Rate my composition: axehound

[Lesser spren]

Give me some constructive criticism on my piece.

[ProfetessaOscura she/her]

This is amazing!  The upper "arm" of his front legs could be longer.  This could make that elbow shape with the forearm, just like the back legs, but keep the forearm reasonably long and the claws smaller/jointed, you have a good thing going with that part of the design..  It'll let the front legs be more versatile and serve more as spider's front legs, or crabs' claws.  

This is fantastic, all around; axehounds are tricky to draw; I constantly reference Shallan's sketches.

[Lesser spren]

On 6/9/2021 at 1:33 PM, ProfetessaOscura said:

This is amazing!  The upper "arm" of his front legs could be longer.  This could make that elbow shape with the forearm, just like the back legs, but keep the forearm reasonably long and the claws smaller/jointed, you have a good thing going with that part of the design..  It'll let the front legs be more versatile and serve more as spider's front legs, or crabs' claws.  

This is fantastic, all around; axehounds are tricky to draw; I constantly reference Shallan's sketches.

How's this?

[ProfetessaOscura she/her]

On 6/18/2021 at 0:22 PM, Lesser spren said:

How's this?

Sorry for the very late reply; it looks amazing!