Tobysmouse

I don't think the idea here is to make 'The Next Skyrim'. We just want to make a 3d action game set on Roshar. I have some ideas, how about instead of being open world. It plays something like God of War. Except with lashings and shard blades. Still, I think however it turns out it will be a fun project to work on.

I would like to say I would LOVE to help out with writing the story and building the world. Such as, will the player have a choice as to who they be (Example: Assassin's Creed Syndicate.) Or would the game change the view depending on who is most important. Oh and BTW what audience are you thinking of for this game, I know it's an adult book but I'm only 13 and my friends and I absolutely LOVED it, (It's much tamer than Mistborn 2) EDIT: realised my status is now BRIDGEMAN. Bridge Four!

This might be a bit late, but I would LOVE to help out with writing the story for the world, and building the setting, as in. Do you want the game to be set in the period of the books. Or as in like before the Recreance, where you play as a new Radiant, however this would mean you need to limit the orders to choose from.

This actually sounds pretty cool. Also, nice to hear you've read Stormlight. I've met a lot of full-blown Mistborn fans who haven't read anything else other then perhaps Elantris.

Oh yeah, I'll make it so that people do get hurt. But using the metal echolon they can dampen it down a bit. However this cannot be used in battle as it takes a huge ring of the material around the area.

Sorry for inactivity I have been on holiday. Also, I really like your idea and will molding that into my story.

It's similar to the other magic. They have crystals poking out of them which they store Elemental energy in. Releasing it in short but powerful bursts.

Oh by the way. Do you think you could help me with the Ivumel magic? I'm really stuck

@Straw ok thanks.

Thanks, just one question, what would you use the separating rune for? BTW there is only one Exos Key.

I really like fantasy Swords and Sorcery and Historical, books like what would Julius Caesar do if he was not killed?

Ok here we go. This is just a little thing I've been thinking of, I might turn it into something. Idk In this fantasy world, magic is a substance, like a liquid. There are two 'classes' of mages. One uses magic to power their devices, think carts, or armour (I know total Shardplate ripoff). They also use it to enhance physical attributes, such as speed, strength, agility and many more, creating magic items with the energy. Certain requirements have to be met though. For the magic to be potent enough it must be heated to the right temperature. (857 degrees Celsius) Must be kept in a certain container, and must have specific ingredients added, depending on what it is going to be used for. The others ingest the magic, taking the energy into their veins. These people do not need specific requirements to be met, but they cannot keep as much stored in them. They can use it for basic energy attacks such as a blast (Think Kamehameha) or other things, like providing cover for a city under siege, or cloaking assassins and thieves. The origin of the magic is this. The gods once walked Earth, until one day something changed. The gods were melted into the magical energy. called Arcanum and humans found uses for it.

Update: Tim loses the fight against Kai, and Leo is initially guarded towards Tim, until he realises that Tim's ancestors enrolled there.

Thank you sooooooo much. I'm improving on everything you and Darkness said and should have the edited version up in about a week. I did realise that Tim didn't care that much about his master dying and am changing that right now. As for the everything being too easy, that is going to change in the course of the book, a boy almost breaks his legs and someone sends an assassin (The bully's family, as the boy, Vincent was expelled from the school) Also this is also only the first 3 chapters, so I'm not adding conflict in to them right now. The conversation between him and Kai is being updated now, and the fact with the ice magic is going to be explained. Basically I'm going to make it so that when Tim was about 3 or 4 one day something bad happened with fire (probably a loved one's death, his parents are not dead, they just sent him to their family friend for training) which would subconsciously make him want to repel fire. I possibly might even make Kai become his enemy.

Here is the 1st 3 chapters of the book Phew, that was a wall of text. All critique is greatly appreciated.