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    "Yes. I'm certainly better."
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    "Yeah..." He didn't sound very happy. His voice still contained fear and worry.
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    "The Queen and I attacked each other at the same time, and hit each other. I... I destroyed her. And she caused this." He gestured at the large, perfectly smooth crater they stood in. "She hit me, and I started to fade away."
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    "I'm glad too. I think I almost wasn't."
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    He hugged her back, and this time he felt warm and real.
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    He hesitated, as though concentrating on something. Then the hard, monochromatic crystal changed, shifting to soft, normal skin, hair, and clothing. In seconds, he looked completely himself. One thing, though, was different. Instead of being surrounded by wisps of golden light, which had vanished from the room, now his very body seemed permeated with the glow.
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    "It does matter. I need to know that you're okay." His voice strained, sounding pained and afraid.
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    "Then what's going on? Why are you coughing?"
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    "You... why? Did you hurt yourself? Are you sick?" He held her slightly apart from him so he could look her over.
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    Lerac approached. "I believe she used a sort of... dark magic." TAAron looked to him, then back to her.
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    I wouldn't be surprised if there have been a bunch of inconsistencies in his character and backstory at this point. It's been a while and it's often too much effort to review everything I wrote before when I come back to it after a while. I don't know. I would feel weird saying he's a good character because I'm not that great of a writer, and I don't know that his character could be considered very complex. I kind of just do it by vibes.
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    TAAron met her eyes with his own, which still looked like those of a strange statue. He spoke softly, with a distinct note of worry. "Tell me what's going on. Please."
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    "No, you're not. What happened?" He looked to Lerac, seeming afraid, though his expression wasn't very distinct in this form. "Can you help her?"
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    That would take some doing. In the end it had 4.6k replies, which is almost half of what the original Clinic thread had
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    "Are you alright?"
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    I'm glad you like him. His backstory is cannibalized from something I wrote in middle school and his magic system was pretty much made up on the spot There's a whole lot of sad that's happened, especially back in the Tower of Ghenjei Subplot. You weren't here when that was happening I think.
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    "You thought that I was dead? Maybe I was, for that time. How did you find me?"
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    That's my oldest character. I made him as soon as I joined the Shard and found the Clinic. He's changed a lot over the years, mostly by necessity because he didn't start with any sort of canon.
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    "But you thought..."
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    I feel like some of my characters are okay but I don't know that I use them well.
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    "I remember killing the Queen and getting hit myself like it was just a few seconds ago. And then I died, kind of... and now I'm alive, and you're here. There's been a gap."
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    His form was cold and hard in her arms, the metal-like feel of Stacis crystal. "Haly? Are you okay? I think I must have lost some time..."
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    "Apparently. Why are you here? How are you here? The Queen..."
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    "Haly?" It looked like him, just made out of that crystal.
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