I have become Ruin. I will make ash fall and I will cause volcanoes to erupt. My freedom has made me so much more powerful, I can finally complete my deal with Preservation.
I have enough information now…
I love it! The emotion is there, you show that you can write from two different age perspectives, I think that you continuing it would be great.
This finally broke through Daniel’s self imposed mental prison. He knelt next to her and grabbed her hand, preventing further harm. He sobbed with her, both mourning together.