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I don't know who needs to hear this but
Just because you may be feeling broken, remember, a kaleidoscope is also made from broken parts. When you look through it, you see something beautiful
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Every year, my youth group plays this big game the night before Thanksgiving. It's called Apocalypse Night, or just the Apocalypse, and it's basically a cross between laser tag, capture the flag, cops vs robbers, hide and seek, flag football, mazes, etc. There are three teams (the people on your team are the same every round, but your team color and goal can sometimes change, and there are four groups of people) - the blue, green, and red teams. The red team is the size of the blue and green teams combined (I know how to math) and their goal is to turn everyone to the red team by pulling a flag from their hip (used to be called the zombie team). In the game's history, the red team has done this less than three times. The blue and green teams are basically the same. They are looking all over the building for their team's canisters (glowing neon water bottle). These teams need to find three of their color canisters and take them to the "chamber" (a bucket hidden somewhere in the building) to save the world. They cannot touch or hide the other color canisters and they cannot mix the colors to fill the chamber.
I smell a book that I'm gonna write. More accurately, started writing then forgot about and am now going to pick up again.
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Excerpt:
Dear reader, I wish I could tell you that it ends well. I really do. But this isn’t one of those happy-ended stories you’ve been spoiled by. Not in the slightest.
Where was I going with this? Ugh, I hate when this happens. Unfortunately, forgetfulness is a common side affect to an immunity to blue radiation.
I was raised in a… well, let’s say it was a strange society. If you can’t already tell, it was post-apocalyptic at best, dystopian at worst. Fun fact about the word dystopia - it has practically the same meaning as utopia. But this definitely isn’t a utopia.
The group I was in was called the Abandoned. Bunch of young people with no families. No one has respect for anyone but themself. And maybe a friend or two.
I was always told that you couldn’t show weakness of any kind. You can have at most three close friends. Any more than that, you’re labeled weak and are exiled from the Abandoned. I didn’t have any, though, so people knew I wasn’t weak.
But I was loyal. Ask me to blackmail the Abandoned, the people who took me in, for a spot in a more powerful group, like the Mob? Nope. Leave a message at the beep.
We were all the same in the sense that we had and longed for no one and only survival. We were separated by the fact that some of us were immune to different types of radiation.
Radiation barriered what you could do. Blue Immunes could go anywhere that blue radiation was emitted. Green Immunes could do likewise, but with green radiation. Pure Red Immunes couldn’t go anywhere that had blue or green radiation. Blue and Green Immunes couldn’t go places where the other’s kind of radiation was emitted. Everyone was immune to red radiation. Rarely, you’d find someone who was immune to blue or green radiation.
But you didn’t want to be immune to any radiation other than red.
Blue and Green Immunes could go places that Reds couldn’t, yes. But once someone in the Mob or other powerful groups caught wind that you were immune to blue or green radiation, they took you.
From what little I had been able to pick up, my mother was a Blue Immune, my father a Green Immune. After rumors went around that my mother was immune to something that wasn’t red, someone from the Mob came and held a knife to my father’s throat, threatening to cut it unless she said she was immune to either blue or green radiation. She broke and admitted. They took her away, and later, my father revealed to everyone that he was a Green Immune. They took him too. I was a year old.
When they took you, they took you to the Apocalypse Building. Then, you played the Game. The Game was broadcasted to everyone. And if you survived the Game with your team, you had two options. You either joined the Staff, a subgroup of the Mob that oversaw the Game, or you disappeared. Most chose to disappear.
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So, I'm writing a story, and I want a bit of feedback on it. It's going to be a three-part series, and this is the basic skeletal structure:
Book 1: Two people from the opposite sides of a war get amnesia and swap places, and actually change sides. By the end, they are friends (initially without realizing that they are on opposing sides) and by the end they are taken back to their original sides
Book 2: Internal conflict of "I like these people now but I was apparently with these people before what should I do?" on both sides
Book 3: Not in the war anymore but get dragged back into it to end it once and for all
Obviously I'm glazing over a bunch of details and I'm only partway through writing book one but anyways thoughts?
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Do you guys ever think about how weird it would be to have the traits of a lizard? I mean, yeah, scales, tongue, but that's not what I'm talking about. Some species of lizards and geckos can make their tails fall off as a distraction to predators. Just imagine: You're walking in a school hallway when someone starts bullying you. You start to feel threatened and you make your butt fall off. As the bully is fixated on the butt in horror and confusion and isn't paying attention to YOU anymore, you can now leave.
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Okay. We need to talk.
Look at this shirt.
Now look at these pants.
Taking only color into account, they look horrible together.
But if you have JEANS of the SAME COLOR
They look fine together.
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So in my creative writing class, we started our poetry unit today. My teacher gave us six pictures and had us write a poem about one of them. I did this picture:
So this is what I wrote, want help naming it, though:
Crunch
Snow is wet
Owls almost loud
Beam reflecting off the wet
Beam reflecting off the snow
Berry falls
plop
On head
Branch drags behind
Needles poke my wrist
Why? I’m wearing gloves
Cold wet seeps into boots
Cold snow seeps into boots
Rabbit sees, scampers away
We were so close
Now two sets of tracks
Exist in the wet
Exist in the snow
In the cold
Between the trees
And the falling wet
Snow
Another step
Another
Crunch
Sky is dark
Mountains are not
Stars are not
Stars are rice on a black sheet
Needles and berries are not
Needles and berries are decorations on a tablecloth
Snow is not
Snow is blinding
Snow is wet
But bark is dark
So is sky
Grass pokes up
Would sway,
If not for the wet
If not for the snow
Cold and stiff, yes
But strong
Resilient
Doesn’t care what cold says
Doesn’t care what wet says
Doesn’t care what snow says
Doesn’t care what anything says
Just grows
Grows
Grows
Higher and higher
Even through the wet
Even through the snow
Moon glows
A spot of light
In a sky of dark
Almost enough to turn off the beam
But not quite
Still too dark
Even if just a little
Still too dark
Wool itches
Boots begin to cold
In the wet
In the snow
Coat for my body
Scarf for my face
Hat for my ears
Gloves for my hand
Needle prick
Boots shouldn’t be cold
Boots should be warm
I need new boots
Thanks to the wet
Thanks to the snow
Nose turns red
Red like berries
So do ears
So do cheeks
Eyes feel frozen
Frozen like wet
Frozen like snow
So does mouth
So do fingers
So do toes
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I really like where I live. There's not a ton of out-of-state tourists often, which is kind of nice. There's small towns and big cities close by. There's really only one thing that I would change if I could... and that's the freaking weather.
We like to say that where I live has twelve seasons:
- Winter
- Fool's Spring
- Second Winter
- Spring of Deception
- Third Winter
- The Pollening
- Actual Spring (which lasts about three days)
- Summer
- Heck's Front Porch (we are here now)
- False Fall
- Second Summer
- Actual Fall
I don't like extreme conditions. Perfect weather for me is 65-75 F with no clouds and a slight breeze. We are not there now.
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Time for some community participation! If you know the next line, add it on to the last:
He's a semi-aquatic egg laying mammal of action (doo bee doo bee doo bah doo bee doo bee doo bah)
