
  
  Okay that makes me feel a little better haha thank you Calano
  
  Also here's the diagram (it's a mess and I apologize lol)
  
  Spoiler
  
  The Maw is where the two waterfalls feed into
  
  July 8, 2023
  
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4. The Wandering Wizard
  
  Oooo
  
  Was very good and sent chills reading it.
  
  And yeah you'd need context to understand it better.
  
  Also Mira is an amazing villain
  
  July 8, 2023
  
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