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I found a typo in the version of Defending Elysium on Brandon's website.

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Second contact had been made by the United Governments Military when they accidentally shot down a Tenasi ambassadorial vessel.

And later

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The United Governments military had accidentally shot down a Tenasi diplomatic vessel—thereby initiating a rather embarrassing first contact.

I don't know which is the correct capitalization of military, and I don't have my copy of the physical version to see if it got fixed there. If anyone here does I would appreciate them checking so Dragonsteel Entertainment can be told of this and we can get clarification on the correct version if it still inconsistent.

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We see UG used alone at the end of the story, suggesting it should be the UG military (lower case 'm'). 

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as soon as the United Governments approves

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