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Kansas Stormcursed

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  1. Definitely not, I try not to split Cep too much unless it's via Mindscape. We can have them converse in a minute
  2. "One part of me was developing a rebellion against him, and lest that can be resolved somehow he is stuck there. Another part of me was sent outside the Thread, waiting on someone else, who is in turn awaiting Rebus's return. So you see, it's one big tangled mess."
  3. "Quite the opposite. He's been absent for some time now. Which is wonderful for the Thread, but not so wonderful for my own progress."
  4. "Excellent! That's wonderful for you. I'm currently stuck somewhat, Rebus's disappearance has delayed my adventures."
  5. Yes indeed. Especially if you're gonna start talking like Cep
  6. No, but you can take it out entirely and the meaning is much the same
  7. "Nice to meet you again, Sequence!" Cep said. "My travels have been well, thank you. I grow closer to being whole again. How have you been? And what's up with her?" He gestures to Aelinor at the end.
  8. They can, grammatically and as complete sentences. Somemeaning may be lost, but not enough to warrant keeping them together
  9. He gets a sense directing him straight ahead. However, there is a wall right there, the corridor extending out to the sides.
  10. No, there should be a comma there. Even if it's two actions, they're in the form of two separate sentences which as it stands are run-on sentences
  11. YOUR BROTHER created TLT?? Dang
  12. Ok It turns left to a split. He gets a sense that he should maybe check the direction of his destination from this side.
  13. Oh. I meant have Taeidin mark his turns, like chalk on the wall or something It turns left to a split.
  14. Since Sequence is a Narrator, I'm fairly certain that was intended to be the invitation, relying on others to see the text. It turns right to a split. As a suggestion, you might want to mark your spot somehow.
  15. Cep decides to send a version of himself to the party. "Great Elephant and Thread, take me ta safety, take me ta solace. Ah promise no violence and ah promise civility, grant me entrance to Sequence's world."
  16. "No." His face looks grim for a moment, then he forces a smile onto it and walks over to the child. "Hi," he says. "I'm Alym, what's your name?"
  17. "Right." He looks over at the child resembling Nikolas. "Do you think that's his?"
  18. "What do you think we're supposed to do here?" Alym asks.
  19. I am indeed a senior I beeth old Taln. Glass. Mirker. Shatter. Uhh others who've mentioned their age on here.
  20. Short blond or long brown hair, green eyes. Short. Also short. Plus short light brown hair, and brown eyes.
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