Snipexe

Destroying the Vaxian economy

That seems much better, and while I would still probably decrease the effect the weaknesses have on him, overall it is in good shape.

Toa seems balanced, so I personally think that he would be fine in the new era.

You could always do a variety of extra weaknesses, like say he can’t use guns (for ptsd), or maybe he has a specific code, that even though he is a villain there are certain people who he finds it immoral to kill. He could also struggle with technology, as he is from an earlier time. In situations without the mask, his personality could be off putting, leading to him being very recognizable when he is everyday situations. Also, on the tin compounding. It seems, to say the least, excessive to have him be a tin compounder. I bet you could make do with the same results by having him be a powerful tin burner, or a Ferring. The amount of sensing that tin compounding would be insane, like well beyond what Spook at the end of HOA was like.

Alright, this feels like a bit of an overreaction. I think if you apply a few simple nerfs to the Jackal, he can become much more balanced. The following is a potential rewrite, that while nerfing him in several areas, keeps the core of his skills. I think if you changed this from being pewter leveled, you could make this on par with someone who has spent several years training in various different physical areas. This lets you transfer magical points to skill points, and also lets you balance him more. I think if you maybe changed this to one or two specific senses (say vision or smell) you could decrease the overall magic points, while keeping the intended effect of enhancing his senses. I think you could change this to a physical skill, and explain more on how much his reactions are enhanced. If it’s within (although with a few years of training) natural levels, then I think it is reasonable to combine this with the above physical training. If it is beyond natural levels, then I would suggest bringing it down to normal levels. I would honestly just cut these out entirely. They cost valuable magic points, where they could be used for his more vital powers, and they appear to be vital the core of the character. Is this really nessesary? If it is, the leave it, but if it isn’t, then I would take it out. It won’t have a noticeable effect on rp, assuming that you aren’t planning on doing this character for hundreds of years, and aging allows character growth, which can be useful, and help build a better backstory. As long as you leave this as part of the first portion, making it more skillfully high then incredibly, then this doesn’t require points This is also not nessesary for the overall character. This is fine. At this point you could keep a normal level of division, and I think it would remain balanced. So this new is the new Jackal based on my suggestions: This version ends up with 65 S points, and 110 M points. This leaves you with the ability to add one of the powers I suggest cutting out. Overall, what this should be is a Jackal that is slightly less overpowered, but still technically has an edge over an average citizen in combat. I personally feel this is much more balanced, and would support this character, as long as they rp’d with the nerfs included.

Butt ate Yoda

Butt ate Voidapple

This comes to a total of 275 M 20 S I personally feel this is over-powered. Even if he only fights with the opponents permission, it’s still a blantantly overpowered character.

She was also tapping Zinc, meaning that it was likely much, much easier for her to learn/use the metals.

Snip disagreed, as he believed that they needed to continue this thread until it beat both the question threads and the random stuff threads combined

I think it is technically is possible via the way our brains view combinations of color and some the science related to the psychology of color. Let’s say we take a pair of complimentary colors, blue and orange, but you see them as red and brown. I design a logo blending the two colors together, and using one as negative space. Because you see different colors then me, the logo doesn’t make any sense. Look up some tests that are used to determine whether people are colorblind. They do similar things that wouldn’t be possible if we saw different colors. On the psychology side, we know that certain colors create certain reactions in the brain. The color of blood for example might cause a reaction of fear or panic. If we see different colors for blood then how does our brain know to cause these reactions?

They can just jog away if they don’t want to be killed. It’s literally a pineapple that rolls along the ground.

They are both instantly struck down

Aww, I was hoping the fact that he is both a sentient pineapple, and that his sole goal is to kill Voidus would eliminate more points, which is why I made them so over powered. Version 2 should be radically different Version 2

Character Submission:

So Stickism doesn’t count

-65 dollars per battery

Of Death

No

Are you talking about Thor:Ragnarok?

And Sudiov to destroy Voidus

Congrats to team 5 and Voidapple!

Will they be making shard accounts for this?

I do not as well