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2nd part page 457 bees instead of be's a city.

The last line of page 431 it says that Teft is mossing an evening, instead of missing. Never mind...

page 414 "please send that it isn't so," Renarin whispered I think this was supposed to be say instead of send.

Cultivation doesn't care? How would that even be guessed. Isn't Cultivation spren, like Cryptics, the ones being proactive; unlike honor spren, we only have Syl. The stormfather is holding a lot of his children back. While, the nightwatcher is working on lift, and who knows who else. The Cryptics guided Shallan to Jasnah. So, Cultivation has been silent, or is it because it is too early to introduce the divine being, who probably can't directly interfere against the one who already killed honor.

I don't disagree with you, but I am pretty sure the spear refers to Kalladin (his preferred weapon of choice) Since I am sure Kalladin will be essential to victory and most probably uniting light and dark eyes. Who will need to stand united during the desolation.

I am rather curious on what Syl meant about using dangerous amounts of stormlight - was it dangerous for the Heralds. That may take a while to find out though. And with the way the Heralds betrayed the Oathpact - not that I really blame them. I would not reaĺly expect her to find the blade reverent - with it having belonged to someone who broke their oaths and many other reasons that we know nothing about.

I think anywhere that they do not believe in a ruling class because of eye color - since my eyes are brown. But, probably the Pure Lake would be nice and relaxing.

I don't think that the Spren are afraid of people wielding honor blades but were more worried about how much influence Odium had over him. That is what makes him truly dangerous.

Okay, this is my first post on the site but, I noticed something very important missing from either side. I may have just overlooked it but nobody seems to have mentioned; Kaladin did kill her beloved brother, she had committed both matricide and patricide. While it may not affect the problems she will eventually have with him, it most likely will. Also, while I have read many things against Shallan having feelings for Kaladin, it is there, but only the very beginning, she is very intrigued by his intensity; his passion. Which I will say is not sexual tension or physical attraction like she felt when first seeing Adolin. I do not think that right now she is in love with either but infatuated with both; without realizing her infatuation towards Kaladin. Also, people are saying that they do not like the idea of a love triangle, but it does not necessarily mean there will be one, there are many ways to resolve a conflict while writing.