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Working on a short story in my english class, would like some thoughts. Here's my incredibly rough outline copied from my google doc. I have a lot more details in my notebook, I just haven't typed them up yet =P
I could give y'all some context and stuff, but I think I'll just post the timeline and see what y'all think.
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Timeline:
1922- William Wright Born
1934- Blake Fulton Born1935- Jane Wright Born
1950- Jane killed at age 15
1954- John Wright Born
1960- Second Kill
1960- William confronts Fulton, accusing him of both murders. They fight, William shoots Fulton in the leg.1961- William goes to jail for attempted murder.
1976- William dies in prison at age 54
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2015- Fulton caught at age 81 by John.
Characters:
Blake Fulton:Serial Killer, the focus of the story.
Jane Wright:
First victim. Younger sister of William.William Wright:
Older brother of Jane, goes to prison for attempting to kill Fulton.John Wright
Son of William, becomes a detective to avenge his father, eventually catches Fulton.
