phantasmagorically she/her Posted June 23, 2015 Posted June 23, 2015 Shallan looked around for a moment, suddenly realizing that Wit seemed to have completely disappeared.
emilylime she/her Posted June 23, 2015 Posted June 23, 2015 Having already put Wit from his mind, Kaladin continued trying to revive Adolin, to no avail. 1
Adamir he/him Posted July 3, 2015 Posted July 3, 2015 "The Void Bond is incomplete," a voice whispered.
Adamir he/him Posted July 31, 2015 Posted July 31, 2015 (edited) One month later - has the forum forgotten about this thread? Well, I will not let it die. I will keep pointlessly bumping it every 0.5 seconds until other people finish my fanfiction for me instead of me putting in any effort; and I will put in as much effort as it takes to get other people to do my effort for me. "Stormlight..." the voice whispered, "stormlight..." Edited July 31, 2015 by Adamir 1
Guest Posted August 2, 2015 Posted August 2, 2015 One month later - has the forum forgotten about this thread? Well, I will not let it die. I will keep pointlessly bumping it every 0.5 seconds until other people finish my fanfiction for me instead of me putting in any effort; and I will put in as much effort as it takes to get other people to do my effort for me. "Stormlight..." the voice whispered, "stormlight..." Alright. I truly wish to help you... so here is my best trial... Kaladin raised his head dumbfounded, had he truly heard an unknown voice whispering and why did it speak of stormlight? He had already tried stormlight, it had not work.
Mailliw73 he/him Posted August 3, 2015 Posted August 3, 2015 Not sure what's happened, but here I go. Adolin drifted into the realm of the dead, but he heard that storming bridgeman whispering.
Guest Posted August 3, 2015 Posted August 3, 2015 (edited) Not sure what's happened, but here I go. Adolin drifted into the realm of the dead, but he heard that storming bridgeman whispering. "I am sleeping," he muttered to himself... Couldn't the annoying man leave him alone while he was sleeping, especially when he was about to go swim into a river with Sureblood silently grassing near by? Edited August 4, 2015 by maxal
Adamir he/him Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 "No," the voice of the Almighty rang out, "I've created a plothole to do with stormlight which cannot be adequately summarized in a single sentence without becoming more of a run-on sentence than it already is!" 2
Guest Posted August 12, 2015 Posted August 12, 2015 In the mean time, Adolin still refused to move much less open his eyes while Kaladin was at lost to comprehend why: "What did the voice meant by the Void Bond is incomplete?"
Guest Posted August 12, 2015 Posted August 12, 2015 Shallan exchanged a worried look with Kaladin before exclaiming, "STORMLIGHT, get it away from him, all of it."
Adamir he/him Posted August 13, 2015 Posted August 13, 2015 A single sphere fell from her sleeve, almost completely dun, the small flicker of Stormlight barely perceivable.
Guest Posted August 13, 2015 Posted August 13, 2015 Alright, time to increase to more sentences or this is never getting done. Shallan stared at the sphere puzzled: "I didn't draw in any stormlight...". She looked down to her young betrothed, both eyes closed as if he were sleeping. She gently brushed her fingers on his cold cheek, "Oh storms Kaladin, he did it, he draw into my spheres..."
Grey Knight Posted September 15, 2015 Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) He punched Kaladin in the face. "Why... couldn't... you let me sleep?" NECROMANCY! Edited September 15, 2015 by The Potato 1
The Honor Spren she/her Posted October 11, 2015 Posted October 11, 2015 I don't even know where to go with this . . . I'll try. We can have multiple sentences now right? The wild light faded out of Adolin's eyes as he started trembling. "Shallan? Bridge Boy? What's happening?" 1
Guest Posted October 11, 2015 Posted October 11, 2015 OK let's try this again... First thing that pops out of my mind... "Why is there blood on my hands?" He asked in a panicked voice as he shakily raised them. "What happened? Shallan, Bridge Boy, what did I do?"
The Honor Spren she/her Posted October 11, 2015 Posted October 11, 2015 Shallan held him close, but her eyes were wide and panicked. "I don't know," she whispered "I don't know what you did."
Guest Posted October 11, 2015 Posted October 11, 2015 "Bridge Boy?" Adolin then asked to the young guard men kneeling beside him. Kaladin carefully looked passed his shoulder, avoiding eye contact as he blurted out: "You may have said something about Sadeas..." Adolin's face paled as he shifted his glance from his hands to his companions to his hands back and forth. "I..."
Maple Duke he/him Posted January 2, 2016 Posted January 2, 2016 (edited) Well I for one actually want to see how this might end. let's keep it going. "I...I Don't know." he shook his head, and seemed rather puzzled "where am I? the last thing I remember was..." Edited January 2, 2016 by Maple Duke
Stormgate he/him Posted January 2, 2016 Posted January 2, 2016 Kaladin put his hand on the lighteyes' shoulder. "Stay calm. What did you see? Do you know anything about Voidspren?"
Syzygy Posted March 27, 2016 Posted March 27, 2016 "Voidspren..." Adolin's eyes became distant, as if trying to remember a fading dream.
Eccentric Hero he/him Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 His eyes refocused. "No idea; I never heard of such a thing... but I was having a great sleep and I almost reached it." "Reached what?" "What?" "What?" 2
Seonid he/him Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 His eyes refocused. "No idea; I never heard of such a thing... but I was having a great sleep and I almost reached it." "Reached what?" "What?" "What?" Accidental downvote! Can someone fix it?
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