TheStormcrafter

Well, I don´t know either, I´m new here (I created my account like yesterday), though you could DM it to me, if you want.

I’d love to read through it and give some feedback if you’d like.

I tend towards „FEEL“ as it is the much simpler term and I think the dawnshards are like the most primal, most fundamental ideas basically. Though I also saw „EXPERIENCE“ in another thread.

Imagine just saying "no" to one of the most primal and powerful forces in the cosmere.

Where is your AU to be found?

I like the idea of the dawnshards having an order to them. Though I don´t quite agree with the shards you came up with thought the groupings make sense. I think going with a blatant "FEEL" could actually work better for the emotion dawnshard. And I would also rename the fourth one. I also wouldn´t focus so much on them being the names of stages of the cosmere, I´d much more think of it Adonalsium slowly using these in sequence, first commanding the world to be, then for it to change, for it to feel and well ... to have a society I guess? That is the link I see between your last groupings. I guess "RULE" could be the last dawnshard then. I think Ado using "the most primal powers" to channel his power into creating a world would fit nicely. That the dawnshards are not a thing Ado created but a concept Ado used (and then became a thing in Ados creation i guess?).