Channelknight Fadran

Finished reading through Act II of the Iconar Collective. A strange phenomena has occured: on the Act I doc I left 83 comments/suggestions, but on the Act II doc (which I think is objectively better) I left 270.

I... think the reason for this is that with Act I, I could very well just go through entire sections and leave a single comment that says "this sucks - change it." With Act II, the pacing and writing itself was decent enough that I was only finding issues with smaller sections, and thus noticing more fine details.

Anyway, we'll see what happens with Act III. I'm actually looking forward to it - it's my most recent works of writing, and therefore my best. It'll be fun reading over it, and perhaps enlightening to find how I can make it even better.