I really would like feedback on this, because I don't have an intuitive understanding on what is good sometimes in books.
"Vistier could feel the land's pulse."
The idea I'm working with is an elementist world where after lots of training and hard work, the element becomes another sense to them, with some type of Life God that isn't good for the people, who actually is good for hem but they don't realize it. Kind of like TLR but different.
Edit: On a different note, if anyone gets one of their books published, I would like to know because most of them sound interesting.