TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 The sad part of Backtrack staying in The Dalles; it would likely deal some harm to the Backtrack/MV ship, since Steve was very awkward around women to the point of not being able to properly talk to them. He'd also start feeling embarrassed about the creeptastic way he was treating her, and would start avoiding her. Ironically the one time he'd make a decent boyfriend is when he's most likely to avoid MV altogether. Dark!Paladin would probably make him physically sick, like all the worst Epics. He'd feel more comfortable with Nice!Paladin's mind. As for the others... well, I'll have to re-read their segments to get a better idea of what their average thoughts are like, but he could probably handle them. He's only made physically sick by the most far-gone of Epics. Can we canonize the "I am a nice Epic" creed? Imagining a Glamour working under Koschei, I can't help but think he'd follow him around playing "I'm Too Sexy" at all times. I'm not sure how Koschei would react to this. Maybe...maybe MV would find that sweet? The ship must be saved! Consider it canon. Publicly, Koschei would ask him to stop and play something more thematically appropriate. Privately, he would adopt it as his personal theme. 1
Edgedancer he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Circlets are proof of divinity, apparently. Diamond Queen + being attractive + ruling Astoria with a diamond fist + extreme self-confidence = proof of divinity in Koschei's eyes. He would definitely bring flowers. Should I get a circlet for Lucentia? 2
Fatebreaker he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 I was thinking how backtrack could be useful, and decided he could actually be quite valuable as a crime-scene investigator. He just shows up to the scene of the crime and he can tell you exactly how it went down. He's like the ultimate witness in court. So there. Just proved he's not worthless, and provided career choices. You're welcome, Steven. That last Edgerunner post was great. Looking forward to the Vondra post, so I can see what Quicksilver is up against. 2
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 Should I get a circlet for Lucentia? No, her ego is big enough as it is. If she gets a circlet, Sam must mock it at every opportunity. (Although I think she would look good in a circlet.) 2
Edgedancer he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 No, her ego is big enough as it is. If she gets a circlet, Sam must mock it at every opportunity. (Although I think she would look good in a circlet.) Well, I just read what was probably the most brutal and depressing end of a stories phase I read in a long while, so I could use some of that mockery to chear me up. 1
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 Well, I just read what was probably the most brutal and depressing end of a stories phase I read in a long while, so I could use some of that mockery to chear me up. What series was that? Also, any power ideas for an Epic named Soulflicker? 1
Edgedancer he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 What series was that? Also, any power ideas for an Epic named Soulflicker? You remember the series I resently talked about, Tokyo Ghoul? I decided to track down the source material and it didn´t exactly became prettier, although the end left some things ambigious for the sequel. The main character´s sanity continued to be a bit... slippery but he stayed very sympathetic overall. Here´s what we get for him at the end. -While wounded and having one of his insane moments he meets his best friend, with whom he avoided contact since he was turned into a Ghoul. His best friend tells him that it´s alright and that he wants to help him. Then the scene cuts away and when the focus returns to him, Kaneki, in a almost trance like state, notices that when he came back to his senses his friend was gone and his mouth tated like blood. -Said main character then gets brutally beaten, by someone that stated he wanted to use his corpse as raw material for a weapon. By the end said character has a new weapon and Kaneki´s file is labled as [ERASED]. He even got one of those dead resolution scenes, completly deconstructing his entire struggles. I would post the last shot we got of him but I doubt you want to see someone with both his eyes stabbed out. -Two more characters, one of them the human Deuteragonist, either got killed or will be used for the same experiment that turned Kaneki into a Ghoul. -Yet another character, the old wise mentor type that wants to make up for the wrongs he has commited in the past, gets captured and used as a forced organ donor for said experiments, by his own daughter. -Two overall likeable characters were revealed to be part of an organisation that manipulated all of this for their amusement. Several more characters got maimed in the final fight, made wore by the fact that from the three factions involved the only one without loss were the clear villains, and the grief over lost loved ones. I dunno... maybe creating some kind of flikering soul-flame construct(s), if you know what I mean. 2
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 You remember the series I resently talked about, Tokyo Ghoul? I decided to track down the source material and it didn´t exactly became prettier, although the end left some things ambigious for the sequel. The main character´s sanity continued to be a bit... slippery but he stayed very sympathetic overall. Here´s what we get for him at the end. -While wounded and having one of his insane moments he meets his best friend, with whom he avoided contact since he was turned into a Ghoul. His best friend tells him that it´s alright and that he wants to help him. Then the scene cuts away and when the focus returns to him, Kaneki, in a almost trance like state, notices that when he came back to his senses his friend was gone and his mouth tated like blood. -Said main character then gets brutally beaten, by someone that stated he wanted to use his corpse as raw material for a weapon. By the end said character has a new weapon and Kaneki´s file is labled as [ERASED]. He even got one of those dead resolution scenes, completly deconstructing his entire struggles. I would post the last shot we got of him but I doubt you want to see someone with both his eyes stabbed out. -Two more characters, one of them the human Deuteragonist, either got killed or will be used for the same experiment that turned Kaneki into a Ghoul. -Yet another character, the old wise mentor type that wants to make up for the wrongs he has commited in the past, gets captured and used as a forced organ donor for said experiments, by his own daughter. -Two overall likeable characters were revealed to be part of an organisation that manipulated all of this for their amusement. Several more characters got maimed in the final fight, made wore by the fact that from the three factions involved the only one without loss were the clear villains, and the grief over lost loved ones. I dunno... maybe creating some kind of flikering soul-flame construct(s), if you know what I mean. That is so soul-crushing I have to wonder if a cynical super villain didn't write it to sap the hope from everyone who read it. One circlet mocking scene coming up. Maybe as a secondary. I'd pictured him as sort of a vampire-type Epic, but I'm not entirely sure how to do that or pull it off without making it cheesy. 2
Edgedancer he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 That is so soul-crushing I have to wonder if a cynical super villain didn't write it to sap the hope from everyone who read it. One circlet mocking scene coming up. Maybe as a secondary. I'd pictured him as sort of a vampire-type Epic, but I'm not entirely sure how to do that or pull it off without making it cheesy. I know what you mean. But at the very least I have to applaud the autor for having the galls to do that, apart from that "they were part of this evil organisation" revel, that one is stupid. You could always go a less insane Crow route. 2
Kobold King he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 That is so soul-crushing I have to wonder if a cynical super villain didn't write it to sap the hope from everyone who read it. One circlet mocking scene coming up. Maybe as a secondary. I'd pictured him as sort of a vampire-type Epic, but I'm not entirely sure how to do that or pull it off without making it cheesy. Note to self: don't watch anime or read manga. Ever. I really love the name Soulflicker, and I think a vampire-type Epic could be really cool. Maybe he can sap various attributes from those around him, able to use them for brief periods of time? Strength, health, mental speed... even Epic powers, if you're looking for a particularly powerful Epic. 2
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 (edited) I know what you mean. But at the very least I have to applaud the autor for having the galls to do that, apart from that "they were part of this evil organisation" revel, that one is stupid. You could always go a less insane Crow route. That reveal is one of the worst, ranking up there with "this nice guy was evil all along" and "it was all a dream" as the worst of all time. Maybe blood control of some sort? Or a hydro kinetic who uses his powers to control blood? Edit: I like that idea, Kobold. Only I think I'll keep it to stealing from vanillas, to keep him from being too OP. And even creepier, when you add Fridge Horror. Edited October 24, 2014 by TwiLyghtSansSparkles 2
Edgedancer he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 That reveal is one of the worst, ranking up there with "this nice guy was evil all along" and "it was all a dream" as the worst of all time. Maybe blood control of some sort? Or a hydro kinetic who uses his powers to control blood? Edit: I like that idea, Kobold. Only I think I'll keep it to stealing from vanillas, to keep him from being too OP. And even creepier, when you add Fridge Horror. For one of them it at least kind of makes sense, still a stretch no one would have made on their own, but for the other it was just straight out of left field. More akin to the Dracula hypnosis type or something like Mary? I do have to agree that it is a good idea. 2
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 For one of them it at least kind of makes sense, still a stretch no one would have made on their own, but for the other it was just straight out of left field. More akin to the Dracula hypnosis type or something like Mary? I do have to agree that it is a good idea. That's the worst kind of reveal-the one they tack on for the sake of a twist. Maybe they go into a trance while he's sapping from them? 1
Kobold King he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 That's the worst kind of reveal-the one they tack on for the sake of a twist. Maybe they go into a trance while he's sapping from them? Yeah, sometimes it can be painfully obvious when a story's trying too hard to be surprising and innovative. That sounds good. Does he have to touch a victim in order to start sapping? Perhaps he needs to make eye contact, in keeping with the vampire-hypnosis vibe?
mail-mi he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Wait...a temporary hemalurgist? O.o?? As long as he gives out cookies I approve. 2
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 Yeah, sometimes it can be painfully obvious when a story's trying too hard to be surprising and innovative. That sounds good. Does he have to touch a victim in order to start sapping? Perhaps he needs to make eye contact, in keeping with the vampire-hypnosis vibe? Definitely eye contact. Maybe blood contact strengthens the connection, allowing him to kill them quickly if he chooses? And maybe the blood doesn't have to be fresh so he keeps blood samples of everyone under his thumb on hand just in case? 1
mail-mi he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Definitely eye contact. Maybe blood contact strengthens the connection, allowing him to kill them quickly if he chooses? And maybe the blood doesn't have to be fresh so he keeps blood samples of everyone under his thumb on hand just in case? Yep, pretty sure you're just redeveloping hemalurgy
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 Yep, pretty sure you're just redeveloping hemalurgy I already have an evil Soother, so why not?
mail-mi he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Twi, I don't think pir2h checks this thread, so do you think you could message him to do so?
TwiLyghtSansSparkles she/her Posted October 24, 2014 Author Posted October 24, 2014 Sure. No problem.
Seonid he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 I already have an evil Soother, so why not? I've got an Atium Seer with a Shardblade and Radiant Shardplate. Everyone else post their epics that mimic Brandon's Cosmere powers 1
Kobold King he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 I've got an Atium Seer with a Shardblade and Radiant Shardplate. Everyone else post their epics that mimic Brandon's Cosmere powers Not Cosmere, but Backtrack's basically the camera from Legion. Though I didn't notice this until after I created him. 1
mail-mi he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Not Cosmere, but Backtrack's basically the camera from Legion. Though I didn't notice this until after I created him. Also not cosmere, but Timeport's kind of like an Epic from Steelheart 3
Kobold King he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Also not cosmere, but Timeport's kind of like an Epic from Steelheart Eh, sorry mail-mi but I'm just not seeing the resemblance. Perhaps you should be more specific? I actually really want to see an Awakener-like Epic. 1
mail-mi he/him Posted October 24, 2014 Posted October 24, 2014 Eh, sorry mail-mi but I'm just not seeing the resemblance. Perhaps you should be more specific? I actually really want to see an Awakener-like Epic. Voidgaze is kind of one with her white arm tassels. 3
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