TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 9, 2015 Author Posted September 9, 2015 (edited) I don't know. I only did it once, and I didn't even get close to finishing what was basically a Hunger Games rip off. I'm not sure if I'll have time this November or not.You wrote a Hunger Games ripoff; I wrote a superhero novel narrated by not-David. You know, if we teamed up, we could bring the world The Hunger Games as Narrated by David Charleston. Edited September 9, 2015 by TwiLyghtSansSparkles 1
Mailliw73 he/him Posted September 9, 2015 Posted September 9, 2015 Throw it into a super generic fantasy world where each country has a different element to control(like mine) and bam! Avatar: Hunger Games by David Charleston. 3
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 9, 2015 Author Posted September 9, 2015 Throw it into a super generic fantasy world where each country has a different element to control(like mine) and bam! Avatar: Hunger Games by David Charleston. The question isn't "Who would write this?" but rather "Why has it not been written yet?!" 2
Mashadar Mistborn he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 (edited) Given how different Nightwielder's shadows are from gel that means relatively little. Sorry I probably should have been more clear. She can only manipulate the gel if it touches the ground at some point, and she can control about 100 liters with precision, after that they can only act as a group. Edit: I can't type. Edited September 10, 2015 by Mashadar Mistborn
Edgedancer he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 Sorry' I probably should have been more clear. She can only manipulate the gel if it touches the ground at some point, and she can control about 100 liters with precision, after that they can only and act as a group. Alright, thanks. Comatose, how likely is Princess GOOD to barge into other people's houses, while on her clean up tour, if you catch my drift?
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 10, 2015 Author Posted September 10, 2015 Alright, thanks. Comatose, how likely is Princess GOOD to barge into other people's houses, while on her clean up tour, if you catch my drift? Are you envisioning Kenshin hosting an impromptu house party?
Edgedancer he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 Are you envisioning Kenshin hosting an impromptu house party? It's always nice to be understood. Maybe she can make some Sushi.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 10, 2015 Author Posted September 10, 2015 It's always nice to be understood. Maybe she can make some Sushi. With her slice-and-dice style? Should be entertaining.
Edgedancer he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 With her slice-and-dice style? Should be entertaining. I searched Epic Sushi and this is what i found, I think Voidus will like it. 6
Blaze1616 he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 I really like how Snorlax is placed between two broccoli, referencing how he blocks your path between two trees...I wonder if it was intentional. 1
Edgedancer he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 (edited) I really like how Snorlax is placed between two broccoli, referencing how he blocks your path between two trees...I wonder if it was intentional. They do seem placed rather intentionally. Edited September 10, 2015 by Edgedancer
Shattered he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 Hello. This just a sort of semi-official announcement that I'm back. Sorry for being gone so long. If anybody cares. 5
Mailliw73 he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 Welcome back, Logic! Now Freq's gang can get a move on.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 10, 2015 Author Posted September 10, 2015 Welcome back, Logic! Now Freq's gang can get a move on. Koshee Kohschay Kosheye He Whose Name Is Impossible to Pronounce, Let Alone Spell lives! 2
Mashadar Mistborn he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 Does anyone have anything else to tweak about my character? If not, what should I do now?
Shattered he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 So I made Evan a while ago, and so far nothing's happened with him. Is there something he can do or someone he can interact with?
Blackhoof Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 @Mash: looks good to me. @Shattered: I've forgotten who Evan is sorry
Shattered he/him Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 (edited) @Shattered: I've forgotten who Evan is sorry He's a vanilla I put in the Dalles a while ago. This is the one post I made about him: Evan sat huddled in the corner, tapping frenetically at the keyboard of his notebook computer. He had had it since before the first appearance of Calamity, and had never had the will to get rid of it in exchange for a mobile. He had a special fondness for it. It had belonged to his mother. Brushing that distracting thought from his mind, Evan stopped briefly from his work and took a gulp from the mug of lukewarm coffee sitting beside him. He set the drink down, firmly pushed his glasses back into position, then resumed his frenzied pace, fingers flying across the keys. He had to finish the daily finance projections. Then there was the message from the informal civilian commerce coalition, the schedule for the rebuilding project, then the discussion of funding from the school board... He glanced out the window. It was dark outside. He'd stayed in past his work hours. Again. That's fine, he thought. I set those hours. He changed tabs, editing his schedule. There. That extra thirty minutes should allow me to finish about twelve more tasks per day. He finished his report, then sent it off. It's a good thing we have Arsenal, Evan thought to himself as he began his next assignment. Without him, The Dalles would have fallen into financial ruin long ago. Not that they were exactly skipping merrily along. Arsenal helped, but the way they were going through money... Evan would deal with it. He had to. Even if it was blasted hard to keep the city economy functioning smoothly. There were very few entities that facilitated the circulation of capital anymore. He allowed those outside thoughts to fade into the background, focusing solely on trying to come up with ways to explain to the street businesses that they wouldn't be getting their usual tax reduction this quarter. The city's budget was simply too tight recently, what with Quicksilver and the like causing ludicrous amounts of property damage. The room was filled with the noise of rapid clicks, often punctuated by brief periods of manic backspacing. Evan continued his hypnotizing rhythm for another twenty minutes. His progress was slow, but the letter was taking shape word by word. Despite additional drinks from his coffee, though, he began to droop over his computer. His eyelids began to grow heavy. A few minutes later and he was fighting to stay alert and functional. His eyes would close, but when he actually began to fall asleep, he would snap awake again, uncomfortably jerking his head back into position. He rubbed his eyes, trying to will the tiredness away. He was in the middle of revising his opening when he lost the battle. In light of recent events and unfortunate but necessary expenses, The Dalles city government will be unable toiewuywo8wowtv8weio78htoywie78rhoiity The impact of his face on the keyboard lurched him painfully back into wakefulness. Evan rubbed his nose tenderly, then stared at his notebook screen with uncharacteristic hatred. He immediately felt guilty, however, and patted the case affectionately, smiling, regarding the computer with bleary eyes. He erased the string of face-mashed words on the document, then downed the rest of his coffee and began to type again. Edited September 10, 2015 by Shattered Logic
Blackhoof Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 Oh yes i remember now, the manager guy! I'm not in the dalles do i cant offer any advice sorry
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 10, 2015 Author Posted September 10, 2015 So I made Evan a while ago, and so far nothing's happened with him. Is there something he can do or someone he can interact with? He'd probably work with Skylar, though I'm not sure exactly what he'd be doing this particular morning.
Shattered he/him Posted September 11, 2015 Posted September 11, 2015 He'd probably work with Skylar, though I'm not sure exactly what he'd be doing this particular morning. Well, there's probably a lot to be done, or at least discussed. The Dalles was, after all, attacked by mutant pandas.
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 11, 2015 Author Posted September 11, 2015 Well, there's probably a lot to be done, or at least discussed. The Dalles was, after all, attacked by mutant pandas. I didn't mean there wasn't a lot for him to do; I just meant I didn't know what would be prioritized and what wouldn't.
18th Shard he/him Posted September 11, 2015 Posted September 11, 2015 I swear, you guys are ghosts. I get two upvotes in a matter of seconds, and no one is on the entire subforum when I look. 4
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted September 11, 2015 Author Posted September 11, 2015 I swear, you guys are ghosts. I get two upvotes in a matter of seconds, and no one is on the entire subforum when I look. 1
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