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  1. "Like I said, I already care about you guys. And I have a zero tolerance policy for "I'll die anyway so why try to stop it" ideology."
  2. Aventine raised her eyebrow. She sarcastically said, "Wow, you really seem to care about him."
  3. Aventine didn't answer right away. Maybe I can help this guy. She knew he would be able to detect her burning, but it seemed like he needed it right now. She started trying to bolster his confidence - both in himself and his friends.
  4. "Listen, I may have just met you guys, but I care about you. Typically going to the underworld involves death. I will not allow you guys to unalive yourselves."
  5. "That's... interesting. Does that have something to do with the whole "Death wants my soul" thing?"
  6. "... used to be? Are you okay? What happened?"
  7. "Well how the shuck can you tell someone is burning without burning bronze?!"
  8. "Um... maybe? Are you burning bronze?"
  9. "It concerns me how casually you say that." Aventine started burning her zinc and made Luna a little more afraid. "Don't you normally get there by dying? That can't be safe."
  10. "Wow, that's... a lot to unwrap. The part about someone being high is less so, I suppose. But isn't going to the underworld and destroying, er, powerful beings kinda... I don't know... idiotic? And from what I'm aware, Death is very difficult to resist."
  11. "I would not mind that at all!" Aventine smiled before turning to TAAron. "Yes, I just checked in."
  12. Library "Oh - I'm sorry. My name is Aventine, I just checked in. I actually came to the library to catch up on some reading, but then I heard some, er... 'tense' conversation and wanted to make sure everything was okay." She bowed. "It is an honor to meet you..." she trailed off, implying that she was asking for someone's name.
  13. Aventine opened the door to the clinic on a somewhat tense scene (they are in the entrance, right?). She could tell that the emotions of those involved were very strong. Maybe she could help? Maybe it was better not to get involved? But she didn't know, and she wanted to help. She approached the group and asked, "Is everything alright?"
  14. I don't know who needs to hear this but

    Just because you may be feeling broken, remember, a kaleidoscope is also made from broken parts. When you look through it, you see something beautiful ❤️

  15. Every year, my youth group plays this big game the night before Thanksgiving. It's called Apocalypse Night, or just the Apocalypse, and it's basically a cross between laser tag, capture the flag, cops vs robbers, hide and seek, flag football, mazes, etc. There are three teams (the people on your team are the same every round, but your team color and goal can sometimes change, and there are four groups of people) - the blue, green, and red teams. The red team is the size of the blue and green teams combined (I know how to math) and their goal is to turn everyone to the red team by pulling a flag from their hip (used to be called the zombie team). In the game's history, the red team has done this less than three times. The blue and green teams are basically the same. They are looking all over the building for their team's canisters (glowing neon water bottle). These teams need to find three of their color canisters and take them to the "chamber" (a bucket hidden somewhere in the building) to save the world. They cannot touch or hide the other color canisters and they cannot mix the colors to fill the chamber.

    I smell a book that I'm gonna write. More accurately, started writing then forgot about and am now going to pick up again.

    1. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      Excerpt:

       

      Dear reader, I wish I could tell you that it ends well. I really do. But this isn’t one of those happy-ended stories you’ve been spoiled by. Not in the slightest.

      Where was I going with this? Ugh, I hate when this happens. Unfortunately, forgetfulness is a common side affect to an immunity to blue radiation.

      I was raised in a… well, let’s say it was a strange society. If you can’t already tell, it was post-apocalyptic at best, dystopian at worst. Fun fact about the word dystopia - it has practically the same meaning as utopia. But this definitely isn’t a utopia.

      The group I was in was called the Abandoned. Bunch of young people with no families. No one has respect for anyone but themself. And maybe a friend or two.

      I was always told that you couldn’t show weakness of any kind. You can have at most three close friends. Any more than that, you’re labeled weak and are exiled from the Abandoned. I didn’t have any, though, so people knew I wasn’t weak.

      But I was loyal. Ask me to blackmail the Abandoned, the people who took me in, for a spot in a more powerful group, like the Mob? Nope. Leave a message at the beep.

      We were all the same in the sense that we had and longed for no one and only survival. We were separated by the fact that some of us were immune to different types of radiation.

      Radiation barriered what you could do. Blue Immunes could go anywhere that blue radiation was emitted. Green Immunes could do likewise, but with green radiation. Pure Red Immunes couldn’t go anywhere that had blue or green radiation. Blue and Green Immunes couldn’t go places where the other’s kind of radiation was emitted. Everyone was immune to red radiation. Rarely, you’d find someone who was immune to blue or green radiation.

      But you didn’t want to be immune to any radiation other than red.

      Blue and Green Immunes could go places that Reds couldn’t, yes. But once someone in the Mob or other powerful groups caught wind that you were immune to blue or green radiation, they took you.

      From what little I had been able to pick up, my mother was a Blue Immune, my father a Green Immune. After rumors went around that my mother was immune to something that wasn’t red, someone from the Mob came and held a knife to my father’s throat, threatening to cut it unless she said she was immune to either blue or green radiation. She broke and admitted. They took her away, and later, my father revealed to everyone that he was a Green Immune. They took him too. I was a year old.

      When they took you, they took you to the Apocalypse Building. Then, you played the Game. The Game was broadcasted to everyone. And if you survived the Game with your team, you had two options. You either joined the Staff, a subgroup of the Mob that oversaw the Game, or you disappeared. Most chose to disappear.

  16. So, I'm writing a story, and I want a bit of feedback on it. It's going to be a three-part series, and this is the basic skeletal structure:

     

    Book 1: Two people from the opposite sides of a war get amnesia and swap places, and actually change sides. By the end, they are friends (initially without realizing that they are on opposing sides) and by the end they are taken back to their original sides

    Book 2: Internal conflict of "I like these people now but I was apparently with these people before what should I do?" on both sides

    Book 3: Not in the war anymore but get dragged back into it to end it once and for all

     

    Obviously I'm glazing over a bunch of details and I'm only partway through writing book one but anyways thoughts?

    1. The Bookwyrm

      The Bookwyrm

      So...Xenoblade Chronicles 3 times Yumi and the Nightmare Painter times a white room novel?

    2. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      Never read/played any of those lol

  17. Do you guys ever think about how weird it would be to have the traits of a lizard? I mean, yeah, scales, tongue, but that's not what I'm talking about. Some species of lizards and geckos can make their tails fall off as a distraction to predators. Just imagine: You're walking in a school hallway when someone starts bullying you. You start to feel threatened and you make your butt fall off. As the bully is fixated on the butt in horror and confusion and isn't paying attention to YOU anymore, you can now leave.

  18. Okay. We need to talk.

    Look at this shirt.

    Now look at these pants.

    Image result for blue pants

    Taking only color into account, they look horrible together.

    But if you have JEANS of the SAME COLOR

    River Island | River Island Molly High Rise In Bright blue Jeans

    They look fine together.

    But-why-meme-generator-but-why-84103d – Canduh

    1. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      Not sure why the shirt isn't popping up, but it's bright purple. Screenshots don't work, I'll keep trying to get it in comments.

    2. Through the Living Hope
  19. So in my creative writing class, we started our poetry unit today. My teacher gave us six pictures and had us write a poem about one of them. I did this picture:

    6K2mpxMUBNFLkJLdOVQDY7oLdWXSrcornsVBMC4V2PmDPGobWqXwp7hlBCdn6hQGeavjYZCqQzFJvZJq9GidZWbXBlRlJOOnrK6WmQ7houjRICC74E5gzy6pX5eTfDi6z1I2dlABlK4CgDABd41keLE

    So this is what I wrote, want help naming it, though:

     

    Crunch

    Snow is wet

    Owls almost loud

    Beam reflecting off the wet

    Beam reflecting off the snow

    Berry falls

    plop

    On head

    Branch drags behind

    Needles poke my wrist

    Why? I’m wearing gloves

    Cold wet seeps into boots

    Cold snow seeps into boots

    Rabbit sees, scampers away

    We were so close

    Now two sets of tracks

    Exist in the wet

    Exist in the snow

    In the cold

    Between the trees

    And the falling wet

    Snow

    Another step

    Another

    Crunch

     

    Sky is dark

    Mountains are not

    Stars are not

    Stars are rice on a black sheet

    Needles and berries are not

    Needles and berries are decorations on a tablecloth

    Snow is not

    Snow is blinding

    Snow is wet

    But bark is dark

    So is sky

     

    Grass pokes up

    Would sway,

    If not for the wet

    If not for the snow

    Cold and stiff, yes

    But strong

    Resilient

    Doesn’t care what cold says

    Doesn’t care what wet says

    Doesn’t care what snow says

    Doesn’t care what anything says

    Just grows

    Grows

    Grows

    Higher and higher

    Even through the wet

    Even through the snow

     

    Moon glows

    A spot of light

    In a sky of dark

    Almost enough to turn off the beam

    But not quite

    Still too dark

    Even if just a little

    Still too dark

     

    Wool itches

    Boots begin to cold

    In the wet

    In the snow

    Coat for my body

    Scarf for my face

    Hat for my ears

    Gloves for my hand

    Needle prick

    Boots shouldn’t be cold

    Boots should be warm

    I need new boots

    Thanks to the wet

    Thanks to the snow

     

    Nose turns red

    Red like berries

    So do ears

    So do cheeks

    Eyes feel frozen

    Frozen like wet

    Frozen like snow

    So does mouth

    So do fingers

    So do toes

  20. really like where I live. There's not a ton of out-of-state tourists often, which is kind of nice. There's small towns and big cities close by. There's really only one thing that I would change if I could... and that's the freaking weather.

    We like to say that where I live has twelve seasons:

    1. Winter
    2. Fool's Spring
    3. Second Winter
    4. Spring of Deception
    5. Third Winter
    6. The Pollening
    7. Actual Spring (which lasts about three days)
    8. Summer
    9. Heck's Front Porch (we are here now)
    10. False Fall
    11. Second Summer
    12. Actual Fall

    I don't like extreme conditions. Perfect weather for me is 65-75 F with no clouds and a slight breeze. We are not there now.

    1. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      And you know it's the ninth season when tap water going into a water bottle with ice cubes in it makes you salivate.

  21. Time for some community participation! If you know the next line, add it on to the last:

    He's a semi-aquatic egg laying mammal of action (doo bee doo bee doo bah doo bee doo bee doo bah)

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    2. Thaidakar the Ghostblood

      Thaidakar the Ghostblood

      He's got a beaver tail and a bill.

    3. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      And the women swoon whenever they hear him say...!

    4. Thaidakar the Ghostblood
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