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1 minute ago, Ookla the Channelknight said:

"Get you across? Bird person, we need to get us across, too."

"well, I figure you can fly, and everyone else has some cool thing, I just got a bird"

Posted
Just now, Ookla the Channelknight said:

"Right... I can... fly." Alena glimpsed down into the chasms and shivered.

"Do you know how to control it even in the slightest? I can help you learn"

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Ben thought fast as he approached a chasm. "Your breath to mine!" He yelled. Breath? It just seemed natural. He felt some sort of power return to him, from his belt. 

"Help me jump!" He yelled at the belt, picturing what it was supposed to do. He dearly hoped the belt would take a new command. He felt a bit of 'breath' go to the belt, ran to the chasm and jumped off the edge. The belt boosted him across the gap, and he landed, though not without pain, on the other side of the chasm.

"Ow," He called across. "That hurt."

"Your breath to mine," He told the belt. 

 

Posted

Lorem figured that if Alena could survive a fall once, she could do it again, and what better way to practice flying then do it in a panic?

Lorem suddenly leaps out and pushes Alena into the chasm.

I better be right, or I will be very, very sorry.

Posted
3 minutes ago, Chasmgoat said:

Lorem figured that if Alena could survive a fall once, she could do it again, and what better way to practice flying then do it in a panic?

Lorem suddenly leaps out and pushes Alena into the chasm.

I better be right, or I will be very, very sorry.

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She was going to jump...

 

Posted
5 minutes ago, Ookla the Channelknight said:

 

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well, this should make her more panicked?

 

Posted
10 minutes ago, Chasmgoat said:

Lorem figured that if Alena could survive a fall once, she could do it again, and what better way to practice flying then do it in a panic?

Lorem suddenly leaps out and pushes Alena into the chasm.

I better be right, or I will be very, very sorry.

"AH! Dude! We don't know how any of this works, don't just push people into very very deep chasms! Especially when there's a hurricane coming!"

Posted (edited)
1 minute ago, AmazingGoob said:

"AH! Dude! We don't know how any of this works, don't just push people into very very deep chasms! Especially when there's a hurricane coming!"

"there is a hurricane coming? Oh, and don't worry, oi am an expert at pushing people"

Edited by Chasmgoat
Posted
Just now, Ookla the Counselor said:

Too late, now, I guess.

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Hehe, yep. I'll just pretend like this happened:

Spoiler

"Give me a push?" Alena asked.

Lorem nodded. "Sure."

"Great." She started running.

 

Alena yelps as Lorem pushed her into her jump. She leapt through the chasm, nothing but empty space beneath. She cleared the apex of her jump and began falling.

Fly! She screamed at herself. Fly!

The voice from earlier started speaking. Use the stormlight!

What the heck is that??

Your Invest--

She slammed into the back wall of the chasm, her arm snapping from the impact. She kept falling, though, breaking through shalebark and hitting into the sides of more stone. A few seconds later, she smashed into the ground. No scream exited her mouth, as there was no air left in her lungs to make one.

For a moment, all was quiet. How the scud was she still alive?

Then her lungs filled with air, and her scream finally escaped.

Posted
1 minute ago, Ookla the Channelknight said:

Then her lungs filled with air, and her scream finally escaped.

Jacob just watches in horror as this girl just frudging dies in front of him.
"U-uhh. Are y-you okay..?"

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"I'm not going to help you get across now! I hope you know that!"

Ben peered down the chasm.

"You better hope she's alright!" 

Or as alright as she could possibly be, with that fall.

Posted (edited)

"hey bird!!! are you able to help?!?"

The bird slowly loops back around and dives into the chasm and lands on a rock and watches the dying girl...

Edited by Chasmgoat
Posted
2 minutes ago, Chasmgoat said:

"... so, maybe oi am not an expert?"

"hey, uh... sorry?"

1 minute ago, AmazingGoob said:

Jacob just watches in horror as this girl just frudging dies in front of him.
"U-uhh. Are y-you okay..?"

Just now, Ookla the Counselor said:

"I'm not going to help you get across now! I hope you know that!"

Ben peered down the chasm.

"You better hope she's alright!" 

Or as alright as she could possibly be, with that fall.

1 minute ago, Chasmgoat said:

"hey bird!!! are you able to help?!?"

The bird slowly loops back around and dives into the chasm and lands on a rock and watches the dying girl...

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If anyone wants to come down, I'll be practicing writing epic action scenes.

Her screams turned to rapid breathing, teeth clenched. Her breaths were tinged with wimper-like notes of pain.

"Life bef... life before..." where were those words coming from? "Life before death."

Posted
Just now, Ookla the Channelknight said:

Her screams turned to rapid breathing, teeth clenched. Her breaths were tinged with wimper-like notes of pain.

"Life bef... life before..." where were those words coming from? "Life before death."

"What?" he called down.

Posted (edited)
1 minute ago, AmazingGoob said:

"What?" he called down.

"Strength!" Came next. She grabbed a vine, pulling herself up wih a yell. "Strength before weakness."

Far off, the sound of rushing water filled the air.

Edited by Ookla the Channelknight
Posted
1 minute ago, AmazingGoob said:

"What?" he called down.

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The smooth transition from dramatic 1st ideal and Omygoshyougood? is just the best.

 

Posted (edited)
1 minute ago, Ookla the Channelknight said:

"Strength!" Came next. She grabbed a vine, pulling herself up wih a yell. "Strength before weakness."

Far off, the sound of rushing water filled the air.

"HUH? I CAN'T HEAR YOU! SPEAK UP!"
Well, at least she's not dead.

Edited by AmazingGoob
Posted
1 minute ago, AmazingGoob said:

"HUH? I CAN'T HEAR YOU! SPEAK UP!"
Well, at least she's not dead.

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I'm going to remember this every time I reread SA and someone swears an ideal.

"I will protect even those I-"

"WHAT?"

"Even those I-"

"WHAT WAS THAT?"

"Even those I hate! So long-"

"SPEAK MORE CLEARLY!"

 

Posted
6 minutes ago, AmazingGoob said:

"HUH? I CAN'T HEAR YOU! SPEAK UP!"
Well, at least she's not dead.

"run, she's dead and this is an angry spirit mumbling to itself, coming to kill us!"

"or not, now that oi think about it, it has like a 50% chance of happening"

Posted
Just now, Chasmgoat said:

"run, she's dead and this is an angry spirit mumbling to itself, coming to kill us!"

 

9 minutes ago, AmazingGoob said:

"HUH? I CAN'T HEAR YOU! SPEAK UP!"

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Aren't we just so helpful?

 

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