Well on the bright side the writing proved much better which relieves me immensely. The separation you noticed is intentional with what I have planned you are not supposed to like him anytime soon. That he acts the way he does is purposeful. His is a character whose growth is meant to come over many volumes. Right now he is is in impossibly bad shape. Though the key here to give away a little are those wonderful glasses of his. In terms of genre this is my experimental surrealistic piece. That is why it comes off as it does. The dog and everything else well it may have happened or maybe not. You tell me. I hope that I can keep you on to read more.