Aeoryi
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Why does everyone else have brilliant ideas?
Okay to be fair I sorta do but still I can't find the momentum for this and such.
King's folly - The antagonist is not there. I was considering having Desolation, but he just does not fit.
So I was thinking about having something with the Ethercosm go on or that- but if nothing else, I might simply write the Prose king's folly.
Fenrin's arc is incomplete, so I was thinking about making the king's folly actually split between pisces and Fenrin rather than Pisces/Fenrin/Nymphis. Nymphis works much better as a standalone character for a standalone story.
but it needs more help. it just isn't right.
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Aww, Aeo. Comparing your writing will never make it better. You write beautifully (I realize i don’t usually respond, but I read a lot of King’s Folly), and your ideas have potential. They aren’t perfect, but no writing is, and looking at what others write and wishing you could do that won’t change it. Don’t give up on things because they aren’t polished yet.
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