PallonianFire he/him Posted October 13, 2018 Posted October 13, 2018 I finally got off my butt and got past chapter 1 this week (AoN has been sitting in my files for three years; I started four times over that time and never even got to D'Naa's first POV). I'm glad I did, though, because I'm greatly enjoying this story. THAT SAID...whoo boy, definitely an early, unpolished work. Some of my favorite recurring things: 1) "Hoard" instead of "horde" 2) "Aid" instead of "aide" 3) Great (awkward) use of "maladroit" 4) "Distinctified" instead of "distinguished" 4) But my very favorite: recurring use of "monopolized" where he meant "capitalized" Any other common typos stand out?
Weltall Posted October 15, 2018 Posted October 15, 2018 If so, none have evidently stood out for me such that I'd remember them offhand. But keep an eye out because at one point in the book there will be something that isn't there which stands out as a typo... presumably. xD
PallonianFire he/him Posted October 16, 2018 Author Posted October 16, 2018 3 hours ago, Weltall said: If so, none have evidently stood out for me such that I'd remember them offhand. But keep an eye out because at one point in the book there will be something that isn't there which stands out as a typo... presumably. xD Chapter 28, I assume? Lol
PallonianFire he/him Posted October 17, 2018 Author Posted October 17, 2018 (edited) Yeah, I got to 29 and I had to flip back and make sure I wasn't crazy. I wonder what that's all about... Edited October 17, 2018 by PallonianFire
Neithan Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 “Darro had betrayed his most beloved of bothers” amused me. Pour was used instead of pore several times.
SimonTheKillerEwok Posted February 2, 2020 Posted February 2, 2020 "The Senators and aristocrats are eager to meat their new monarch." 1
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