MiaLaD10

Granted, you now have his handwritting I wish to be the best looking person in the world

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Hey, I've been reading this again and I can say that at least for me you have improved since the first post! I don't tend to like super strong characters as protagonists but that's a me thing, but the restrictions to maintain all the ideals and identities sounds really cool and interesting for me! I would love to say more to help you with the writing or more complex opinions, but English isn't my first language and honestly I'm quite bad at it. The only thing I could say is that in the last story post you had a really big paragraph and that was a little hard to read, so maybe when you see those really big paragraphs you could try to "cut" them in two? If that makes sense for the moment obviously. (this could be a me problem also, because mobile 17 shard has really small lines). As always, I hope you all are doing okay and having a great day. If you are not, I hope things get better. With love, Mia UwU. Edit: Ohhh, one last thing! How does quicksilver looks? I don't promise to finish it, but I would like to try drawing it.

Oh, if you are looking for advise to write better I would recommend you to read the advices and class recording from the YouTube channel of Brandon Sanderson. I'm an aspiring writer and those really helped me out! He as videos of general guidelines on how to do plot, characters, setting. I'm sure that with lots of practice you will write good books, remember that Brandon wrote like 10 books before getting published! Something that I would like to see here is some danger or problems to the character. He is really strong and I get it, so maybe making the problem of losing his own identity bigger? Maybe another identity weaver? Just suggestions or ideas though. Anyways, have a great day. With love, Mia UwU

As wheelbarrow said above, I think we all can agree it is a fun reading. My kitty recently had some health problems and my mood wasn't the best, but with *Identity weaver* you managed to make me laugh and feel better! So thanks a lot for that. I would love to read some more, I want to see some more spren interactions and to know what is happening! Are the guys that contacted him part of the ghostbloods? Will someone discover what is going on with his abilities? Or what if Hoid shows up and shakes things up? Those are all the things I'm wondering. UwU Also, would you be okay with me or another people writing fanfics about Quicksilver? I liked him, tough he was cool and funny as a character and I now want to see him in lots of situations! Thank you for writing this, honestly. And I hope that, if you decide to continue writing it, you can have a time as good as we had passed while reading it. Uwu With love, Mia UwU Edit: Also, what is a Sai?