caraboosh Posted 5 hours ago Posted 5 hours ago I recently reread The Alloy of Law and noticed something that felt off about the timeline. At some point near the end of the book, the narrator states that less than a day and a half passed between the Vanisher attack at the wedding and the capture of Miles. But when I think about everything that happens in between (the investigation of the abandoned hideout, the interrogation, the bomb, the train fight, and more) it feels like it should be significantly longer than that. Has anyone else noticed this? Is thiis a continuity error, or am I missing something that explains the compressed timeline?
Treamayne Posted 1 hour ago Posted 1 hour ago Welcome to the Shard. Please consider an Intro Post to let us know what you have or have-not read (whichever list is shorter). Also, please consider checking out the Sharder FAQ for some useful forum info and tips. 3 hours ago, caraboosh said: I recently reread The Alloy of Law and noticed something that felt off about the timeline. At some point near the end of the book, the narrator states that less than a day and a half passed between the Vanisher attack at the wedding and the capture of Miles. But when I think about everything that happens in between (the investigation of the abandoned hideout, the interrogation, the bomb, the train fight, and more) it feels like it should be significantly longer than that. Has anyone else noticed this? Is thiis a continuity error, or am I missing something that explains the compressed timeline? The timeline is correct - AoL: Spoiler Ch 6 - Vanisher Attack on Wedding Ch 7 - Morning after, Early - Marasi Visit - The morning after the assault on the wedding dinner Ch 8 - Simultaneous with 7 - Wayne interrogates Vanisher; Ch 9 - Morning - Wayne returns; Tillaume blows up Ch 10 - Morning - Visit the Foundry Ch 11 - Morning - Simultaneous to Ch 10 - Miles gets an update Ch 12 - Noonish - investigating the robbery site (Wayne''s Pretzel lunch) Ch 13 - Early Afternoon - Fight on the train back Ch 14 - Afternoon - Ranette's place Ch 15 - Simultaneous with 14 - Miles at hideout Ch 16 - Late Afternoon - Sneaking onto the railway Ch 17 - Evening - Train is robbed Ch 18 - Night - Vanishers hideout Ch 19 - Late Night (Time bubble to early morning) - Showdown Ch 20 - about 18 hours after the Wedding attack, Miles is captured. Hope that helps
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