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  1. Lunamor
    And covered in sprinkles.
  2. Lunamor
    He was provided with a huge plate of coconut fried shrimp.
  3. Lunamor
    How?!
  4. Lunamor
    “But randomness!” Luna interjected.
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    “... ... ... ...roar.”
  6. Lunamor
    “... ... ... ...yay. Imma bear.”
  7. Lunamor
    Unless it doesn’t.
  8. Lunamor
    “... ... ... ...yes?”
  9. Lunamor
    A dramatically dramatic tornado began somewhere over the Pacific, hurtling towards the shore. On its way over, it swept up thousands upon thousands of sharks, spinning them around and around until the ‘nado was bright green with shark barf. Eventually it hit land, passing right over the ninjas and sending them straight into the mouths of the sharks. Eventually it hit the Atlantic and disappeared, the only sign of its passing a green splattered shark tooth that had been dropped somewhere in Utah.
  10. Lunamor
    Luna began the insanely complicated sharknado summoning dance, with extra explosions and super cool theme music.
  11. Lunamor
    ... ... ... ...what are your secret plans?
  12. Lunamor
    Luna gave up on attempting to narrate a coherent story and declared war on the ninjas, running over to attack the ones dog piling Truthless.
  13. Lunamor
    “I’m actually a ghost, now. It’s pretty nice, if a bit boring.”
  14. Lunamor
    It was pretty impossible. Edit: Ninja’d
  15. Lunamor
    And his name was Butt Venture.
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    Yay! Thanks for asking!
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    Hello, Little Bear! Hmm... bow tie, if that counts. Water. I would run away from it and become a scavenger, like that one girl. What was it she was called? The Fox? Fish tail, the other option sounds like nightmare fuel.
  18. Lunamor
    “Hello, Little Bear.”
  19. Lunamor
    Where they had gained sentience to become the greatest buddy cop duo ever.
  20. Lunamor
    Submitting The Girl Who Looked Up and Ben from TKND!
  21. Lunamor
    To destroy the worlddddddd!!!
  22. Lunamor
    Tom?
  23. Lunamor
    *Dumbledore shakes his head in disappointment* Edit: 16 hours?! Come on people! We must post!!!
  24. Lunamor
    I read the first chapter, and here is what I liked and what could use improvement: Things to improve: - A lot of sentences could use commas to help them flow better and add some variety. - The narrator was a bit confusing, as it seemed to be constantly switching from the blind man to someone who can see. - There were a few typos towards the end. - I was a bit confused as to what was happening- was the battle metaphorical or something else? This one could just be my fault, though. Liked: - I really liked the action at the end. - I liked how you wrote things where the nurse and doctor just seemed a little off, like they weren’t quite human. - The imagery was a lot more spread out while retaining the intense detail, which was really nice.
  25. Lunamor
    Now I have the image of the Chick-fil-a cow as a dragon trying to get people to eat more beef stuck in my head
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