The Overlady Reads Edgedancer!

These are my favorite things!

I do have ten nitpicks, though:

1. Neither the shardfork nor the Lie of the Tenth Pancake were mentioned.
2. Not all orders have exactly five oaths. Lightweavers explicitly have an undefined number that is usually greater than five, depending on how much therapy they need.
3. Shallan was about 11 when she killed her mother. It happened within months of the killing of Gavilar (possibly the same day, but unlikely).
4. You never mentioned the tenth pancake.
5. It was known when Edgedancer came out that both Ym and the Stump were Truthwatchers, because they both had progression and neither were Edgedancers.
6. The way that Lift figured out that Nin-son-God wouldn't kill her if she was pardoned is that he punished his henchmen for stabbing Gawx without a warrant.
7. YOU NEVER MENTIONED THE TENTH PANCAKE!
8. Wyndle almost explicitly says that Lift's boon was actually granted by Cultivation herself, not by the Nightwatcher. As far as we know, the Nightwatcher cannot on her own grant boons that are different from what the person asked for, though if she is incapable of granting what the wisher asks she will try to suggest a different boon unless Cultivation steps in.
9. We also learn that Lift has an uncanny ability to pick up slang and new language, which may or may not be related to her powers (the fact that it is pointed out to the reader in-character implies that it is important).
10. There is no tenth nitpick. It is actually a metaphor for the incompleteness of true pedantry.

Is this the official recipe for one of the pancakes?