Mystic Syn

My comment aged like milk. There’s a bunch of things wrong with mine, but alright.

Long story short: Remodeling the house and the Wifi decided to take a very long vacation‚ so here we are. I’m tired as heck. Day 19: Loop

ತ_ತ So, this is what my medicine tastes like. I’m not sure if I like it. Thanks for the feedback, though. I know my over-complicating self loves to over-explain things when they shouldn’t be over-explained, but it always slips my mind whenever I’m going through the editing/drafting phase. It’s something I’ll work on, thanks. This is actually feedback I can use, unlike some others from real life friends that I know are being really nice to me lol.

When it comes to anything that we put a piece of ourselves in, we only see the flaws and not the things that people say that makes it great. After we have worked on it for who knows how long, we can only see the shortcomings and not the good things.

I mean, I’ve been told that she isn’t the worst character in the film; in fact, she is the one that is the most like the character in the show. That doesn’t mean she was a carbon copy, but was most like the character in the show than in the movie. Also, fun fact: The actress for Yue in the movie dunno her name, so don’t ask me liked to play in the Avatar universe, basically kinda what happened with the whole Luna Lovegood actress. Anyways, she actually play Asami Sato in Legend of Korra.

“Wait, Syn is actually sending her Inktober earlier than usual for once?” Yes. Life stopped beating me up for today to let me breathe and just do whatever. Day 18: Moon

Bold of you to assume that my piece wasn’t the worst it’s definitely down there.

I liked them all, in their own ways, but okay.

It sounded like you knew what you were doing, is what I’m getting at >.>

Ima just give my general thoughts about this just like last time, because no one can stop me >:] “Mistborn: The Final Empire - Trailer”: I love how easy you made it to have me visualize the scene! Like, as soon as I started to read, the trailer you wanted me to see came up and I could even hear some sort of score in the background. I guess the only thing holding you back is having actors to do this haha. I’m kidding, of course, but you did a wonderful job with this and it would be so amazing if, and maybe when, they make the Mistborn movies or TV show that they use that script/idea. “An Act of Dying Justice”: *cough* this one was actually written by yours truly, and I don’t wanna go through it, because I know I’ll just bring it down, so I’ll refrain. is it good? eh. depends on your point of view. should you vote for it? i don’t care. we ain’t winning anything from this, so it’s literally just something I wanna share and see if people like what I do *cough* “The Guide”: That was some deep crap, person who wrote this. I’ve always loved to play with the concept of a mortal meeting the embodiment of Death and what their reaction would be, and I can see that you do think about it in a deeper way than most authors I have read that have made millions off their books. I loved how you didn’t want to have the encounter long, because you knew that it didn’t need to be long and the fact that we had a word/page limit. It’s a really good piece of writing, hitting as hard as it needs to, making the reader think about what they’re reading. “Diagonal”: First of all, I applaud you for the creative names! I always love a good name that’s different and can help me remember what character it is, besides having ten thousand Johns from different series. I also love the creative take with it, person who wrote this! It does have me questioning and kind of wanting more; although, I know how hard it can be to draft and write and all that crap. You did a great job explaining in the dialogue. Very well done, my good human. “Clink”: It’s short, but it does have me wanting more and asking questions––in a good way, mind you. Like what happens when Brando Sando does/says anything about the Cosmere. I feel like the reader can put themselves into that character’s shoes, especially after you’ve written it in the first person, the human that wrote this. I feel like they can connect themselves to the character. This might be just a me thing and how I’m viewing it, but I think it’s very interesting how many different ways people can read this and perhaps relate to it. “The Fabric of Reality Itself”: I love myself some worldbuilding, because it gives me a sneak peek into the author’s mind for a few paragraphs and what they’re imagining. I dunno if you were going for that, but I liked it very much. You also made it very easy for me to visualize what’s going on! You gave just enough, not too much or little, for me as a reader to visualize what’s going on. Also, yes, I will mention the amazingly creative names you gave us, and I love them! I also can tell the research you’ve done for this, and I have respect for you, because I know some people that would just fly by the seat of their pants––aka, me when I first started to write. In short, it’s a really good piece. “Story?”: Ahhhh, I like how you were talking to the reader themselves, asking them what they’re looking for in their Story, whether to write or to read. You asked simple questions, but that what makes it amazing. It may be fun to write something complicated or something that really makes you think, but there is beauty in simplicity. You realized this, whether you know it or not, and you utilized this to the fullest, giving the most wonderful advice that some people might think are no brainers, but they never take it for granted and act on them. “Submission #8”: I literally thought as I started to read: “Ooh, something spooky?” Don’t take it the wrong way lol, it’s meant with good intent. You explained everything at the right pace that wasn’t too slow I wanted to claw my eyes out or too fast that I had to read it fifty times to figure out what the frip frap you were trying to tell me. You have a great grasp of timing and how to work with it, and I have so much respect for you, because that crap slips me up at times, as you can see with any of the writing I make over the years and whatnot. Also liked the shameless advertising of D&D t’was a joke, but I did enjoy it lol. “The Reality of Expectations”: Again, creative namessss I swear, it’s like my weakness or something lol. I also love the world you’re setting it in, even though I personally don’t know what it is and how it overall works in the grand scheme of your writing. The concept is amazing and very well-written and organically woven into the story you’re trying to tell. Organically weaving concepts and ideas into a story is difficult, because you don’t know how the reader is going to react to what you have written. Overall, I love how you wrote it, the concepts, and basically everything about it. “Wait For It”: Short, but still hits hard and makes you think about life and all that. I do like how you still made me, as the reader, raise questions to myself, despite there being very few words. You know, whether you accept it or not, how to make things hit hard with just a few words. That is an amazing talent to have, and I hope that you understand and use that in your life, even if you think you don’t need it.

Yeah, this one is coming in late, but shush. Life gotta be beating me up at times. Day 17: Collide

This one’s coming in late because… well, I’ve been busy trying not to die of allergies and the headaches associated with them. Day 16: Compass

I swear, today was one of the calmest days I’ve had in the past week, but I know that tomorrow will just slap me in the face. Day 15: Helmet

still dunno what day/time it is Day 14: Tick

Day 13: Roof

I dunno if it’s just me, but I can’t see the pics :/

Today was crazy, and frickn’ tiring. In other words, I made something last minute with the sparse ideas I had. Day 12: Stuck

Ah, we’re still doing this and somehow people are still paying attention. Day 11: Sour

Thanks for the clarification! It will take some time for me to write up something since I draft stuff and have school on top of that, and I’ve been working on a different piece of writing, so best of luck to y’all and maybe you’ll get something from me~

that’s a mood, tho

Or maybe a page limit. Whatever strikes anyone’s fancy I am known to go on forever so… •3•

And we’re back. About 21 more days of me posting random art :)) Day 10: Pick

We’re back again with another challenge video Inktober attempt! Day 9: Pressure

I’m back again, except posting this later than when I usually do. To be fair, I was busy a good part of the day :pp Anyways, welcome to Day 8 of Inktober! Day 8: Watch