Glaring at the Survivor

Three or four people pulled ou. Haha.

They must've not liked it, too, though, because that's the thing with all of the dislike votes.

I don't think anyone did.

They'd still hurt bridgemen, unless he made them different than Sadeass.

If there is something else I havent said, add it in the comments and I will make it an option. Edit: Soulcasting Added. Edit: Honorshard fixed to Honorblade.

Surgebinding.

How can you say that? Szeth and Hoid (along with Kaladin) are some of my favorite characters. I think I'd have to say... Amaram. Edit: I haven't read Mistborn yet.

I disagree. Can you buy Surgebinding? No. Awakening? It's unlikely, nobody has the proper skill to teach you. If, however, you spend almost all of your money, J suppose you might get enough to reach the eith, ninth, or tenth heightening. We aren't fighting. We're forming a group of the best fighters in the cosmere+. What is Hemalurgy? I haven't read Mistborn yet—I cant find it anywhere. I feel like deleting Other from the options. However, then I would lose my Awakened Shardblade. However, if I had $10,000,000,000 And already had 10,000 Breaths, and a Shardblade, I could probably awaken my own Shardblade. Hm...

Enough mosquito bites get annoying. And sometimes painful. I suppose I will have to change the comparison. Edit: on the topic of the fight, in the new revised and re-written version I am currently writing, I will fix that. Thanks!

Oh.

You're saying Dalinar isn't a good swordsman? And that Vasher could beat Arsteel in a duel? No, I mean if both are of equal skill with their own weapons. Aha. I haven't seen that before? Where is a link to where Brandon said this?

Hmm. I suppose. But Arsteel could beat you in a fair duel.

This way we'll find out how many people do each thing.

What? If you had 10 billion Breaths it's probably possible.

Ok so we both have the best weapon in the cosmere.

Awakened Shardblade. PWNED!

Be serious.

The EEST will be critical later on, along with some of Rick and what he did and what happened. I didn't even think of that. Taking this into consideration, they have been renamed XFCommunication devices. This is why I have this up to be critiqued. Of course. I'll try to fix that. In a way, his brain has been reincarnated in the computer system. Edit: in the revised version, he actually dies of assassination after he has children, who survive. I'll show you the table of "Gifts and Partial Gifts" I am working on soon. "Later" has been fixed to "soon". Any suggestions to "build up your confidence"? They saboteurs said "drop the bomb". Talon/Panther recognized this as danger and ran off to fix it. The difference between names is due to a change in personality. If he is protecting someone by injuring someone else, he is Talon. Otherwise, he's probably Panther. I'll fix that soon. Thank you. That is fixed. (1) good point (2) good point (3) they each had one guess, and they had watched the ship pilot for a while. The password alternated every few days (4) as far as I'm aware, in command prompt, the passwords are show in plain text (5) He hacked into the computer. (6) good point (7) ^ (8)^ (9) locking the computer. Good point, though, it took too long. Will fix. (look at my signature)

Hi Brandon! So glad you could come! I only have a few—or a lot of— questions: Is JeksonsonVallano important? Is JeksonsonVallano SzethsonsonVallano's brother? What did Jek and Szeth do to become Truthless? Does SzethsonsonVallano's Surgebinding require HonorSpren like Kaladin's? Can people from one are of the cosmere Ruturn to the place from the cosmere where Awakeners are from (forgot the name)? Are Surgebinding and Awakening related? Is there a way to harvest BioChromatic Breath from a planet, if it holds any? (If a person dies, and their body turns to dusty he dust of the earth, then doesn't the earth—or sharever planet they have—therefore hold thousands, if not millions, of BioChromatic Breaths?) What is your favorite world of the cosmere?

How did Shallans brother get a set of Shards in the first place?

Role-Playing Game, as far as I'm aware.

That wasn't too bad, actually. Well, let's see... I think you might be able to add a little about the world so we know where it is—just don't add too much or it'll… be too much. Good storyline. Just be wary and make sure you don't say too much about any specific thing in one area. You got close one time. And maybe speed up things a little. You had a good cliff-hanger. I can't wait to read more. Also, add (L) to the end of the subject line in your email and your post if the story has language that may be innapropriate for young children, who may or may not be receiving these emails.