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26 minutes ago, Negative_Null said:

The other party reaches the edges of the city and Vale stops, breathing hard. 

"We didn't lose anyone, did we? We're almost out of the range of our first portal."

"Let's hurry," Vapor says. "I don't know how long Fadran can hold up Winter."

Posted (edited)
1 hour ago, Emi said:

He is my Pokemon. You can’t eat him.

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Why do I feel like I'm being taken advantage of?

Fish began compounding cadmium. 

Edited by I Used To Be A Fish
Better punctuation
Posted
1 hour ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

"I didn't... I didn't let her! I didn't have a chance to save her!"

Jared cursed. "Where did this... Winter... take her?"

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Fish flopped out of the pool. Idiot humans. He spit out a coin onto the ground, and shot into the sky. Landing on Taln's head. And began gnawing on his ear.

@Bearer of all agonies

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Is it ok to be a crazy overpowered fish?

This is free form so...

 

Edited by I Used To Be A Fish
Me Being Stoopid
Posted
20 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

Jared cursed. "Where did this... Winter... take her?"

"Some sort of...mindscape? I don't really know." Queen responds sadly, stepping up next to Fadran.

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“Ah! Ugh! Get it off me! Gross.” Taln, unsuccessfully, tried to swat fish off him. “Get off!” He said, trying, again, to swat fish off of him. He summoned his Honorblade, and chopped at fish, but in doing so, he missed and cut off his ear. “Ahhhhhhh! I can’t feel my ear! Help!” With his shaking, he finally managed to shake fish off of him, but then, fish landed on Queen. 
@I Used To Be A Fish
@DramaQueen

Edited by Bearer of all agonies
Posted (edited)
2 minutes ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

“Ah! Ugh! Get it off me! Gross.” Taln, unsuccessfully, tried to swat fish off him. “Get off!” He said, trying, again, to swat fish off of him. He summoned his Honorblade, and chopped at fish, but in doing so, he missed and cut off his ear. “Ahhhhhhh! I can’t feel my ear! Help!” With his shaking, he finally managed to shake fish off of him, but then, fish landed on Queen. 
@DramaQueen

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Fish can control his own flops, so I suggest that that should be considered a godmod.

Queen calmly reached up, plucked the fish off of her head, and tossed it into a nearby body of water.

Edited by DramaQueen
Better word choice.
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Taln, who was still hungry, look longingly at fish wondering if it was worth the risk to try and catch him for dinner. He decided, no, it wasn’t worth the risk. So he looked elsewhere for food. 

Posted
10 hours ago, Emi said:

Yes, I know, I’m bad at English. Just tell me: does normal person who learned one language for 10 years do that much mistakes?! :(

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Have you seen some of the other posts I've corrected? Yes, they do.

1 hour ago, I Used To Be A Fish said:

Fish, began compounding cadmium. 

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*EXTRA COMMA ALERT*

 

Posted
5 minutes ago, Condensation said:
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*EXTRA COMMA ALERT*

 

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*Connie, runs away, screaming*

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That hurt me to write.

 

 

Posted
32 minutes ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

“Ah! Ugh! Get it off me! Gross.” Taln, unsuccessfully, tried to swat fish off him. “Get off!” He said, trying, again, to swat fish off of him. He summoned his Honorblade, and chopped at fish, but in doing so, he missed and cut off his ear. “Ahhhhhhh! I can’t feel my ear! Help!” With his shaking, he finally managed to shake fish off of him, but then, fish landed on Queen. 

"That is one weird fish."

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