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Bearer of all agonies

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  1. “I hope so. I have been looking for something to do with my life. If you are going on a quest, may I join?”
  2. “Ok. Thank you for letting me stay!” He walks in, drops his stuff on the floor, lies on the bed, and immediately falls asleep.
  3. When Channelknight Fadran tries to keep secrets from us:
  4. “Ok. I’ll come in.”
  5. “. . .Oh. Ok. Well can I do that then?”
  6. “. . .Oh. Well, there is this blue mini thing stalking me. I was told if I come here you could kill it.”
  7. A hooded figure appears from behind a rock, that seems to be to small to hide behind, and steps in the middle of the groups path.
  8. I got a new one!!!
  9. YKYASFW you go around your house each day and try to stick random objects to the walls.
  10. “Uh. . . Is this the place where I learn to shoot lasers out of my eyes and teleport and Kill with my mind?”
  11. *A boy in his late teens walks up to the door and knocks.* “Um. . .Hello? Anybody here?
  12. @Matrim's Dice, I will help you find the criminals to behead!
  13. Hello there! This is a place where you can meet other hockey players(if there is any) and talk about hockey! If you play hockey, please post here, because right now I think I am the only one.
  14. Well you are famous now, so you can expect them. Chapters 10-11 are awesome! Thank you so much for sharing them with us!
  15. I just finished reading the first nine chapters-Amazing! They were so interesting. You worldbuilding is awesome and I love your characters. Especially Dain. He acts tough and disciplined, which keeps the squad in check, but he is also kind and helpful. I like how you introduced Aurora and Lacy’s age. Instead of just stating it you brought it into the story by saying: ‘Aurora looked up at the person standing at the door. Minshyl was probably a year younger than Aurora—thirteen, perhaps; around Lacy’s age’. Your plot line is good so far and all the characters have deep personalities. Wow. This is great. You could easily publish this.
  16. Oh yeah. That’s a good movie. Do you remember that really old book called fogborn? Fogalive. That’s it. And the second one, the hole of Descension, and the third, the villain of old.
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