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  1. echo74
    real talk tho how do you have ten dollars worth of used tissues? (skip me)
  2. echo74
    "Yeah, yeah, whatever," Luka said. Luka eyed the young woman suspiciously for a moment, but then decided better of it and walked over. "Hello! What's your name?"
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    granted, but your skin turns orange and your hair turns green and you decide to work in a chocolate factory... i wish to have ten dollars in USD
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    guys guys guys i was rereading my first draft AND IT HIT ME LIKE A BRICK why it's so terrible like in general im kinda picky and like storywise its ok BUT THEN i was reading it and i realized that there's no... heart to it it's just a story and it's all plot/dialogue and no actual characterization the main character doesn't change much from the beginning and there's no moral or theme or overarching message i think i got so caught up in the plot that i lost the characters and what makes a story interesting so now ima work on fixing that oh i am so happy i figured that out
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    good morning guys!!! & now i gotta go to school sooo byeeee!
  6. echo74
    granted, but you now have dyslexia i wish to be able to edit well
  7. echo74
    "Maybe," Luka agreed. "I think it suits me, no?"
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    Rosa nodded eagerly. "I will!"
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    "Hello fellows! Do not fear, you'll get your sealegs soon enough!" cheered Luka, whose unmistakable optimism had not been crushed by the waves yet. He also wore a pirate costume, but it was made for a small child, and stretched over his arms and legs in awkward places.
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    "Huh," Rosa said. "What if I fed you poison? Is that a wound? Would you be fine? Or would you die?" Suddenly realizing how rude she was being, Rosa stopped herself. "I'm sorry. Where are my manners? Can I help you with anything? Are you headed anywhere?"
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    Rosa pondered this for a moment. "Does it hurt when you get sore? You have big muscles, surely you've been sore before."
  12. echo74
    Rosa stared at him with wide eyes. "I am so sorry. I never imagined I'd meet anyone like you. So... does that mean it would still hurt if I pinched you?"
  13. echo74
    OH IS HE ACHILLES ACHILLES LIKE THE ANKLE HOMIE LIKE THE BRO THAT GOT STABEFIED IN THE ANKLE AND ONLY THEN DIED "Woah," Rosa said. "How come? Are you a god?"
  14. echo74
    wait... he... what? did he just do what i think he just did? Rosa's eye twitched. "What was that?"
  15. echo74
    Rosa's eyes widened. "You're a soldier? Are you injured right now?" She felt at the waist of her dress. "Agh! I don't have it! Never mind. Are you injured?"
  16. echo74
    thanks guys
  17. echo74
    granted, you can only ask for things of monetary value i wish for a candy friendship bracelet (it lowk sounds yummy)
  18. echo74
    *many hugs* *gives all the hugs*
  19. echo74
    "Cool!" she said. "I got lost. I was supposed to be helping my twin brother look for something to eat, but then I saw a spider." She sighed. "I love spiders, but this one was so fast. Anyways. Why are you here?"
  20. echo74
    today i was looking at this thing abt best friends and i was thinking abt my best friend and it made me really sad because i realized that i don't really have one anymore at the beginning of this school year, i thought i had three so the first one is my one friend who i've known for many many years and we've been really close but then one day she just started ignoring me for no reason i had to text her many many times before she would text me back but then eventually we talked stuff out (it wasn't even abt me lol) and i kinda felt like i was walking on eggshells and then i made a huge mistake and i broke a huge commitment i'd made to her and then she wouldn't talk to me or anything for months but now we're talking again but we never really ever made up and it makes me uneasy bc sometimes i'm worried i'll go back to being invisible the second one is my friend who i've known for like two years but we became really close and i love her so much but lately idk i just haven't been feeling super connected to her and idk if that just means that we're drifting apart or if it was something i did idk the third one is my sister and this one makes me the saddest because out of everyone, i've always had my sister to depend on and now she's gone off to college and we were going to call every day but it's become more of a once a week thing and it makes me really sad bc i love her and i know that we've slowly been drifting apart and i don't know what to do and it's really scaring me and i feel like i need to find a new best friend bc all the ones i've had in the past have slowly disappeared from my life and i... i just want a hug
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    so i've been told i grabbed her from a thing i was writing and didn't realize lol but i like her too much to put her away now "I'm Rosa, daughter of Luzia," she said. "It's nice to meet you! Where are you from?"
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    Rosa waved eagerly at whoever. "Hi! What's your name?"
  23. echo74
    Wine?
  24. echo74
    granted, but you have to drop out of school and work 10 hour days i wish for the ability to speak every language
  25. echo74
    granted, the mtn dew and the sub get tricked into thinking your wifi router is your toes and eat that instead so now you can't use your laptop i wish for a pet doggie (WAIT YEA SKIP ME HALY BEAT ME)
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