RoyalBeeMage

nope full inquisiters are ment to have most of the a-abilities with a few f-abilities. i was thinking of giving a few spikes later in the rp. let me just confirm what abilities you have. a-steel,iron,pewter,bronze. f-iron,gold. anything else that i missed? oh and physical strength. roy walks down the street burning tin. he visits several of the thugs he knows but none are home. he keeps looking.

compleatly removed the log idea. kept the same time system. its based on how long it has been since they left earth. also given the next few parts

vashar resumes burning bronze pewter and copper and starts burning steel to create a protective bubble around myself incase this other mistborn tries anything.

i stop burning metals and follow fane. he leads deeper into the mess of greeness.

granted. it keeps trying to eat you i wish for a dawnshard

working for or against us? yes regardles kelsier looked at cane. "You are drunk, aren't you? i need someone to spy on the nobility. i hear you have several contacts there. think your up to that while acting sober?" meanwhile roy sliped out the room when no one was looking and walked down the stairs to the kitchen. there he grabbed some more tin, spare tinminds and some food. he put all of these into a bag and left the house to find a peuwter thug.

i burned puwter, copper and bronze before getting closer to the sleeping ashstaind person. "who are you. are you from the final empire?"

probably for the best

"any time convinint. we want chaos between the noble houses. if you can try and look like a mistborn that will be even better." kelsier replied. roy heard more knocking on the door so he stood up yet again. he went down stairs and saw some more people for the meeting. "you're late." he said slightly anoyed. "follow me to the meeting."

can you explain the attacking player's side rule? it is referenced but never explained in the rules

"are we all here?" kelsier asked. good lets start. how should we take down the lord ruler. i will be paying you all with the atium we manage to collect from the treshery. any ideas. if you know any twinborn who can be of assistance feel free to invite them to our next meeting. or bring them to me at any time. hint hint. jade could you start stealing funds from the nobility. and karrath can you give any insight about the obligaters?"

i think he will be someone than anyone can rp as alongside there main character. ravenclawjedi42 do you have a ferring ability or just a-gold? roy hears one of his apprentices knock on the door so he stops filling his tinminds and stands up. he heads downstairs and sees 2 people he recognises. "Jade long time no see." he nods to her. "and you must be Karrath. Kelsier mentioned you to me. Please if you will both follow me. I have the comisiend jewellery for you." he leads them both up the stairs to the room with kelsier and the skaa rebel. I step back outside to wait for the last few stragglers to the meeting.

how about this? slightly different style. came up with the idea to base it on logs from the Martian.

its good. its enjoyable in some way. i like the idea of light and fire being used in tools and weapons. i wonder if anyone else in this world has worked out how to create a shield out of light.

i had inteded for bendalloy and the outher new metals as i think that they are fairly cool. lets just say they where descoverd. Roy stepped through the front door into his shop front. one of his apprentices was sitting behind a counter waiting to surve anyone who came past. he speared a quick look around the room at all of the jewellery. roy was a very successful shop owner and a safe house for any team that paid. roy and all his apprentices made all of the jewellery using metal painted wood and a few solid metal things for all the Ferrings. he left the shop front and climbed the stairs to the meeting room. he sat down and saw both Kelsier and a Skaa rebel also sitting on a few chairs opposite him. it was only then that Roy stopped burning tin and stopped super filling the senses of touch and and filling at a lower speed hearing. it was a trick he found to fill tinminds to dampen certain scenes while burning tin allowing for normal hearing and not feeling.

at least you got any. where i am its still what 25-30 celsius

does tempeture affect the the base coat? I've never tried when its cold.

will do my best.

yeah ive slowly made it through most of this topic. your writing skill is amazing. the detail, the emotion and the craft is on point.

i burn tin and look around. the mist seemingly parts allowing me to see the city around me in perfect clarity. i climb down the wall and enter the coppercloud safe house. most of the time the master of such a house would be a coppersmoker but i was proud that i being a tineye owned the best copperhouse in the city. then again most where oblivious that this house was anything different than a normal shop.

so im writing a sci-fi with magic and I've come across a problem. i feel I'm starting a bit to fast. throwing a lot in your face while excluding a lot. any and all advice would be helpful

citidel colours good choice. always worked for Warhammer 40k

Roy looks down at the note in his hand. from the survive himself. i have chosen you to join my mission against the lord ruler the note read. as a tin compounder i accept the role of master scout and lookout of the team.

i agree with everything you said except math and languages. don't you just love being a dislexsic nerd who relies heavily on gramerly.

"what do you mean more like myself?" i ask fane. "who else is here?" i look around and see someone with pale skin and ash stained clothes. i go to investigate and i see that he has a mistcloak on his back.