Cinnamon

Okay update on the Sea shanty thing from yesterday.

I had to turn this:

 Into a sea shanty ... *o*

I wasn't allowed to change or add to the lyrics and after a few hours I came up with something.

My teacher loved it and has asked me to write a short song around it with an extra verse and chorus and harmonies. So, YAY but also AHHHHH I CAN'T EVEN READ SHEET MUSIC.

Its meant to be based on the story of Alcyone and Ceyx and I'm wondering if any of you poemy people could give me some tips?

Also, if you'd like to hear the melody I made for it so far PM me