I would like some critiquing of these two keteks I wrote today.
My masterpiece, which came to me in a random thought:
Stars align, and hands, reaching for reaching hands, align stars.
Stars align,/ and hands,/ reaching for reaching hands,/ align stars.
A ketek I had to think out word by word:
Winds raging, battling against men, prepare men battling against raging winds.
Winds raging,/ battling against men,/ prepare men/ battling against raging winds.