Cosmere text base RP/ tell our story

[bmcclure7]

Just now, Argenti said:

BAH

Please don't use pings as lists more than like once a day 

 

Sorry 

[Argenti he/him]

1 minute ago, bmcclure7 said:

Sorry 

You're okay, it just gets alot, very quickly.

But anyway. Since we have so many shards, all of whom are combos, we might just want to reduce them down to avatars fighting for control over a planet/system.

 

 

[Mags she/they]

Oh, I keep getting pinged!

Sorry for the confusion, I didn't mean to say I was going to be involved. Sadly I don't have time. Have fun though!

[Hoid Slayer He/Him]

3 minutes ago, Argenti said:

You're okay, it just gets alot, very quickly.

But anyway. Since we have so many shards, all of whom are combos, we might just want to reduce them down to avatars fighting for control over a planet/system.

 

 

Hmm… my Shard isn’t a combo, though. Are we trying to adhere to canon here?

[bmcclure7]

5 minutes ago, Hoid_Slayer said:

Hmm… my Shard isn’t a combo, though. Are we trying to adhere to canon here?

No you’re shard can be a new shard or cannon shard or combination shard 

 

link to the poll

 

Edited March 19, 2025 by bmcclure7

[Tinwatcher I don’t mind]

2 hours ago, bmcclure7 said:

How your making me think of creating a civilization who’s entire ideology is based around metaphorical pancakes 

Lift would hate you 

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

*looks away for one second* WHAT DO YOU MEAN THERE ARE 4 PAGES?

Yes poll

I don't see my pitch, Change on the poll?

Edited March 19, 2025 by CoderDrag0n8

[bmcclure7]

Indulgence and corruption you are the winners 

[Lopens Tenth Cousin he/him]

Mk sweet... I can see a world where corruption and indulgence sort of fight for followers, but by their intent they kind of accidentally work together (I posted this on the other thread whoops)

[bmcclure7]

Ok now let’s move on to the system and your planet . Here is the formate

basic information (distance from the sun, size of the planet, number of moons).

Primare Biom

other Bioms 

comon Flora and Fauna (optional)

[Entr0pic He/him]

18 minutes ago, bmcclure7 said:

Ok now let’s move on to the system and your planet . Here is the formate

basic information (distance from the sun, size of the planet, number of moons).

Primare Biom

other Bioms 

comon Flora and Fauna (optional)

Basic information: it is closer to the sun, to the point that it would be nigh uninhabitable normally. However, corruption and indulgence protect it somewhat, making it hot and humid, but not uninhabitable, just uncomfortable. they also tried to saturate the planet with more water, but they accidentally increased the amount needed. It has one small moon, but it’s not notable. The planet is maybe 1.75 times the size of earth.

primary biome: swamplands. The copious amounts of water they supplied the planet waterlogged the ground in most areas.

other biomes: forests, plains, etc.

common flora and fauna: while i don’t have any good ideas for specific things, i have general patterns. 

1) you know how goldfish can change their sex if need be? Lots of animals can do that here (corruption made them artificially to please his intent)

2) big bugs. Lots of trees and plant life leads to higher oxygen, which leads to bigger insect, arachnids, and crustaceans 

(also, i have a magic system for corruption. Should i share it?)

Edited March 20, 2025 by Entr0pic

[Hoid Slayer He/Him]

7 minutes ago, Entr0pic said:

Basic information: it is closer to the sun, to the point that it would be nigh uninhabitable normally. However, corruption and indulgence protect it somewhat, making it hot and humid, but not uninhabitable, just uncomfortable. they also tried to saturate the planet with more water, but they accidentally increased the amount needed. It has one small moon, but it’s not notable. The planet is maybe 1.75 times the size of earth.

primary biome: swamplands. The copious amounts of water they supplied the planet waterlogged the ground in most areas.

other biomes: forests, plains, etc.

common flora and fauna: while i don’t have any good ideas for specific things, i have general patterns. 

1) you know how goldfish can change their sex if need be? Lots of animals can do that here (corruption made them artificially to please his intent)

2) big bugs. Lots of trees and plant life leads to higher oxygen, which leads to bigger insect, arachnids, and crustaceans 

(also, i have a magic system for corruption. Should i share it?)

Personally, I think you should share the magic system, but maybe @bmcclure7 has a different idea.

[Lopens Tenth Cousin he/him]

There is a solar system containing five planets - three uninhabitable. The shards ended up settling on one closer to the sun, (the 2nd) with a highly pressurized atmosphere with many greenhouse gasses.

Life works based on regular animals being highly Invested (humans are just weak - only gots the brains). The main biome is the drifting islands which are in the higher up portion of the atmosphere and are ever changing. There are some "Permanent isles" that are just the peaks of tall mountains.

Below is the Scorchlands, where nothing lives aside from highly Invested Silicate based life forms that live off of the magma at the surface. The planet is about 1.3 Earth sizes, having just a little bit of extra gravity.

There are 2 moons in orbit around each other, tidally locked and perfectly in sync with one another (one planetary object for each shard)

Most Flora and Fauna float around and are similar to jellyfish in a way, just in the air.

Edited March 20, 2025 by Lopens Tenth Cousin
Flora/Fauna

[Argenti he/him]

12 minutes ago, Entr0pic said:

Basic information: it is closer to the sun, to the point that it would be nigh uninhabitable normally. However, corruption and indulgence protect it somewhat, making it hot and humid, but not uninhabitable, just uncomfortable. they also tried to saturate the planet with more water, but they accidentally increased the amount needed. It has one small moon, but it’s not notable. The planet is maybe 1.75 times the size of earth.

primary biome: swamplands. The copious amounts of water they supplied the planet waterlogged the ground in most areas.

other biomes: forests, plains, etc.

common flora and fauna: while i don’t have any good ideas for specific things, i have general patterns. 

1) you know how goldfish can change their sex if need be? Lots of animals can do that here (corruption made them artificially to please his intent)

2) big bugs. Lots of trees and plant life leads to higher oxygen, which leads to bigger insect, arachnids, and crustaceans 

(also, i have a magic system for corruption. Should i share it?)

Oh yes, I like it. Give me Virulant, Ever-spreading, Ever- dying, life.

 

 

[Entr0pic He/him]

4 minutes ago, Argenti said:

Oh yes, I like it. Give me Virulant, Ever-spreading, Ever- dying, life.

 

 

That’s exactly what i had in mind.

[Argenti he/him]

Just now, Entr0pic said:

That’s exactly what i had in mind.

"That which is not dead can eternal lie, and with strange aeons even death may die." -HP lovecraft

[Through the Living Wrath he/him]

Okokok

for Verity

I was thinking

Truth at any price

A sort of crusade, traveling the cosmere to bring the corruption (hehehe), the lies, of the other shards to an end.

At any price.

Now I gotta deal with GSRP - but then more in depth Worldbuilding is in order.

@bmcclure7

Edited March 20, 2025 by SpiritOfWrath

[bmcclure7]

23 minutes ago, Hoid_Slayer said:

Personally, I think you should share the magic system, but maybe @bmcclure7 has a different idea.

Will work on the magic system later 

[Entr0pic He/him]

Just now, bmcclure7 said:

Will work on the magic system later 

Alright.

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

I have an idea for a planet:

A separate planet cut off from the others

Name: Zion

Basic information: Farthest away from the sun, cold and freezing. Corruption takes main residence with. The humans there all serve corruption. Corruption fastens through them and all they want is change. The 2 main life forms are humans and dragons. There are other beings, but a lot of it is corrupted.

Primary biome: Corrupted wasteland. A freezing biome with a cold dead atmosphere that only corruption's blessed may survive in.

Other biomes: Lemon wastelands. Lemons are so sour that if you eat them, you get transformed into a black hole (Unless you are invested with corrupted investiture). The black holes that are generated are wrapped in corrupted investiture and only suck you in if you touch them. They float around, adding to the yellow lemony vibe. The lemons grow on lemon trees. There are myths of a paradise where the corruption is benevolent. The myths speak of them on the poles.

Common flora and fauna: Idk. 

Magic system idea: A system similar to the Knights Radiant with oaths, but they are more a matter of position. Like, 'I am a shifter of the 6th oath' or something. They would be shapeshifters and would gain powers as they gain oaths. (No there are no 'spren' that regulate the oaths. Corruption it's self has to regulate it.) Corruption has the highest oath possible, and no others can reach that oath level. (Elaborated more on doc)

Edit: To avoid double posting, I'm just editing this. I made a google doc. @bmcclure7 comment I'm the owner, and I'll give you editing access. Link (Also now supports additions of suggestions, new and future! I will try and add everything I miss here, tell me if you notice anything different.!)

Edited March 20, 2025 by CoderDrag0n8

[Entr0pic He/him]

8 minutes ago, CoderDrag0n8 said:

I have an idea for a planet:

A separate planet cut off from the others

Basic information: Farthest away from the sun, cold and freezing. Corruption takes main residence with. The humans there all serve corruption. Corruption fastens through them and all they want is change. The 2 main life forms are humans and dragons. There are other beings, but a lot of it is corrupted.

primary biome: Corrupted wasteland. A freezing biome with a cold dead atmosphere that only corrution's blessed may survive in.

other biomes: None others. There are myths of a paradise where the corruption is benevolent.

common flora and fauna: Idk. 

Magic system idea: A system similar to the Knights Radiant with oaths, but they are more a matter of position. Like, 'I am a shifter of the 6th oath' or something. They would be shapeshifters and would gain powers as they gain oaths. (No there are no 'spren' that regulate the oaths. Corruption it's self has to regulate it.) Corruption has the highest oath possible, and no others can reach that oath level.

Edit: To avoid double posting, I'm just editing this. I made a google doc. @bmcclure7 comment I'm the owner, and I'll give you editing access. Link

That’s similar to the magic system i came up with.

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

1 minute ago, Entr0pic said:

That’s similar to the magic system i came up with.

It is? Sorry, which comment did you propose it? Sorry if I copied yours.

[Entr0pic He/him]

Just now, CoderDrag0n8 said:

It is? Sorry, which comment did you propose it? Sorry if I copied yours.

No, @bmcclure7 implied that we should save the magic system stuff for later, so i held off from saying it. You needn’t apologize

[CoderDrag0n8 He/They]

Just now, Entr0pic said:

No, @bmcclure7 implied that we should save the magic system stuff for later, so i held off from saying it. You needn’t apologize

Alright. Ooh! I could make a doc where we can put future (and current) suggestions so we don't forget! that way this never ever ever happens again!

[Entr0pic He/him]

Just now, CoderDrag0n8 said:

Alright. Ooh! I could make a doc where we can put future (and current) suggestions so we don't forget! that way this never ever ever happens again!

Ye, that’d be good.