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  1. I did! That's what most of my writing is, I don't have the skills to write a full novel yet, so I just write scenes, and scenes, and more scenes, and create characters, and write things with only dialogue and things with no dialogue and then I write poems and then I keep writing and it never ends. It's a fun way to write
  2. Hmm... I would probably clarify where it says Russ instead of Alan, that took a good minute to understand, for a bit there I thought it completely changed characters. I also think the transition from "everything's normal, coffee is gross, this dude is very sick" to "BOOM MAGIC AND THINGS ARE GLOWING AND OOOOH YOU CAN DIE NOW" (two very common tropes) was a little abrupt, it almost felt forced? I did really love the end though, and that last sentence was epic.
  3. Oooh! That wasn't at all what I was expecting after the first couple lines, it was disturbing and I loved it!
  4. She’s a pretty sweet character. Any scene that starts with someone in a prison is a good one, I’m writing one of those right now
  5. That was awesome Panda, nice job.
  6. Looking around, he sees dust covering everything. He can’t even see much past *sigh* Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, it’s so thick. He does see a small cluster of vines near the base of the cornucopia.
  7. The cornucopia sits in the center of the roof, but the rest of it is deserted.
  8. I am a child who has found a home with the lost, and I will not deny entry to any who need it.
  9. I'm afraid, and my heart has broken.

    It will heal,

    And I will be brave again.

    But right now,

    There is no light left to find.

    There is no hope left to share.

    The pieces of my heart

    Spread like dust in the wind.

    And I try not to care.

    But the truth is,

    I liked having people to

    Always be there.

    My fear

    Spreads faster

    Than lightning through the sky.

    And I try not to care.

    But the truth is

    I liked it,

    Not being 

    So scared.

     

    This moment will end,

    But right now,

    There's no light.

    I believe I'll find peace,

    But some pieces

    Will always

    Be missing.

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    2. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      Thanks, Archie. That means so much more than you know, especially today.

    3. The Aspiring Archivist

      The Aspiring Archivist

      I'm glad to hear that. I hope whatever it is, you get through it alright, and you find what you're looking for.

    4. Experience
  10. These words are accepted.
  11. … these words are not accepted.
  12. Why isn’t this thread more active? I like it here.
  13. There’s always tomorrow for dreams to come true. Believe in your dreams come what may. There’s always tomorrow, with so much to do, and so little time in a day. We all pretend the rainbow has an end and you’ll be there my friend someday.

    Funny, the things your brain does after singing music from the old stop motion Rudolph music for an hour and a half.

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    2. Experience

      Experience

      Ok I'll look it up...

      ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

      Yeah I remember now xD

      But it has been a hot second since I've seen it

    3. Wittles

      Wittles

      Lol, that's an amazing way to describe it

    4. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      Thanks Wittles lol

  14. In another room off to the side, Rue groaned. You're supposed to be better than this. Shut up. You're supposed to care. I don't. You should be more than a petty little girl. SHUT UP! Why are you so weak? Ignoring the voice in her head, she sat down. Time alone would help. Yes, that was all she needed. Some time away from everyone else.
  15. "Good for you. Go find yourself a room or something," she said, stalking off.
  16. She shook her head. "No, no, nothing at all. Just an...interesting refugee."
  17. “And I live in tlt” @Being of Cacophony
  18. “Ah…no,” Rue says, disgusted. Clearly his mind has been broken by the stress. She tries to heal it, but, strangely, finds nothing in need of healing. “Well, it doesn’t matter now. You’re in the clinic, and you’re safe, but, of course, if you hurt these people you won’t be safe anywhere.”
  19. Rue watched him for a moment, then sniffed and walked over to jar man. “What do you need to know?” She asked.
  20. Rue sniffed and walked away from the noisy refugees, eventually sitting on a couch in the corner.
  21. Rue lets the gateway snap shut behind Nameless and the stranger, then eyes the milling crowd. “I guess we just let them all find rooms now?
  22. “Come on,” Rue said sharply when the last refugee had gone through, walking through the gateway without looking to see if TAAron was following.
  23. Rue opened the gateway a little wider and started ushering refugees through it.
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