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    Antin nodded. Once he was unbound, he placed his hand on the rune. Very subtly, his skin began to pale from its normal shade, and his hair began to grow darker.
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    Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the first one didn't have great logic. From what I remember, my thought was that the extermination was to make sure they couldn't develop too far and try escaping or something. As for the second, I was going to kill Ash, but I couldn't find the heart. And the last one, yeah I did get some ideas from Zane although I tried to make it different. Maybe I will, but these first three didn't lend themselves to it too much. Or maybe it's just me.
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    J is for Jasnah
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    What is your favorite part of eating raw eggs? Hire a general contractor.
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    Thanks! Honestly, I do prefer my other two responses. The idea I had for this one didn't really come out how I wanted it to. I think my first one was pretty good, although I did write all of it a ways past midnight on New Year's day and I might be misremembering how good it was.
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    I'm still definitely not behind. 1/3/2023 - A Treasured Curse That was darker than I had thought it would be. @Yuliya I liked your story, and the idea of a strange new place that is somehow familiar resonates with me more than I would have thought. Does anyone have feedback for any of mine? I would love to hear any. I only have three responses so far, one of which is this one, another is earlier on this page, and another is the first submission back on the first page.
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    Tacien sat there, doing nothing. "I guess not. Anything else?" @Channelknight Fadran
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    "I'm not sure. Tacien?"
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    "I guess so." Cufre glanced at Tacien, who was watching the conversation. "Is there any information that would be helpful to have that he could draw? He can certainly be helpful that way."
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    "He could still be useful, I'm sure."
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    "What? We can't just leave him here."
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    How do you read so fast? 2 out of 13
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    "Ah. Do you think he'll be thrown off by Tacien's eyes, then?"
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    "Well, he is a businessman." @Channelknight Fadran
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    I imagine Potato as a potato. And Ranryu as something between her profile and a dragon. Maybe both at once.
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    "You know that mom" - @Shining Silhouette
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    "No time!" Par ran past him until he quickly reached the group, then sat down, breathing heavily. "You all should keep the guards away."
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    Par scooped up the girl and ran back to the group.
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    Par fell and quickly turned back into a human, than ran at a dead sprint after the guard, trying to ignore the fogginess in his brain.
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