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Posted

List typos here. I'll start us off.

 

Page 85

Current:

He was an indiscriminant killer.

Should be:

He was an indiscriminate killer.

 

Reported by Ross Newberry.

Posted

List typos here. I'll start us off.

 

Page 85

Current:

He was an indiscriminant killer.

Should be:

He was an indiscriminate killer.

 

Reported by Ross Newberry.

 

I noticed that, too, but that's just because transposing "-ant" and "-ate" words bothers me so much that it would probably be my Epic weakness. You could say it's my "dominate" flaw. (Ugh, it almost physically hurts me just to type that!)  :)

Posted

Page 50 for the ebook version.  Chapter 9, sixth paragraph.

 

"The door clicked closed behind me, and I pointed my rifle that direction."

Missing an "in" between "rifle" and "that".
 

Posted

"that direction" does not need an "in" in front of it. It's colloquially optional. This usage occurs multiple times in the book.

 

I responded in that other thread.

 

Reported by Joe ST:

 

Page 45 paragraph 9

Current:

subservient postion for granted,

Should be:

subservient position for granted,

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