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    My Jesus is SO COOL!!
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    i love jesus, thrifting, and reading
    i'm an amateur potter, sort of broke, a student, an artist, a child of God, a poet, a choir kid, a lover of nature and a huger of people and trees.
    i'm a bit quirky but its okay because i was made exactly how i was supposed to be made, and i'm learning to love who i am in Christ!
    please feel free to PM me to hear my testimony, ask questions, hear encouragement, or genuinely just talk to me
    (i'm one of those rare people-loving introverts <3)

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  1. I finally wrote a poem again!

    WARNING: It's probably the longest I've ever written.

    Why Can’t We Fix This?

    Spoiler
    I’m a tiny little worm.
    I crawl through the dirt, just living,
    Just doing as I was
    Created to do.
     
    I poke my tiny head
    Out
    Of the dirt.
    I wiggle further,
    Further…
     
    Splat!
    I hit something hard.
    What is it?
    I can’t see it, for,
    I don’t have eyes.
     
    I try to push through it
    To no avail!
    I try to go around it
    But I can’t escape.
    I can’t eat it,
    I can’t get out of it.
     
    I am trapped!
     
    Over the next while,
    It becomes hot.
    Very hot.
    I can feel the sun, and I try
    To squirm away,
    But the sun burns me!
     
    It’s hot, so very hot
    I’m drying out,
    The heat-
     
     
     
     
    I am a squirrel.
    I bounce, too and fro,
    Collecting food and saving
    It away for
    Winter.
     
    My purpose.
     
    I see something on the ground!
    It’s shiny.
    I creep closer, trying to see…
    It smells good!
    I take a small bite of it.
    It’s slippery, crinkly, and doesn’t
    Taste like anything I’ve
    Ever eaten.
     
    A sound comes from
    The hill above me.
    I smell human.
    I bound up the nearest
    Tree,
    Perching where I can see…
     
    The human throws
    Something down the hill.
    Something shiny, roundish,
    Clear- like water, like ice?
     
    The thing hits a rock
    And… shatters?
    Little bits go flying
    Everywhere,
    Then, the human
    Leaves.
     
    I wait for a long time,
    Unmoving.
    Then, I
    Creep
    Down
    The tree,
    Scurry over
    To one of the
    Pieces.
     
    I sniff at it,
    But it doesn’t move.
    It’s so shiny…
    I reach my paw forward…
     
    A stick somewhere
    Behind me,
    Cracks suddenly!
     
    I jump at the sound,
    My paw, comes down on
    The shard of the thing-
    It goes right through
    My paw!
    I squeak in pain
    And fright,
    Bounding up the nearest
    Tree!
     
    The thing, now stuck
    Deep into my paw,
    Comes with me.
     
    I look down at the
    Bark of the tree
    In which I cling.
    It is spattered with blood.
    I can smell it.
     
    It’s my blood.
     
    I try to climb higher
    In the tree,
    Limping
    All the way.
     
    When I feel I’m safe
    Enough,
    I examine my paw.
    The pain is excruciating,
    My blood continues to leak from
    Torn skin and matted fur.
     
    I can still feel the thing
    Inside.
    It seems to be
    Gouging
    Deeper.
     
    After trying,
    With no luck,
    For some time
    To get
    The thing out
    Of my paw,
    I start to feel
    Sleepy.
     
    My paw starts to feel
    Numb, my head
    Feels
    Light…
     
    I have to find my nest,
    Just to
    Take
    A small
    Sleep…
     
     
    I am a deer.
    I’m trotting over my patch of
    Woods,
    My head held
    High, my eight
    Antler points
    Displayed proudly.
     
    I am at the top of a small rise,
    The strange rock I’m standing
    On is interlaced
    With strange,
    Metallic-smelling bars.
    It makes me uneasy, for some
    Reason.
     
    It’s going to be fine.
    Of course it will be.
     
    I take one
    Step
    Closer to the edge,
    Ears alert for
    Any sign of
    Danger.
     
    My ears could
    Never have warned me
    Of what happened
    Next.
     
    The footing under
    My front hooves
    Suddenly collapses,
    Tumbling me over the edge!
     
    But my rear legs become
    Tangled in those
    Strange metallic
    Bars, snagging me painfully.
     
    I’m suspended,
    Upside down,
    Three deerlengths above
    The rocky ground.
     
    The bars are hard and solid,
    Digging into my slender
    Legs,
    Cutting them deeply.
     
    If only I had know
    What sharp edges
    They had!
     
    I’m kicking
    Frantically,
    Trying to break free,
    Trying to escape the pain
    The horror of being so
    Precariously high!
     
    A sound rises in my throat,
    Tears out my mouth before
    I can stop it.
     
    Whether from pain
    Or fear, I can’t tell.
     
    I bawl again, continuing to kick
    For a long while.
     
    I’m getting so
    Tired.
     
    I stop struggling, feeling
    The weight of
    My body
    Pressing
    Down on my
    Lungs,
    Blood rushing
    To my head.
     
    My vision is
    Turning red,
    Clouded by the blood
    In my skull.
     
    My breath comes in pants.
     
    Everything hurts.
     
    I have no more strength.
     
    I’m bleeding…
     
    Bleeding….
     
     
    I’m a person,
    A young person.
    I’m waking through the woods,
    Beside the river.
     
    I’m disgusted!
    There is so much trash!
    I can’t take a single step
    Without glass
    Crunching
    Beneath my shoes.
     
    Plastic and metal protrude from
    The surrounding leaf-litter.
    A small bird hops over a half
    Buried soda can,
    Another perches on
    A beer bottle.
     
    Tiny, sickly plants attempt
    To grow around a deflated
    Plastic pool float.
     
    Everywhere, there are glass shards,
    Beer bottles,
    Smashed cans,
    Broken containers,
    Shattered jars,
    Dirt and rust,
    Filth and chemicals.
     
    Old tires and plastic toys
    Scattered between
    Dying, hole-filled, blackened
    Trees.
     
    Concrete stairs,
    Cinder blocks,
    Concrete pads and
    An entire cliff,
    Twisted, sharp, metal
    Saluting the dead tree branches
    Above.
     
    I walk- slide, more like-
    Down the steep hill, to the
    Bottom of the cliff.
     
    I kick aside leaves,
    Sticks, rotting wood,
    Cans, glass, bottles,
    Underneath…
    There lies an old
    Deer skull.
    An eight point buck.
     
    I pick up the skull.
    It’s white, bleached,
    It no longer smells.
     
    I shake my head,
    Trying to imagine what
    Might have
    Killed the poor
    Thing.
     
    I look around the dying woods, down to the murky, nasty,
    Water
    Below.
     
    Is there any hope for this land?
    Can it ever be
    Returned to what
    It was created to be?
    Can we reconcile all
    That was lost?
    Can we restart the
    Ecosystem?
    Diversify the flora
    And fauna
    As it once was?
     
    I don’t know.
    I’m but one teenager.
    What can I do?
     
    I think about it,
    Sweat trickling
    Down the back of my neck.
    The gnats swarming my arms.
     
    I need to start back soon,
    Go back to the clean,
    Bright cottage.
     
    I have a beautiful place to
    Stay, here,
    But the animals?
    The permanent residents?
    Those defenseless against
    Pollution?
     
    Their woods-
    Where they have been since
    Day four
    Of creation-
    Is now full
    Of things they can’t
    Stand against,
    Things they had no part
    In making!
    Things that only
    Desecrate their habitats,
    But help us so that
    We can do less work,
    At the expense of the
    Ecosystem,
    At the expense of that which
    Enables us to live at all.
     
    Their woods seem to
    No longer be
    Their woods.
     
    Why can we not fix this?
     
    Take care of all this
    Pollution,
    Take care of our farms,
    In turn, our health,
    The health of
    Our children,
    Grandchildren,
    Yes, great grandchildren!
     
    Why can’t we
    Stop
    Fighting out wars,
    Our petty squabbles over
    Land-
    Land that is slowly
    Disappearing.
     
    Why don’t we take care
    Of this wonderful gift
    God has blessed us with?
     
    Why can’t we fix this?
     
    -Stick 4-16-24
     
     
     
     
     

     

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    2. Just-A-Stick

      Just-A-Stick

      Thank you!

      😊

      I always appreciate the support!

    3. Through the Living Questio

      Through the Living Questio

      Dudeeeeee I love your poetry!!!

      keep writing it

    4. Just-A-Stick

      Just-A-Stick

      Thank you so much!!!

      ❤️ 

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