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Posted
1 minute ago, Through The Living Glass said:

I win.

"Acception" is not an actual English word, though I see why you used it. After "rules," you needed a colon, not a semicolon, as you are beginning a list. "Refrain" should not be capitalized. There is no comma needed between "slang words" and "improper grammar." Use "and" instead. "Who" should have been written as "whomever," and your general sentence structure is overall horrendous. Instead, try:

"[r]efrain from using slang and improper grammar. Any corrections should be counted with a point towards whomever made the correction; though wrong corrections should be counted against the person who made the error."

Are you feeling overwhelmed, yet? :)

Ha ha, no, this is about the same amount of corrections that I get.

Posted
Just now, Through The Living Glass said:

Technically, yes. But I wanted to fix the sentence structure. :P

I never said anything about sentence structure!

No point to you!

Posted
2 hours ago, Through The Living Glass said:

It's like sleep but shorter

. . . I mean yeah BUT-

*revives*

YAY!!

Mmmm fair

2 hours ago, Hawks said:

Ahhhhhhhhhh

*idk i wanted to scream*

fair fair fair

Posted (edited)

Anyone else identify with this?

Quote

One “block” from her module—a block being one uninterrupted series of cargo modules—Lara ran into Kell Tainer. The big lieutenant was working out against a combat dummy, a human-shaped object made of materials tough and malleable enough to withstand the fist, foot, elbow, and knee blows Kell was raining upon it. When he saw her watching, he stopped.

“Is that how you get rid of tension?” she asked.

“That’s right.”

“What do you do when you just want to scream?”

He pointed farther down the shaft. “Two blocks down, there’s a powered door to the left. It leads to a cross tunnel. It has lights and gravity until you get to the boundaries marked in yellow, about a hundred meters. Don’t go beyond those boundaries.”

“Thank you.”

He was right. Once the door to that cross tunnel shut behind her, she could feel that she was cut off from the Wraiths, from all contact with people. She was surrounded by the reassuring solidity of stone walls and metal doors.

She screamed, an expulsion of anger and confusion that stripped her throat raw. Her cry echoed down the half-lit corridor and was lost in the distance. She did it again and again, until she had almost no voice left. Almost no bewilderment left. Just tiredness. Then she put her back against the rough stone wall and slid down to sit, her face in her hands.

 

Edited by The Shattered Cosmere
Posted
41 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

YAY YOU'RE ALIVE AGAIN

i'm still nommed right

Nope :D 

Not if I have to be alive :D 

36 minutes ago, The Shattered Cosmere said:

Anyone else identify with this?

 

Mmhmm

I don't scream tho

There's never anywhere someone wouldn't hear

Posted
1 minute ago, Bird Furious said:

Nope :D 

Not if I have to be alive :D 

Mmhmm

I don't scream tho

There's never anywhere someone wouldn't hear

a random forest?

Posted
2 minutes ago, The Shattered Cosmere said:

a random forest?

no forests

just desert

and I'm still afraid someone would hear me

everything's close to residentials

2 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

aw

pwease? 🥺

*sigh* same -_-

no.

Posted

I left my WaT copy in London, Ontario. Also I ONLY buy hardcover. because softcover is stupid

Posted
12 minutes ago, THE DEMON said:

I’ll do it, I’m kind of hungry anyway.

Yes please :)

2 minutes ago, CoderDrag0n8 said:

lol guys guess what? just got Wax and Wayne 4 book box set!image.thumb.jpeg.a11651f6271005f852e553cd44273c19.jpeg

My collection is complete! (All 7 books, 2 short stories, and novella)

OOO nice

*squints*

Is that . . . Arcanum Unbounded? It looks so lonely . . .

1 minute ago, The Shattered Cosmere said:

I left my WaT copy in London, Ontario. Also I ONLY buy hardcover. because softcover is stupid

nothing wrong with floppycover imo :P

Posted
1 minute ago, Through The Living Glass said:

Yes please :)

OOO nice

*squints*

Is that . . . Arcanum Unbounded? It looks so lonely . . .

nothing wrong with floppycover imo :P

Arcunum Unbounded is squished bc the events happen *inbetween* the 2 series (as in some of them are in one, some are in the other)

Posted
7 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

Yes please :)

OOO nice

*squints*

Is that . . . Arcanum Unbounded? It looks so lonely . . .

nothing wrong with floppycover imo :P

*chomps glass*

yea, floppycovers break to easily 

Posted
15 minutes ago, Kaladin Stormcursed said:

There are other ways to say paperback?? Idk why that just blew my mind but I've never heard anyone say anything else

Idk I just made up floppcover 😂

8 minutes ago, THE DEMON said:

*chomps glass*

yea, floppycovers break to easily 

YAY

thanks

*no longer feels left out*

*chills*

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