Morsk

Congratulations! I'm so glad to see someone did this.

when you are a hyper fan, you set these books up to a high standard. You can see flaws that no one else sees, simply because you are so invested.

This "hyper fan" magic system sounds majorly underpowered. In Warbreaker, the heavily invested get to perceive all sorts of cool things with colors. You just get to see flaws? Can you at least fly or something? Or maybe getting ARCs is part of it.

"Thrilled" and "awesomeness" in the first sentence? We have fairly good reasons to believe those experiences are mutually exclusive!

Sigh. I wasn't going to read it, because these early chapters always get me worked up for the books months before they come out.

But I started anyway and it's JUST TOO GOOD.

edit: actually n/m, I'll try to finish it before asking this

Oh, this looks fun!

I love how you actually calculated the words/dollar value.

Rithmatist looks great.

The Wild Chalkling art at the end of the Prologue reminds me of zerglings! Maybe it's just because I saw Brandon call it "chalkboard Starcraft" in some interview somewhere and I can't get the comparison out of my head.