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  1. Flaming Coinshot

    For my book, should I post a chapter at a time? It's not very good in my opinion, so it's really up to y'all. If I post on a weekly basis, I can have my first chapter out today but you'll have to wait around a week for each chapter. Alternatively, I can write say, a quarter of the book and then post that.

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      Flaming Coinshot

      Alright, here's the link: 

       

    3. Mystic Syn

      Mystic Syn

      Nice, I'll read it in a bit.

      You want feedback or you good?

    4. Flaming Coinshot

      Flaming Coinshot

      Feedback please! 

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    "So, where are the rooms? And is there any chance that mine can be slightly more spartan?"
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    Elduver slowly steps into the grass, ready to jump out if anything goes wrong. He put his rhino away and the lion is right behind him, teeth bared.
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    "Huh. That's weird." He says something to the lion, and it starts breathing fire at a patch of grass. "Don't worry, I'll put it out." Motioning to a bucket of water.
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    "Huh." ELduver stares at it for a moment and then summons a giant rhino. He's speaking some strange languge to it while pointing at the wall, and then the rhino charges straight into it. As it's going, Elduver says "I doubt that's gonna work."
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    "Okay. What's up first?"
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    "I didn't expect to you. I just wanted a place to stay and set up camp. Can I do that here? And I might be able to help your rebellion."
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    "They can't sweep the entire world. I'm planning just to hang out here for a little bit until I can find em." His face darkens "I have a score to settle."
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    "Eh. You get used to it. More weird seeing this much water used on decorations.
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    "Thanks. There's plenty more where that came from. Do you want one? I can get pretty much any animal, mythical or not.
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    Elduvar chuckled, then put grabbed a little metal square from his backpack and threw it down. It turned into a table, and Elduvar dumped his backpack's contents on the table. Inside was a bunch of junk and scrap heaps, as well as a couple of peculiar cubes. He grabbed something out of his pocket, threw it down, and it became a large mechanical lion. He sorted through his junk while absentmindedly petting the lion.
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    "Hello, m'lady" He said, taking the hand and kissing it.
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    Denounced as a Heretic by the Church of Good Pizza.
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    "Huh. Gardens? I haven't seen one of anything but weeds in" He starts muttering under his breath and counting fingers "Four years!"
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    "Not bad. Is everything here so... fancy?"
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    "Sup!"
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    "Yea. M'names John Torves. How ya doin?"
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    "Hi people."
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    Hi people.
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    Another XKCD fan! And KOTLC! And Smash!
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    First of all, "throw". Second of all, I throw my explosive pineapple at you.
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