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    "I am not telling you my name" Arranis grumbles, becoming more and more petulant
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    Arranis glances at the being that landed before him. I think I know you from somewhere. He searches his own memories, then his other clone like beings. Ahh, Hunger Games. "Welcome Redspine" he says "You must have Teleported your spirit somehow through the universe."
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    Benjamin Savage, GMHQ Benjamin taps speed, all the speed he had been saving up for months on a whim, and rushes forward grabbing a weapon from one of the peacekeepers that he passed, and stopping behind them all, watching as his sides bullet's slowly moved towards their aim. He himself takes aim from behind the peacekeepers. Torturing bastards, he thinks to himself before shooting them all in the back, and running back before he got hit by any stray bullets. Dougella Savage, HG Arena Dougella glances at Corin, Wait what? . What had happened so that he had gained control of all his faculties again. She glances at Sharp, Why is everyone trusting him? she however yells out over the void that separates them. "I could try and get us into the mirror dimension" making a confirming glance at Pigment. He nods. "You should have enough investiture from the first oath" @J. Magi @Edema Rue
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    "I know my truths, thank you very much" Arranis grumbles
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    "No that is not it, it is Wildflower" Arranis says stressing the d. INching his sword out of its scabbard a minute amount, enough to wiggle it around.
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    Benjamin Savage, Districts "My daughter is in the arena, we supported her choice, but when they started torturing them, my wife and I decided that one of us would try and find a way to get her out"
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    Benjamin Savage, Districts "Oooohk" Benjamin says looking at her eating the sandwich and heading for the door. "I think I will go wait somewhere else"
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    "I..um...am Wilflower" Arranis says not wanting to give his name in case he had gotten into trouble her before. When you travel the multiverse the worlds all seem the blend together.
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    Benjamin Savage, Districts Benjamin looks at the girl, sorry young woman that sat opposite him. "I am here to help with the overthrow" he says proudly. Please don't be the wrong place. "I think it is time for someone else to take control, or another group. Additionally I want to save my daughter that went into the games. Although it was ok, when they started torturing them in the arena, that is when everything changed"
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    Benjamin Savage, Districts Benjamin glances at the scout. "Do you not recognise me as part of the house" he says haughtily. Trying to sound more noble, by making his voice more nasally while he was at it. He bursts out laughing however ruining the effect. "My name is Benjamin Savage, I am here to help take down the Capitol, and to save my daughter from the arena"
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    "How do we know this is not a trap?" Arranis yells out. His swords still out by his sides, and he breathes out the air in front of him crystallising from the sheer investiture that was present.
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    So I was reading a book recently, and wanted to make an RP, so here is an idea. It is a tournament styled RP where everyone is a thief, and has to try and complete tasks. So is anyone interested?
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    Benjamin Savage, Districts Benjamin walks around the compound where the house member, was talking with some villagers, that were related to a tribute in the arena. His sandy hair blew back from his face by an erratic wind. His gaze settles into the distance, seeing something, but nothing at the same time. I wonder how she is going in there. His last views of his daughter had been her going through the final, Change.. as some called it. He walks towards the village tapping a bit of speed, to get him there faster. Waiting for the chance to strike towards the Capitol, who are rumoured to have pushed some tributes into the arena, but more importantly had been torturing the ones there at the moment. Yes this was willing sacrifices, but they did not have to torture them. Please be safe, we are coming for you..
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    I agree
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    I wrote two iterations of my books prologue today. After finally starting it. Both of the attempts wanted to make me scream, something was just off about the way I wrote and the length of the prologue.

     

    Any tips?

    1. Through The Living Glass

      Through The Living Glass

      ...no but here's some rep

      Spoiler

      I'm definitely not a writer lol

       

    2. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      Hmm…

      For me, it usually helps to just move on anyway. Then as you feel the shape of the story better you can rewrite it from there?

    3. Scars of Hathsin

      Scars of Hathsin

      Sounds ok, thanks for the advice

       

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    Arranis grins, and rushes forward on investiture enhanced legs. Sprinting into the chaos, swords out to the side, sweeping up guards, and healing from wounds there weapons have on him
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    Arranis spins his swords as they form out of mist, his shardblade, a thin tapered thing, and his blade that morphed and changed, and brought with it strong lumps under his skin which moved, looking like they were trying to break through the surface. Breathing in the heavily invested air, he starts glowing like a bonfire. "Fight I say" Arranis says grinning at them
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    I recommended a friend, than recommended mistborn, gave them my book, and they read it
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    I will share, offer, and proffer, and bring the world the glory of the people’s, places, and planets of the man, the myth, the legend, Brandon Sanderson, for the benifit of humankind, and the benefit of those things to be brought into the world. Are these words accepted: 7 points for me!!
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    Welcome to the Shard! If you had to live in a fantasy book, which one would it be?
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    Ah ok. That is a very good reason.
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    Do you have a google doc or something for it? @Spark of Hope
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    If you need any help with set up I would be able to help @Spark of Hope
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    Dougella, HG Arena Dougella watches as the bits of cloth and other matter disappear, in an explosion into the other realm that had been shown to her. She laughs nervously, her mind awash with heady adrenaline and something else. It's called investiture, you can consume it through a metaphorical breath. The little being of ink says on her shoulder. Like Breaths used for awakening? Similar. She sheaths the sword that lay forgotten in her hand, and as she does so, notices the glowing mist coming from her skin. Just another side effect, it will go soon. The little being says. "What is your name?" Dougella asks putting her hand up to her shoulder to give him a stable platform. Pigment, HG Arena Pigment stands onto it, shifting his size as he does so, to appear a bit clearer to her. "The name is Pigment" he says looking around at the surroundings. Looks rather different to the Cognitive he muses to himself, taking note of both the people, and objects. He points to Corin. "That is the guy that is asking for bets right?" Dougella nods at him. "Who do you think will win?" Dougella, HG Arena Dougella looks at the thing that called itself Pigment in her palm. Who do I think will win? I don't know She glances at Corin again, noting the indifference in his gaze, and a small amount of pain that was locked behind the stony facade. What are they doing to you? She counts the bets that were made in her head, Mare is down by a bet. She yells across the arena. "I go for Mare" hoping to make the fight more even. '' She looks across the chasm, at the platform which Sharp was on she watches as he seems to contend with mental enemies. What is happening to him. "He is in the process of changing, just like you" Pigment informs her from his resting place in her outstretched hand. She grins, "Are then any more of you?" she asks towards Pigment "Yes" he smiles @J. Magi @Edema Rue
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