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For the majority, I agree with your assessments.

Jasnah is by far the character I most relate to and admire. She's... Better than me in the areas where I accell, more strictly logical and intelligent.. and also much further emotionally constrained and misunderstood. 

What I find sad is that an assessment like this is needed in the first place. 

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15 hours ago, Calderis said:

For the majority, I agree with your assessments.

Jasnah is by far the character I most relate to and admire. She's... Better than me in the areas where I accell, more strictly logical and intelligent.. and also much further emotionally constrained and misunderstood. 

What I find sad is that an assessment like this is needed in the first place. 

Thank you, and I agree. It genuinely surprised me to find how many more scenes there were than I recalled with Jasnah. I thought I would have just a couple of big scenes, with a bunch of glimpses that I would need to delve into to really show but to find the sheer number turned this from a few day write up to a two week endeavor. It might be because most of her scenes are from another person's perspective that it is easy to just see the surface or forget what lies beneath. Seriously the back five with her view points can't come soon enough lol. 

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Something that you confirm with your in-depth analysis and something I've been arguing for awhile is that Jasnah is easily misunderstood both in story and by readers. By readers because most of what we get comes from Shallan's POV, and she's got a serious girl-crush on her mentor. On the few times we get into her head we actually get to see her vulnerable. In the first 2 books there's very few times where we see that vulnerability, we get more in OB but not much. In the narrative she's misunderstood because she projects strength so well. The lesson she give Shallan on the deck of Wind's Pleasure is how she lives her life. She isn't letting many people in, possibly because she's been hurt by those she's loved previously. Add to the fact of her heresy and the assumptions she has to deal with as a result of those beliefs and nobody is really probing beneath the surface. The advantage in that is love or hate her, she gives no one an opportunity to disregard or disrespect her. She's a force in the world with or without Surges.

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2 hours ago, Bigmikey357 said:

Something that you confirm with your in-depth analysis and something I've been arguing for awhile is that Jasnah is easily misunderstood both in story and by readers. By readers because most of what we get comes from Shallan's POV, and she's got a serious girl-crush on her mentor. On the few times we get into her head we actually get to see her vulnerable. In the first 2 books there's very few times where we see that vulnerability, we get more in OB but not much. In the narrative she's misunderstood because she projects strength so well. The lesson she give Shallan on the deck of Wind's Pleasure is how she lives her life. She isn't letting many people in, possibly because she's been hurt by those she's loved previously. Add to the fact of her heresy and the assumptions she has to deal with as a result of those beliefs and nobody is really probing beneath the surface. The advantage in that is love or hate her, she gives no one an opportunity to disregard or disrespect her. She's a force in the world with or without Surges.

Writing all this up has made me even more curious to find out what happened to Jasnah to change her from a child prodigy curious and full of questions, to the guarded and strong woman we know today. That is why upon going over each quote, I love Shallan's scene with the slave trader after the ship wreck. Jasnah is considered dead, but I think by seeing through Shallan's mind trying to emulate Jasnah, we could possibly have a hint at the way a young Jasnah learned to draw strength of logic and rational thought against the adversity surrounding her. 

1 hour ago, ILuvHats said:

It’s scary how long your post is.

LOL, it was even longer all together in the word doc I typed up because I had included the quotes in it. With the quotes included, it came to 71 pages. And that is Way of Kings and Words of Radiance alone. I still haven't covered Oathbringer lol. 

1 hour ago, Turin Turambar said:

I love Jasnah. Best Character ever. She's the most like me - even if it is slightly disturbing.

Lol she is epicness. I think Jasnah is important because society puts more value on those that are charismatic, work well with others, and are frequently vocal. Jasnah shows analytical skills, with measured responses and thoughtful silences can be just as beneficial in numerous areas of expertise and in some cases be preferred. Same thing with Renarin. Just because these traits are not what is prevalent does not mean they are "weird" or have lesser value. Jasnah can exist, be logical and rational, but at the same time be human and have a right to feel like she belongs. Her strength standing up to the cultures, societies and religions of her world is downright inspirational. 

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16 hours ago, Turin Turambar said:

I do want to know about that madness she had at childhood. Also, what I meant by that she's like me is that I understand her. It's probably related to the fact that I share the same MBTI as her. (INTJ).

I have a theory that she might have had a mild degree of paranoid schizophrenia. There is nothing concrete in the book nor WoB to back it up, but I feel it would explain a lot. 

I understand. I was just responding to the portion where you said "even if it is slightly disturbing". 

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@Pathfinder This is really well put together! I agree there is a person who cares deeply in there, but she is afraid of people hurting her.  

Paranoid for sure, schizophrenic I don't know. EDIT: My guess is she was locked up for a combo of being a stubborn female and telling people she was seeing things or hearing voices which were really a product of her starting to bond a spren. 

She keeps people at arms length for a variety of reasons. She alludes to her time in the asylum and how people close to her hurt her. That would make a child less trusting. She was stubborn from a young age and didn't like being told what to do or being reliant on others:

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"By age six, she was pointing out my logical fallacies as I tried to get her to go to bed on time." - WoR Ch. 77

"She wouldn't let me be a mother to her, Dalinar." Navani said ... "I would get close to her and there was this coldness" - WoR Ch. 67

A lot has been made of her single status "is she asexual, is she bi, lesbian?" I don't know her orientation, but I do know that having a spouse or lover would make it harder to keep her Radiant powers secret. They'd be around each other constantly. She has gone to great lengths for 6 years to make everyone think she has a fabrial soulcaster. Probably on some level afraid of getting locked up again or worse if people knew she could do magic. 

She seems to hide that she has plate, even now:

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"Instead, he found only Jasnah Kholin, looking completely nonplussed. A glow faded around her, different from the smoke of her Stormlight. Like geometric shapes outlining her ..." - OB CH. 120

You're in a huge battle in a city where buildings are collapsing, keep your armor on!

A spouse would mean being more tied down and she couldn't travel the world, one of your early quotes illustrates how much traveling she does in her studies. 

Part of her enjoys having a ward and she gets attached to Shallan quickly, but she rarely has wards. She is afraid of getting attached. 

Gavilar and her had a weird relationship where they were both keeping secrets from each other. She kept assassinations from him and he kept his secret society from her. 

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1 hour ago, Turin Turambar said:

So there is nothing concrete - what what supports this theory of yours?

Technically nothing which I readily realize and admit. Basically my theory is when Jasnah was a child she had a mild degree of paranoid schizophrenia. This would result in her having hallucinations no one else could see. Due to the manner in which the Ardentia treat the "insane", it would be plausible for Navani and Gavilar to send her away to get treated hoping to help her get better. Unfortunately since the treatment is very archaic compared to all we know in the real world, they ended up doing far more harm to Jasnah than good. For instance putting her in a dark room would allow her hallucinations to run rampant. Who knows what other forms of treatment they would do? Realizing she may never be free, and feeling tormented by the "treatment", Jasnah sought logic and rational thought to dispel her hallucinations. I draw upon the biography of John Nash Jr. He also was an intellectual beset by hallucinations brought on by paranoid schizophrenia. At that time electro shock therapy was a very common treatment. He viewed it as torture and over time employed logic and rational thought to try to tell the difference between reality and his hallucinations. Over the course of his life he had a degree of success. I think this enforced logical and rational view to overcome her hallucinations caused her to attract Ivory which led to her later bonding him. The reason there is nothing concrete to back this up, is all the tidbits we have are too loose. Her going "oh no not again" to the shadows could be attributed to a wide range of causes. So I could not claim my thoughts are the only reason that could cause it. It would explain a lot, but it wouldn't exclude any other possibilities. So that's my theory lol. 

 

 

1 hour ago, Child of Hodor said:

@Pathfinder This is really well put together! I agree there is a person who cares deeply in there, but she is afraid of people hurting her.  

Paranoid for sure, schizophrenic I don't know. EDIT: My guess is she was locked up for a combo of being a stubborn female and telling people she was seeing things or hearing voices which were really a product of her starting to bond a spren. 

She keeps people at arms length for a variety of reasons. She alludes to her time in the asylum and how people close to her hurt her. That would make a child less trusting. She was stubborn from a young age and didn't like being told what to do or being reliant on others:

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"By age six, she was pointing out my logical fallacies as I tried to get her to go to bed on time." - WoR Ch. 77

"She wouldn't let me be a mother to her, Dalinar." Navani said ... "I would get close to her and there was this coldness" - WoR Ch. 67

A lot has been made of her single status "is she asexual, is she bi, lesbian?" I don't know her orientation, but I do know that having a spouse or lover would make it harder to keep her Radiant powers secret. They'd be around each other constantly. She has gone to great lengths for 6 years to make everyone think she has a fabrial soulcaster. Probably on some level afraid of getting locked up again or worse if people knew she could do magic. 

She seems to hide that she has plate, even now:

You're in a huge battle in a city where buildings are collapsing, keep your armor on!

A spouse would mean being more tied down and she couldn't travel the world, one of your early quotes illustrates how much traveling she does in her studies. 

Part of her enjoys having a ward and she gets attached to Shallan quickly, but she rarely has wards. She is afraid of getting attached. 

Gavilar and her had a weird relationship where they were both keeping secrets from each other. She kept assassinations from him and he kept his secret society from her. 

Only thing is although jasnah does comment she has felt their eyes on her for some time, the scene where she first faces Ivory, is the first time she ever met him. She did not know who or what they were and mused to herself she has to research the experience. For me if she had already been bonding him, she would have recognized him when he appeared. I think it is an allusion to what happened to Shallan and Elhokar who felt like they were being watched. In Shallan's case she had bonded pattern when she was young, but she had blocked that part out of her memory. From what we have seen of Jasnah, she very much remembered what was done to her. Elhokar sees them in the mirrors, but Jasnah makes no mention of every seeing them. Only feeling them watching her. That is why I am not sure if I agree yet that Ivory was the reason she was locked up. I feel like it is something else. 

edit: though I realize as I re-read what I wrote, if someone was muttering to themselves "they are watching me, always watching me", I would be concerned for their mental health. So maybe ivory could have been the cause without Jasnah having to actually see him. 

I am not sure we can accurately say she was stubborn and didn't like being told what to do when she was young. Navani speaks of an inquisitive child who used to go to her with questions. Then when she hit adolescents something changed, and it was like she skipped to adulthood. That was when she began to shut people out. I think the event happened, then she became distant

That could be a potential as why she is single. Concerned about sharing her secret. I see what you are going for.

Gavilar and Jasnah I think there is a load of unknown information there. She seems by all rights to love her father, and was deeply hurt to see him killed. Yet she also comments on how he was originally distant till they bonded over the parshendi. Then she gets hurt again by his mistrust. So it really makes me wonder how their dynamic worked when she was younger. 

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@Pathfinder I am not discounting your theory outright... But I feel the need to question Jasnah's age at the time.

Schizophrenia typically manifests itself in the mid to late teen years. I fear she might have been too young, but to be fair we really don't know enough about her past. 

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3 hours ago, Pathfinder said:

I have a theory that she might have had a mild degree of paranoid schizophrenia. There is nothing concrete in the book nor WoB to back it up, but I feel it would explain a lot. 

I understand. I was just responding to the portion where you said "even if it is slightly disturbing". 

There was a recent post that looked at that in detail, and came to a very similar conclusion. A lot about her really fell into place if she was treated for mental illness as a child. 

You will want to look at this. 

 

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1 hour ago, Calderis said:

@Pathfinder I am not discounting your theory outright... But I feel the need to question Jasnah's age at the time.

Schizophrenia typically manifests itself in the mid to late teen years. I fear she might have been too young, but to be fair we really don't know enough about her past. 

Good point. I had not considered if there was an age range for schizophrenia. I agree the implication is that she was fairly young when all this occurred. Hmmm, something to definitely think on. I do admit my theory is out there. I will say doing this re-read has me wondering if it could actually be due to ivory but not directly. In the scene where she sees her shadows acting strange, and I believe one other, she muses that she had "felt their eyes watching her for some time". That is not an exact quote. Perhaps she confessed to Navani and Gavilar about the feeling of unseen eyes always on her, and they took that as madness?

1 hour ago, ZenBossanova said:

There was a recent post that looked at that in detail, and came to a very similar conclusion. A lot about her really fell into place if she was treated for mental illness as a child. 

You will want to look at this. 

 

Lol, I was the one that wrote it on that thread. My theory is that her schizophrenia is what got her locked up, and how she dealt with her schizophrenia to escape is what attracted Ivory. So Ivory would have come later, not caused the locking up. At least that is my theory. 

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2 hours ago, Pathfinder said:

Only thing is although jasnah does comment she has felt their eyes on her for some time, the scene where she first faces Ivory, is the first time she ever met him. She did not know who or what they were and mused to herself she has to research the experience. For me if she had already been bonding him, she would have recognized him when he appeared. I think it is an allusion to what happened to Shallan and Elhokar who felt like they were being watched. In Shallan's case she had bonded pattern when she was young, but she had blocked that part out of her memory. From what we have seen of Jasnah, she very much remembered what was done to her. Elhokar sees them in the mirrors, but Jasnah makes no mention of every seeing them. Only feeling them watching her. That is why I am not sure if I agree yet that Ivory was the reason she was locked up. I feel like it is something else. 

edit: though I realize as I re-read what I wrote, if someone was muttering to themselves "they are watching me, always watching me", I would be concerned for their mental health. So maybe ivory could have been the cause without Jasnah having to actually see him. 

I am not sure we can accurately say she was stubborn and didn't like being told what to do when she was young. Navani speaks of an inquisitive child who used to go to her with questions. Then when she hit adolescents something changed, and it was like she skipped to adulthood. That was when she began to shut people out. I think the event happened, then she became distant

That could be a potential as why she is single. Concerned about sharing her secret. I see what you are going for.

Gavilar and Jasnah I think there is a load of unknown information there. She seems by all rights to love her father, and was deeply hurt to see him killed. Yet she also comments on how he was originally distant till they bonded over the parshendi. Then she gets hurt again by his mistrust. So it really makes me wonder how their dynamic worked when she was younger. 

Yeah, I was thinking like how Elhokar was paranoid that people were watching him.  He wasn't anywhere near speaking the first ideal in the beginning of tWoK, but he was already seeing or sensing multiple spren out of the corner of his eye or over his shoulder in the mirror. Different Spren than her order, but still. 

It seems like some of the radiant spren types scout potential radiants in groups. When Jasnah earns Ivory's respect in the WoR prologue there are other spren watching:

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"It regarded her for a moment, then raised two fingers to its forehead and bowed, as if in respect, a cloak flourishing behind. Others had gathered beyond it, and they turned to each other, exchanging hushed whispers."

Lift and Wyndle were matched by "the Ring" much to Wyndle's chagrin. Spren other than Wyndle had observed Lift and found her suitable:

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"You realize that I didn't choose you," ... "I wanted to pick a distinguished Iriali matron." ... "But no, the Ring said we should choose you. 'She has visited the Old Magic,' they said. 'Our mother has blessed her,' they said. 'She will be young and we can mold her,' they said. Well, they don't have to put up with --" - WoR I-9

Point is it could have been very early in the process (like Elhokar) and she could have been sensing spren other than Ivory. 

The way Jasnah thinks about herself and her one episode doesn't fit with a lifelong mental illness:

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"my mind has always been the one thing I could rely upon."  Except once. - OB Ch. 47

Ivory has been with her 24/7 for 6 years and finds her remarkably stable for a human: 

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"Ivory, you think all humans are unstable." 

"Not you," he said, lifting his chin. "You are like a spren. You think by facts. You change not on simple whims."

- OB Ch. 47

 

Ivory is not a licensed medical professional, but I would think schizophrenia would manifest at some point in 6 years. He'd notice changes in her behavior & mental state. If she was having delusions that he didn't perceive he would not think that she "thinks by fact". Syl notices Kaladin's depression. Pattern worries about Shallan taking her personas too far and her extreme memory suppression(dissociative disorder). The nahel bond and radiant powers haven't helped their mental illnesses (Shallan's have been exacerbated). 

As @Calderis said it doesn't usually occur that young. It rarely first manifests before 16 or after 45 and men manifest it earlier than women. https://www.psycom.net/paranoid-schizophrenia

The paranoid part fits, but most of the other stuff doesn't. It can go into remission, but for her to have one episode when she was 10ish(?) and none in 25-28 years doesn't seem right. 

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Examples of the most common paranoid symptoms are:

  • delusions of persecution, reference, exalted birth, special mission, bodily change, or jealousy; 
  • hallucinatory voices that threaten the patient or give commands, or auditory hallucinations without verbal form, such as whistling, humming, or laughing; 
  • hallucinations of smell or taste, or of sexual or other bodily sensations; visual hallucinations may occur but are rarely predominant. 

The course of paranoid schizophrenia may be episodic, with partial or complete remissions, or chronic. In chronic cases, the florid symptoms persist over years and it is difficult to distinguish discrete episodes. The onset tends to be later than in the hebephrenic and catatonic forms. http://www.schizophrenia.com/szparanoid.htm

 

More likely she was perceiving things others couldn't for magical reasons one time and it stopped. It may not be spren bonding, but something. 

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16 hours ago, Child of Hodor said:

Yeah, I was thinking like how Elhokar was paranoid that people were watching him.  He wasn't anywhere near speaking the first ideal in the beginning of tWoK, but he was already seeing or sensing multiple spren out of the corner of his eye or over his shoulder in the mirror. Different Spren than her order, but still. 

It seems like some of the radiant spren types scout potential radiants in groups. When Jasnah earns Ivory's respect in the WoR prologue there are other spren watching:

Lift and Wyndle were matched by "the Ring" much to Wyndle's chagrin. Spren other than Wyndle had observed Lift and found her suitable:

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"You realize that I didn't choose you," ... "I wanted to pick a distinguished Iriali matron." ... "But no, the Ring said we should choose you. 'She has visited the Old Magic,' they said. 'Our mother has blessed her,' they said. 'She will be young and we can mold her,' they said. Well, they don't have to put up with --" - WoR I-9

Point is it could have been very early in the process (like Elhokar) and she could have been sensing spren other than Ivory. 

The way Jasnah thinks about herself and her one episode doesn't fit with a lifelong mental illness:

Ivory has been with her 24/7 for 6 years and finds her remarkably stable for a human: 

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"Ivory, you think all humans are unstable." 

"Not you," he said, lifting his chin. "You are like a spren. You think by facts. You change not on simple whims."

- OB Ch. 47

 

Ivory is not a licensed medical professional, but I would think schizophrenia would manifest at some point in 6 years. He'd notice changes in her behavior & mental state. If she was having delusions that he didn't perceive he would not think that she "thinks by fact". Syl notices Kaladin's depression. Pattern worries about Shallan taking her personas too far and her extreme memory suppression(dissociative disorder). The nahel bond and radiant powers haven't helped their mental illnesses (Shallan's have been exacerbated). 

As @Calderis said it doesn't usually occur that young. It rarely first manifests before 16 or after 45 and men manifest it earlier than women. https://www.psycom.net/paranoid-schizophrenia

The paranoid part fits, but most of the other stuff doesn't. It can go into remission, but for her to have one episode when she was 10ish(?) and none in 25-28 years doesn't seem right. 

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Examples of the most common paranoid symptoms are:

  • delusions of persecution, reference, exalted birth, special mission, bodily change, or jealousy; 
  • hallucinatory voices that threaten the patient or give commands, or auditory hallucinations without verbal form, such as whistling, humming, or laughing; 
  • hallucinations of smell or taste, or of sexual or other bodily sensations; visual hallucinations may occur but are rarely predominant. 

The course of paranoid schizophrenia may be episodic, with partial or complete remissions, or chronic. In chronic cases, the florid symptoms persist over years and it is difficult to distinguish discrete episodes. The onset tends to be later than in the hebephrenic and catatonic forms. http://www.schizophrenia.com/szparanoid.htm

 

More likely she was perceiving things others couldn't for magical reasons one time and it stopped. It may not be spren bonding, but something. 

Hmmm, the only thing that is conflicting (not against your theory, I mean in the information we have in general), is that Ivory states he bonded Jasnah against the wishes of his kind. Could they have been watching her because they saw the potential and wanted to be wary of her, but then one of them (Ivory) while watching felt drawn to her and ignored their protests? Hmmmm. 

Well again, my very loose theory is that the schizophrenia would have predated Ivory's interest in Jasnah. That the way she tried to cope with it using rational thought to tell the difference between hallucination and reality would have drawn him to her. So Jasnah having relied on it so much to judge her very reality by it, would seem like a beacon of logic to Ivory and lead him to say that. At least that is the line of thinking of my theory. 

Actually that made me remember the other instance I was drawing upon that now makes me think the age issue might not be as great an issue. Two girls aged 12 attempted to kill a third girl aged 12 because "slender man" told them to. One of the girl's father was medically diagnosed as schizophrenic and commented on how he would see demons in the backseat, and have to try to remind himself it wasn't real. He hadn't thought she exhibited any signs of it, and felt he failed at not helping her cope with the issues. Now that could have been used for the daughter to try and commute her sentence to plead insanity, but having a familial history of the illness could lend credence to their claim she had it and that is why she did what she did. So although it may come up in less circumstances, it could potentially still be on the table. Hmmm, more for me to think on!

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6 hours ago, Q10fanatic said:

I created an account (longtime lurker) just to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this deep dive into Jasnah's character and I hope that you get add Oathbringer to the analysis soon!

Thank you! I will do my best. Since there is one book left, part of me thinks it won't take as long as Way of Kings and Words of Radiance, but at the same token Oathbringer is pretty hefty all on its own. Since there is interest, I will get right to work on it!

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Ok, finally finished Oathbringer! Sorry for the delay. Here we go!

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Oathbringer page 95

Still, she tried to keep her head high, her back straight, and to walk more like her tutors had always instructed. Power was an illusion of perception, as Jasnah had said. The first step to being in control was to see yourself as capable of being in control.

 

 

Reinforcement of the lessons Jasnah taught Shallan. To the outside world Jasnah is cold, harsh, and in control always. But we see through her lessons to Shallan, it is a shield, it is armor to help protect the feelings inside, but also aid in survival at court.

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Oathbringer page 104

Dalinar nodded, squatting down beside the corpse, though Shallan had no idea what he expected to see. The fellow was very dead. “Perhaps if I put my son on the job, it will convince people I’m serious about finding the killer. Perhaps not—they might just think I’ve put someone in charge who can keep the secret. Storms, I miss Jasnah. She would have known how to spin this, to keep opinion from turning against us in court.

 

 

Another example of how Dalinar trusts and depended on Jasnah. She is capable and proficient in politics. That does not however mean she is a manipulative snake in the grass. Dalinar reasons the necessity of doing so and if he was more capable, he would do so himself. He even says he will do as much when at the end of the book it is revealed to him that Adolin is the one that murdered Sadeas.

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Oathbringer page 148

“Sorry,” Shallan said, making two fists before herself and shivering in glee. She’d spent so long feeling timid, it was so satisfying to hear a reference to her confidence. It was working! Jasnah’s teaching about practicing and acting like she was in control. It was working.

 

 

Just including this quote to further back up my earlier point about how Jasnah carries herself externally vs internally.

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Oathbringer page 151

“I don’t spend all my time hitting people with swords, Shallan,” Adolin said. “Jasnah and Aunt Navani made very certain that my youth was filled with interminable periods spent listening to ardents lecture me on politics and trade. Some of it stuck in my brain, against my natural inclinations. Those three books are the best of the ones I remember having read to me, though the last one is an updated version. I thought it might help.”

 

 

Another sign of Jasnah caring for her family. She and Navani looked after Adolin after Evi’s death, and made sure he had a good education. She took an interest in her cousins when she didn’t have to.

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Oathbringer page 161

A poised woman, not as flighty as Shallan, not as unintentionally silly. A woman who hadn’t been sheltered. A woman hard enough, strong enough, to wield this sword. A woman like … like Jasnah. Yes, Jasnah’s subtle smile, composure, and self-confidence. Shallan outlined her own face with these ideals, creating a harder version of it. Could … could she be this woman?

 

 

Despite all Shallan learned about Jasnah, it is interesting that she still has a very idealized view of her mentor

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Oathbringer page 163

“Brightlord Kholin?” Too formal. Right. That was how Radiant would act, of course—but she could allow herself some familiarity. Jasnah had done that. “I was merely,” Radiant said, “attempting to show the respect due a master from his humble pupil.”

 

 

I like this little tidbit, because it shows even when Jasnah is in command, she does still take the time to allow some familiarity and a personal touch.

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Oathbringer page 231

“A task?” Shallan snapped, causing the chicken to chirp at her again. “Mraize, I’m not going to do some task for you people. You killed Jasnah.”

“An enemy combatant,” Mraize said. “Oh, don’t look at me like that. You know full well what that woman was capable of, and what she got herself into by attacking us. Do you blame your wonderfully moral Blackthorn for what he did in war? The countless people he slaughtered?”

“Don’t deflect your evils by pointing out the faults of others,” Shallan said. “I’m not going to further your cause. I don’t care how much you demand that I Soulcast for you, I’m not going to do it.”

“So quick to insist, yet you acknowledge your debt. One Soulcaster lost, destroyed. But we forgive these things, for missions undertaken. And before you object again, know that the task we require of you is one you’re already undertaking. Surely you have sensed the darkness in this place. The … wrongness.” Shallan looked about the small room, flickering with shadows from a few candles on the counter. “Your task,” Mraize said, “is to secure this location. Urithiru must remain strong if we are to properly use the advent of the Voidbringers.”

“Use them?”

“Yes,” Mraize said. “This is a power we will control, but we must not let either side gain dominance yet. Secure Urithiru. Hunt the source of the darkness you feel, and expunge it. This is your task. And for it I will give payment in information.” He leaned closer to her and spoke a single word. “Helaran.”

 

 

I find this accusation of Mraize interesting. He implies that Jasnah struck first and the Ghostbloods were just retaliating. Thing is, as shown earlier, Jasnah discovered that the Ghostbloods were intent on taking advantage of the Desolations to gain power. She is trying to stop it to save her family and the world. We have no idea what was happening that resulted in Jasnah killing a member of the Ghostbloods. The common assumption is an assassination, but that is far from the only possibility, and personally I do not think was the case. I could easily see a circumstance occurring where while Jasnah was searching for information, an agent of the ghostbloods runs into her, and they end up in conflict over an ancient tome or piece of information. The battle results in Jasnah surviving and killing the agent of the Ghostbloods. Regardless the circumstance, the Ghostbloods hardly come out as an innocent organization. To me they are right up there with the Sons of Honor. One organization (Sons of Honor) wants to bring about the Desolations which will result in the deaths of countless innocent people to further their own agenda, the other organization (Ghostbloods) wants to manipulate the Desolation and prolong it resulting in even greater loss of life to further their own agenda. Sounds pretty similar to me.

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Oathbringer page 271

He had to do something. “Blade and Plate,” Dalinar said to Gavilar urgently. “I won them both, but I give them to you. A gift. For your children.” “Ha!” Gavilar said. “Jasnah? What would she do with Shards? No, no. You—” “Keep them,” Dalinar pled, grabbing his brother by the arm. “Please.” “Very well, if you insist,” Gavilar said. “I suppose you do already have Plate to give your heir.” “If I have one.” “You will!” Gavilar said, sending some men to recover Kalanor’s Blade and Plate. “Ha! Toh will have to agree, finally, that we can protect his line. I suspect the wedding will happen within the month!”

 

 

I find this dismissive comment by Gavilar interesting. He could mean it wouldn’t make sense to give it to Jasnah because since she is a woman, she would not wield it. However, I am surprised he wouldn’t consider it as a means to marry Jasnah off once she comes of age given I believe she is 6 years old at this time. Either way, Gavilar doesn’t think much regarding his daughter in this moment.  

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Oathbringer page 277

Shallan gritted her teeth, but found her anger … cool. Not gone. No, she would not forgive this man for killing Helaran. But the uncomfortable truth was that she didn’t know why, or how, her brother had fallen to Amaram. She could almost hear Jasnah whispering to her: Don’t judge without more details.

 

 

I like this scene because again it shows how Jasnah works. She doesn’t jump to conclusions. She doesn’t rush nor act without further information. Jasnah ingrained this so much that Shallan reminds herself of it, even when her brother’s killer is right in front of her. She thinks to herself, Jasnah would say not to judge without more details. Without gathering more information.

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Oathbringer page 334

He flipped through her pages. “What’s this section? Why take such care for where each text was found? Fiksin concluded that these Dawnchant books had all spread from a central location, and so there’s nothing to learn by where they ended up.”

“Fiksin was a boot-licker, not a scholar,” Ellista said. “Look, there’s easy proof here that the same writing system was once used all across Roshar. I have references in Makabakam, Sela Tales, Alethela … Not a diaspora of texts, but real evidence they wrote naturally in the Dawnchant.”

“Do you suppose they all spoke the same language?”

“Hardly.”

“But Jasnah Kholin’s Relic and Monument?”

“Doesn’t claim everyone spoke the same language, only that they wrote it. It’s foolish to assume that everyone used the same language across hundreds of years and dozens of nations. It makes more sense that there was a codified written language, the language of scholarship, just like you’ll find many undertexts written in Alethi now.”

“Ah…” he said. “And then a Desolation hit.…”

 

 

I like this brief scene simply because it shows that Jasnah is a published author that is known world wide and is respected. The woman certainly has to have quite a few credentials in her own right to be regarded as such.

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Oathbringer page 345

Jasnah was alive. Jasnah Kholin was alive. Shallan was supposed to be recovering from her ordeal, never mind that the bridgemen had handled the fighting. All she’d done was grope an eldritch spren. Still, she spent the next day holed up in her room sketching and thinking. Jasnah’s return sparked something in her. Shallan had once been more analytical in her drawing, including notes and explanations with the sketches. Lately she’d only been doing pages and pages of twisted images. Well, she’d been trained as a scholar, hadn’t she? She shouldn’t just draw; she should analyze, extrapolate, speculate. So, she addressed herself to fully recording her experiences with the Unmade. Adolin and Palona visited her separately, and even Dalinar came to check on her while Navani clicked her tongue and asked after her health. Shallan endured their company, then eagerly returned to her drawing. There were so many questions. Why exactly had she been able to drive the thing away? What was the meaning of its creations? Hanging over her research, however, was a single daunting fact. Jasnah was alive. Storms … Jasnah was alive. That changed everything. Eventually, Shallan couldn’t remain locked up any longer. Though Navani mentioned Jasnah was planning to visit her later in the evening, Shallan washed and dressed, then threw her satchel over her shoulder and went searching for the woman. She had to know how Jasnah had survived. In fact, as Shallan stalked the hallways of Urithiru, she found herself increasingly perturbed. Jasnah claimed to always look at things from a logical perspective, but she had a flair for the dramatic to rival any storyteller. Shallan well remembered that night in Kharbranth when Jasnah had lured thieves in, then dealt with them in stunning—and brutal—fashion. Jasnah didn’t want to merely prove her points. She wanted to drive them right into your skull, with a flourish and a pithy epigram. Why hadn’t she written via spanreed to let everyone know she had survived? Storms, where had she been all this time? A few inquiries led Shallan back to the pit with its spiraling stairs. Guards in sharp Kholin blue confirmed that Jasnah was below, so Shallan started trudging down those steps again, and was surprised to find that she felt no anxiety at the descent. In fact … the oppressive feelings she’d felt since they’d arrived at the tower seemed to have evaporated. No more fear, no more formless sense of wrongness. The thing she’d chased away had been its cause. Somehow, its aura had pervaded the entire tower. At the base of the stairs, she found more soldiers. Dalinar obviously wanted this place well guarded; she certainly couldn’t complain about that. These let her pass without incident, save a bow and a murmur of “Brightness Radiant.” She strode down the muraled hallway, the sphere lanterns set along the base of the walls making it pleasingly bright. Once she’d passed the empty library rooms to either side, she heard voices drifting toward her from ahead. She stepped up into the room where she’d faced the Midnight Mother, and got her first good look at the place when it wasn’t covered in writhing darkness. The crystal pillar at the center really was something incredible. It wasn’t a single gemstone, but a myriad of them fused together: emerald, ruby, topaz, sapphire … All ten varieties seemed to have been melted into a single thick pillar, twenty feet tall. Storms … what would it look like if all those gems were somehow infused, rather than dun as they were at the moment? A large group of guards stood at a barricade near the other side of the room, looking down into the tunnel where the Unmade had vanished. Jasnah rounded the giant pillar, freehand resting on the crystal. The princess wore red, lips painted to match, hair up and run through with swordlike hairspikes with rubies on the pommels. Storms. She was perfect. A curvaceous figure, tan Alethi skin, light violet eyes, and not a hint of aberrant color to her jet-black hair. Making Jasnah Kholin as beautiful as she was brilliant was one of the most unfair things the Almighty had ever done. Shallan hesitated in the doorway, feeling much as she had upon seeing Jasnah for the first time in Kharbranth. Insecure, overwhelmed, and—if she was honest—incredibly envious. Whatever ordeals Jasnah had been through, she looked no worse for wear. That was remarkable, considering that the last time Shallan had seen Jasnah, the woman had been lying unconscious on the floor while a man rammed a knife through her chest.

“My mother,” Jasnah said, hand still on the pillar, not looking toward Shallan, “thinks this must be some kind of incredibly intricate fabrial. A logical assumption; we’ve always believed that the ancients had access to great and wonderful technology. How else do you explain Shardblades and Shardplate?”

“Brightness?” Shallan said. “But … Shardblades aren’t fabrials. They’re spren, transformed by the bond.”

“As are fabrials, after a manner of speaking,” Jasnah said. “You do know how they’re made, don’t you?”

“Only vaguely,” Shallan said. This was how their reunion went? A lecture? Fitting.

“You capture a spren,” Jasnah said, “and imprison it inside a gemstone crafted for the purpose. Artifabrians have found that specific stimuli will provoke certain responses in the spren. For example, flamespren give off heat—and by pressing metal against a ruby with a flamespren trapped inside, you can increase or decrease that heat.”

“That’s…”

“Incredible?”

“Horrible,” Shallan said. She’d known some of this, but to contemplate it directly appalled her. “Brightness, we’re imprisoning spren?”

“No worse than hitching a wagon to a chull.”

“Sure, if in order to get a chull to pull a wagon, you first had to lock it in a box forever.” Pattern hummed softly from her skirts in agreement. Jasnah just cocked an eyebrow.

“There are spren and there are spren, child.” She rested her fingers on the pillar again. “Do a sketch of this for me. Be certain to get the proportions and colors right, if you please.” The careless presumption of the command hit Shallan like a slap in the face. What was she, some servant to be given orders? Yes, a part of her affirmed. That’s exactly what you are. You’re Jasnah’s ward. The request wasn’t at all unusual in that light, but compared to how she had grown accustomed to being treated, it was … Well, it wasn’t worth taking offense at, and she should accept that. Storms, when had she grown so touchy? She took out her sketchpad and got to work. “I was heartened to hear that you had made it here on your own,” Jasnah said. “I … apologize for what happened on Wind’s Pleasure. My lack of foresight caused the deaths of many, and doubtless hardship for you, Shallan. Please accept my regret.” Shallan shrugged, sketching. “You’ve done very well,” Jasnah continued. “Imagine my amazement when I reached the Shattered Plains, only to discover that the warcamp had already relocated to this tower. What you have accomplished is brilliant, child. We will need to speak further, however, about the group that again tried to assassinate me. The Ghostbloods will almost certainly start targeting you, now that you’ve begun progressing toward your final Ideals.”

“You’re sure it was the Ghostbloods that attacked the ship?”

“Of course I am.” She glanced at Shallan, lips turning down. “Are you certain you are well enough to be about, child? You seem uncharacteristically reserved.”

“I’m fine.”

“You’re displeased because of the secrets I kept.”

“We all need secrets, Brightness. I know this more than anyone. But it would have been nice if you had let us know you were alive.” Here I was assuming I could handle things on my own—assuming I’d have to handle things on my own. But all that time, you were on your way back to toss everything into the air again.

“I only had the opportunity upon reaching the warcamps,” Jasnah said, “and there decided that I couldn’t risk it. I was tired and unprotected. If the Ghostbloods wished to finish me off, they could have done so at their leisure. I determined that a few more days of everyone believing I was dead would not greatly increase their distress.”

“But how did you even survive in the first place?”

“Child, I’m an Elsecaller.”

“Of course. An Elsecaller, Brightness. A thing you never explained; a word which no one but the most dedicated scholar of the esoteric would recognize! That explains it perfectly.” Jasnah smiled for some reason.

“All Radiants have an attachment to Shadesmar,” Jasnah said. “Our spren originate there, and our bond ties us to them. But my order has special control over moving between realms. I was able to shift to Shadesmar to escape my would-be assassins.”

“And that helped with the knife in your storming chest?”

“No,” Jasnah said. “But surely by now you’ve learned the value of a little Stormlight when it comes to bodily wounds?” Of course she had, and she could probably have guessed all of this. But for some reason she didn’t want to accept that. She wanted to remain annoyed at Jasnah. “My true difficulty was not escaping, but returning,” Jasnah said. “My powers make it easy to transfer to Shadesmar, but getting back to this realm is no small feat. I had to find a transfer point—a place where Shadesmar and our realm touch—which is far, far more difficult than one might assume. It’s like … going downhill one way, but uphill to get back.” Well, perhaps her return would take some pressure off Shallan. Jasnah could be “Brightness Radiant” and Shallan could be … well, whatever she was. “We will need to converse further,” Jasnah said. “I would hear the exact story, from your perspective, of the discovery of Urithiru. And I assume you have sketches of the transformed parshmen? That will tell us much. I … believe I once disparaged the usefulness of your artistic skill. I now find reason to call myself foolish for that presumption.”

“It’s fine, Brightness,” Shallan said with a sigh, still sketching the pillar. “I can get you those things, and there is a lot to talk about.” But how much of it would she be able to say? How would Jasnah react, for instance, to finding that Shallan had been dealing with the Ghostbloods? It’s not like you’re really a part of their organization, Shallan thought to herself. If anything, you’re using them for information. Jasnah might find that admirable. Shallan still wasn’t eager to broach the topic.

“I feel lost…” Jasnah said. Shallan looked up from her sketchbook to find the woman regarding the pillar again, speaking softly, as if to herself. “For years I was at the very forefront of all this,” Jasnah said. “One short stumble, and I find myself scrambling to stay afloat. These visions that my uncle is having … the refounding of the Radiants in my absence … “That Windrunner. What do you think of him, Shallan? I find him much as I imagined his order, but I have only met him once. It has all come so quickly. After years of struggling in the shadows, everything coming to light—and despite my years of study—I understand so very little.” Shallan continued her sketch. It was nice to be reminded that, for all their differences, there were occasional things that she and Jasnah shared. She just wished that ignorance weren’t at the top of the list.

 


 

Jasnah has returned. Jasnah is alive! The very revelation changes Shallan. Gives her some focus. Brings her back to her scholarly aspirations. Causing her to re-examine a lot of what she has gone through and trying to learn from it. In a way it is much like a student that was given a homework assignment and left to their own devices. Then once they realize the teacher is returning, they quickly scramble to make up all the lost time, and worry about how their work will look. She then muses in (to me) a way that indicates she is hurt. Jasnah did not confide in Shallan that she had survived. Shallan was left out of the loop and grieved over her loss mentor. In a way she feels a bit betrayed. She also seems a bit upset over having to track Jasnah down to talk instead of the other way around, while forgetting that she just mused to herself that she locked herself away to recover and examine what she just went through. So it is not exactly Jasnah’s fault for giving Shallan space, space that Shallan herself required and got annoyed at any interruptions (from everyone, Adolin included). Shallan again thinks of Jasnah as perfect based on her appearance. Through our journey through Way of Kings and Words of Radiance we know far more lies beneath. Despite all she has learned of Jasnah, Shallan still sees her mentor as flawless and is envious of her. She thinks that Jasnah came out of the attempted assassination without any problems, when we know the truth is quite the opposite. Jasnah was distraught and torn up over abandoning Shallan and the crew against her own will by Ivory pulling her into Shadesmar. When she met Hoid, she was burned, dirty, and exhausted from unknown trials and danger. Just because Jasnah looks composed now, does not mean the woman did not have to fight and was not hurt during the intervening time.

Shallan is then hurt/annoyed that their reunion starts with Jasnah lecturing her. She says to herself how it is “fitting” in a bitter manner. However I would argue it is fitting because of how Jasnah is. It is how Jasnah copes. Outwardly she is logical and focused, while inwardly she feels. The glimpse we saw of how upset she was over Shallan’s supposedly attempted suicide is to show us that just because Jasnah does not blatantly show her emotions, does not mean those emotions do not exist. For all we know when Jasnah found out Shallan survived and all she accomplished, Jasnah could have (and I feel probably did) been filled with relief, pride and joy. So to me, it is not entirely fair for Shallan, despite all she has learned about Jasnah, to be upset about how Jasnah goes about their reuniting. Jasnah confirms this by then apologizing to Shallan. She takes what happened on herself, when anyone could make the same mistake, especially when she was single handedly fighting an entire organization with resources that transcend the planet, all while doing her best to do a game of catch up with the fate of the world on the line. I mean jeez, talk about high expectations. Jasnah is smart and capable, but she isn’t inhuman. Or at least that is my opinion, and I feel all the quotes I am providing support that.

Jasnah then extols Shallan for all her accomplishments, and warns her that she is almost certainly in danger. Jasnah then notices the change in Shallan’s tone that causes her to be concerned for Shallan. Shallan says she is upset for not being told Jasnah was alive, but we also see her being honest with herself that the real reason she is upset is that by Jasnah returning, Shallan begins to question her capabilities again. Here is someone that in her head, is so capable as to be perfect. What are her accomplishments when held against Jasnah? I do not fault Shallan for feeling this way because it happens to all of us sometimes, but we also know this is not true, nor fair towards Jasnah. Shallan gets snarky with Jasnah, and Jasnah smiles. Shallan doesn’t understand why, but for me, I think this is Jasnah being happy about returning to their old dynamic. I think Jasnah missed Shallan, and Shallan getting snarky with her is familiar. It causes a warm feeling for Jasnah. Remember although Jasnah does not outwardly show emotion, I think it is safe to say in the journey we have been on, we have seen how deeply Jasnah cares for Shallan. In some ways, Shallan views Jasnah’s return as a relief. Someone else that can take over from all the pressures. Let Jasnah be “Brightness Radiant”.

The scene closes by given us another glimpse into vulnerable Jasnah. She feels lost, drowning in all the information she has to catch up on. She struggled for so long, and now that everything is being revealed, she feels like she knew nothing to begin with. For such a scholar, it must be very upsetting.


 

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Oathbringer page 399

“All right,” Dalinar said. “Bring in Navani and Jasnah.” He eventually planned to show this vision to the young emperor of Azir, but first he wanted to prepare. “Put them somewhere close to me, please. Let them keep their own clothing.” Nearby, two men stopped in place. A mist of glowing Stormlight obscured their forms, and when the mist faded, Navani and Jasnah stood there, wearing havahs. Dalinar jogged over to them. “Welcome to my madness, ladies.” Navani turned about, craning her neck to stare up at the tops of the castle-like rock formations. She glanced toward a group of soldiers who limped past, one man helping his wounded companion and calling for Regrowth.

“Storms!” Navani whispered. “It feels so real.”

“I did warn you,” Dalinar said. “Hopefully you don’t look too ridiculous back in the rooms.” Though he had become familiar enough with the visions that his body no longer acted out what he was doing in them, that wouldn’t be so for Jasnah, Navani, or any of the monarchs he brought in.

“What is that woman doing?” Jasnah asked, curious. A younger woman met the limping men. A Radiant? She had the look about her, though she wasn’t armored. It was more her air of confidence, the way she settled them down and took something glowing from the pouch at her belt.

“I remember this,” Dalinar said. “It’s one of those devices I mentioned from another vision. The ones that provide Regrowth, as they call it. Healing.” Navani’s eyes widened, and she beamed like a child who had been given a plate full of sweets for Middlefest. She gave Dalinar a quick hug, then hurried over to watch. She stepped right up to the side of the group, then waved impatiently for the Radiant to continue. Jasnah turned to look around the canyon.

“I know of no place in our time of this description, Uncle. This seems like the stormlands, from those formations.”

“Maybe it’s lost somewhere in the Unclaimed Hills?”

“That, or it’s been so long the rock formations have weathered away completely.” She narrowed her eyes at a group of people who came through the canyon, carrying water to the soldiers. Last time, Dalinar had stumbled down into the canyon just in time to meet them and get a drink. You’re needed above, one had told him, pointing up the shallow slope along the side of the canyon opposite where he had been fighting. “That clothing,” Jasnah said softly. “Those weapons…”

“We’ve gone back to ancient times.”

“Yes, Uncle,” Jasnah said. “But didn’t you tell me this vision comes at the end of the Desolations?”

“From what I remember of it, yes.”

“So the vision with the Midnight Essence happened before this, chronologically. Yet you saw steel, or at least iron, in that one. Remember the poker?”

“I’m not likely to forget.” He rubbed his chin. “Iron and steel then, but men wielding crude weapons here, of copper and bronze. As if they didn’t know how to Soulcast iron, or at least not how to forge it properly, despite it being a later date. Huh. That is odd.”

“This is confirmation of what we’ve been told, but which I could never quite believe. The Desolations were so terrible they destroyed learning and progress and left behind a broken people.”

“The orders of Radiants were supposed to stop that,” Dalinar said. “I learned it in another vision.”

“Yes, I read that one. All of them, actually.” She looked to him then, and smiled. People were always surprised to see emotion from Jasnah, but Dalinar considered that unfair. She did smile—she merely reserved the expression for when it was most genuine. “Thank you, Uncle,” she said. “You have given the world a grand gift. A man can be brave in facing down a hundred enemies, but coming into these—and recording them rather than hiding them—was bravery on an entirely different level.”

“It was mere stubbornness. I refused to believe I was mad.”

“Then I bless your stubbornness, Uncle.” Jasnah pursed her lips in thought, then continued more softly. “I’m worried about you, Uncle. What people are saying.”

“You mean my heresy?” Dalinar said.

“I’m less worried about the heresy itself, and more how you’re dealing with the backlash.” Ahead of them, Navani had somehow bullied the Radiant into letting her look at the fabrial. The day was stretching toward late afternoon, the canyon falling into shadow. But this vision was a long one, and he was content to wait upon Navani. He settled down on a rock.

“I don’t deny God, Jasnah,” he said. “I simply believe that the being we call the Almighty was never actually God.”

“Which is the wise decision to make, considering the accounts of your visions.” Jasnah settled down beside him.

“You must be happy to hear me say that,” he said.

“I’m happy to have someone to talk to, and I’m certainly happy to see you on a journey of discovery. But am I happy to see you in pain? Am I happy to see you forced to abandon something you held dear?” She shook her head. “I don’t mind people believing what works for them, Uncle. That’s something nobody ever seems to understand—I have no stake in their beliefs. I don’t need company to be confident.”

“How do you suffer it, Jasnah?” Dalinar said. “The things people say about you? I see the lies in their eyes before they speak. Or they will tell me, with utter sincerity, things I have reportedly said—even though I deny them. They refuse my own word against the rumors about me!” Jasnah stared out across the canyon. More men were gathering at the other end, a weak, beleaguered group who were only now discovering they were the victors in this contest. A large column of smoke rose in the distance, though he couldn’t see the source.

“I wish I had answers, Uncle,” Jasnah said softly. “Fighting makes you strong, but also callous. I worry I have learned too much of the latter and not enough of the former. But I can give you a warning.” He looked toward her, raising his eyebrows. “They will try,” Jasnah said, “to define you by something you are not. Don’t let them. I can be a scholar, a woman, a historian, a Radiant. People will still try to classify me by the thing that makes me an outsider. They want, ironically, the thing I don’t do or believe to be the prime marker of my identity. I have always rejected that, and will continue to do so.” She reached over and put her freehand on his arm. “You are not a heretic, Dalinar Kholin. You are a king, a Radiant, and a father. You are a man with complicated beliefs, who does not accept everything you are told. You decide how you are defined. Don’t surrender that to them. They will gleefully take the chance to define you, if you allow it.” Dalinar nodded slowly. “Regardless,” Jasnah said, standing. “This is probably not the best occasion for such a conversation. I realize we can replay this vision at will, but the number of storms in which we can do it will be limited. I should be exploring.”

“Last time, I went that way,” Dalinar said, pointing up the slope. “I’d like to see what I saw again.”

“Excellent. We’d best split to cover more ground. I will go in the other direction, then we can meet afterward and compare notes.” She took off down the slope toward the largest gathering of men. Dalinar stood up and stretched, his earlier exertion still weighing on him. A short time later Navani returned, mumbling explanations of what she’d seen under her breath. Teshav sat with her in the waking world, and Kalami with Jasnah, recording what they said—the only way to take notes in one of these visions. Navani took his arm in hers and looked after Jasnah, a fond smile on her lips. No, none would think Jasnah emotionless if they’d witnessed that tearful reunion between mother and daughter.

“How did you ever mother that one?” Dalinar asked.

“Mostly without letting her realize she was being mothered,” Navani said. She pulled him close. “That fabrial is wonderful, Dalinar. It’s like a Soulcaster.”

“In what way?”

“In that I have no idea how it works! I think … I think something is wrong with the way we’ve been viewing the ancient fabrials.” He looked to her, and she shook her head. “I can’t explain yet.”

“Navani…” he prodded.

“No,” she said stubbornly. “I need to present my ideas to the scholars, see if what I’m thinking even makes sense, and then prepare a report. That’s the short of it, Dalinar Kholin. So be patient.”

“I probably won’t understand half of what you say anyway,” he grumbled. He didn’t immediately start them up in the direction he’d gone before. Last time he’d been prompted by someone in the vision. He’d acted differently this time. Would the same prompting still come? He had to wait only a short time until an officer came running up to them. “You there,” the man said. “Malad-son-Zent, isn’t that your name? You’re promoted to sergeant. Head to base camp three.” He pointed up the incline. “Up over that knob there, down the other side. Hop to it!” He spared a frown for Navani—to his eyes, the two of them didn’t belong standing in such a familial pose—but then charged off without another word. Dalinar smiled.

“What?” Navani said.

“These are set experiences that Honor wanted me to have. Though there’s freedom in them, I suspect that the same information will be conveyed no matter what I do.”

“So, do you want to disobey?” Dalinar shook his head.

“There are some things I need to see again—now that I understand this vision is accurate, I know better questions to ask.” They started up the incline of smooth rock, walking arm in arm. Dalinar felt unexpected emotions start to churn within him, partially due to Jasnah’s words. But this was something deeper: a welling of gratitude, relief, even love.

“Dalinar?” Navani asked. “Are you well?”

“I’m just … thinking,” he said, trying to keep his voice even. “Blood of my fathers … it’s been nearly half a year, hasn’t it? Since all this started? All that time, I came to these alone. It’s just good to share the burden, Navani. To be able to show this to you, and to know for once—absolutely and certainly—that what I’m seeing isn’t merely in my own mind.”

 

 

This is one of my favorite scenes with Jasnah. It shows so much about her that was hidden over the course of the books, laid bare. First we see Jasnah business as usual, analyzing the vision for historical accuracy, and information. That is how she reasons that the cause of the inconsistent technological level despite the chronological nature of the Visions is how utterly devastating the Desolations were. They destroyed learning and progress, leaving behind a broken people. The Radiants were supposed to stop that. Now they are experiencing a desolation where the Radiants aren’t anywhere near the same number they were, without anywhere close the knowledge of the surges. The situation looks pretty dire to me. Despite the looming threat Jasnah smiles. Why? Because she sees the visions as gift to help them survive the coming end of the world. She admires and loves Dalinar. She recognizes how hard it was on him to hold true to the visions even after everyone (including his own son) thought him mad. She then expresses concern for him and the backlash from the church. She doesn’t take this time to say “ha I told you so”. She doesn’t say “see? The church is horrible!”. Not at all. What she says is she is concerned about how he feels. She knows how important religion became to Dalinar. She knows how much it must pain him to be at odds with the church, and even more at odds with his best friend Kadash. Even Dalinar of all people, assume Jasnah would exult in another heretic joining her ranks. But that does not matter to her. It does not matter to her that he still believes in a god, just that it is not the Almighty. No, she is happy to be able to talk to the uncle she loves. She is pained to see him in pain. She feels sorrow for his loss. She has no problem with people believing in what works for them. No one seems to understand that about her no matter how many times she says it. He asks how she can stand the things people say about her. How they treat her, and she is open and honest in her response. She doesn’t know. She has had to fight for every inch. She has had to fight to hold her beliefs. She has had to fight to be herself. People will try to classify you, and belittle you based on things that actually don’t apply to you at all, just so it is easier for them to cast you aside. She rejects that. She chooses to define herself, and suggests he does the same. Brandon then takes the time to mention Navani and Jasnah’s reunion. The cold and distant Jasnah in tears when reunited with her mother. The scene closes with Dalinar finally feeling the relief and love that comes from knowing he can finally share his burden with Navani and Jasnah. This scene really hits every single point I have been hitting this entire way through this thread.



 

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“Shallan can take notes for us,” Jasnah said. Shallan looked up from her notebook. She’d settled against the tile-covered wall, sitting on the floor in her blue havah, and had intended to spend the meeting doing sketches. It had been over a week since her recovery and subsequent meeting with Jasnah at the crystal pillar. Shallan was feeling better and better, and at the same time less and less like herself. What a surreal experience it was, following Jasnah around as if nothing had changed. Today, Dalinar had called a meeting of his Radiants, and Jasnah had suggested the basement rooms of the tower because they were so well secured. She was incredibly worried about being spied upon. The rows of dust had been removed from the library floor; Navani’s flock of scholars had carefully catalogued every splinter. The emptiness served only to underscore the absence of the information they’d hoped to find. Now everyone was looking at her. “Notes?” Shallan asked. She’d barely been following the conversation. “We could call for Brightness Teshav.…” So far, it was a small group. The Blackthorn, Navani, and their core Surgebinders: Jasnah, Renarin, Shallan, and Kaladin Stormblessed, the flying bridgeman. Adolin and Elhokar were away, visiting Vedenar to survey the military capacities of Taravangian’s army. Malata was working the Oathgate for them. “No need to call in another scribe,” Jasnah said. “We covered shorthand in your training, Shallan. I’d see how well you’ve retained the skill. Be fastidious; we will need to report to my brother what we determine here.” The rest of them had settled into a group of chairs except for Kaladin, who stood leaning against the wall. Looming like a thundercloud. He had killed Helaran, her brother. The emotion of that peeked out, but Shallan smothered it, stuffing it into the back of her mind. Kaladin wasn’t to be blamed for that. He’d just been defending his brightlord. She stood up, feeling like a chastened child. The weight of their stares prodded her to walk over and take a seat beside Jasnah with her pad open and pencil ready. “So,” Kaladin said. “According to the Stormfather, not only is the Almighty dead, but he condemned ten people to an eternity of torture. We call them Heralds, and they’re not only traitors to their oaths, they’re probably also mad. We had one of them in our custody—likely the maddest of the lot—but we lost him in the turmoil of getting everyone to Urithiru. In short, everyone who might have been able to help us is crazy, dead, a traitor, or some combination of the three.” He folded his arms. “Figures.” Jasnah glanced at Shallan. She sighed, then recorded a summary of what he’d said. Even though it was already a summary. “So what do we do with this knowledge?” Renarin said, leaning forward with his hands clasped. “We must curb the Voidbringer assault,” Jasnah said. “We can’t let them secure too great a foothold.” “The parshmen aren’t our enemies,” Kaladin said softly. Shallan glanced at him. There was something about that wavy dark hair, that grim expression. Always serious, always solemn—and so tense. Like he had to be strict with himself to contain his passion. “Of course they’re our enemies,” Jasnah said. “They’re in the process of conquering the world. Even if your report indicates they aren’t as immediately destructive as we feared, they are still an enormous threat.” “They just want to live better lives,” Kaladin said. “I can believe,” Jasnah said, “that the common parshmen have such a simple motive. But their leaders? They will pursue our extinction.” “Agreed,” Navani said. “They were born out of a twisted thirst to destroy humankind.” “The parshmen are the key,” Jasnah said, shuffling through some pages of notes. “Looking over what you discovered, it seems that all parshmen can bond with ordinary spren as part of their natural life cycle. What we’ve been calling ‘Voidbringers’ are instead a combination of a parshman with some kind of hostile spren or spirit.” “The Fused,” Dalinar said. “Great,” Kaladin said. “Fine. Let’s fight them, then. Why do the common folk have to get crushed in the process?” “Perhaps,” Jasnah said, “you should visit my uncle’s vision and see for yourself the consequences of a soft heart. Firsthand witness of a Desolation might change your perspective.” “I’ve seen war, Brightness. I’m a soldier. Problem is, Ideals have expanded my focus. I can’t help but see the common men among the enemy. They’re not monsters.” Dalinar raised a hand to stop Jasnah’s reply. “Your concern does you credit, Captain,” Dalinar said. “And your reports have been exceptionally timely. Do you honestly see a chance for an accommodation here?” “I … I don’t know, sir. Even the common parshmen are furious at what was done to them.” “I can’t afford to stay my hand from war,” Dalinar said. “Everything you say is right, but it is also nothing new. I have never gone to battle where some poor fools on either side—men who didn’t want to be there in the first place—weren’t going to bear the brunt of the pain.” “Maybe,” Kaladin said, “that should make you reconsider those other wars, rather than using them to justify this one.” Shallan’s breath caught. It didn’t seem the sort of thing you said to the Blackthorn. “Would that it were so simple, Captain.” Dalinar sighed loudly, looking … weathered to Shallan. “Let me say this: If we can be certain of one thing, it is the morality of defending our homeland. I don’t ask you to go to war idly, but I will ask you to protect. Alethkar is besieged. The men doing it might be innocents, but they are controlled by those who are evil.” Kaladin nodded slowly. “The king has asked my help in opening the Oathgate. I’ve agreed to give it to him.” “Once we secure our homeland,” Dalinar said, “I promise to do something I’d never have contemplated before hearing your reports. I’ll seek to negotiate; I’ll see if there is some way out of this that doesn’t involve smashing our armies together.” “Negotiate?” Jasnah said. “Uncle, these creatures are crafty, ancient, and angry. They spent millennia torturing the Heralds just to return and seek our destruction.” “We’ll see,” Dalinar said. “Unfortunately, I haven’t been able to contact anyone in the city with the visions. The Stormfather has found Kholinar to be a ‘dark spot’ to him.” Navani nodded. “That seems, unfortunately, to coordinate with the failure of the spanreeds in the city. Captain Kaladin’s report confirms what our last notes from the city said: The enemy is mobilizing for an assault on the capital. We can’t know what the city’s status will be once our strike force arrives. You might have to infiltrate an occupied city, Captain.” “Please send that it isn’t so,” Renarin whispered, eyes down. “How many would have died on those walls, fighting nightmares…” “We need more information,” Jasnah said. “Captain Kaladin, how many people can you take with you to Alethkar?” “I plan to fly at the front of a storm,” Kaladin said. “Like I did returning to Urithiru. It’s a bumpy ride, but maybe I can fly over the top of the winds. I need to test it. Anyway, I think I could bring a small group.” “You won’t need a large force,” Dalinar said. “You, a few of your best squires. I’d send Adolin with you too, so you have another Shardbearer in an emergency. Six, perhaps? You, three of your men, the king, Adolin. Get past the enemy, sneak into the palace, and activate the Oathgate.” “Pardon if this is out of line,” Kaladin said, “but Elhokar himself is the odd one. Why not just send me and Adolin? The king will probably slow us down.” “The king needs to go for personal reasons. Will there be a problem between you?” “I’ll do what is right, regardless of my feelings, sir. And … I might be beyond those feelings anyway, now.” “This is too small,” Jasnah mumbled. Shallan started, then glanced at her. “Too small?” “Not ambitious enough,” Jasnah said more firmly. “By the Stormfather’s explanation, the Fused are immortal. Nothing stops their rebirth now that the Heralds have failed. This is our real problem. Our enemy has a near-endless supply of parshman bodies to inhabit, and judging by what the good captain has confirmed through experience, these Fused can access some kind of Surgebinding. How do we fight against that?” Shallan looked up from her notepad, glancing toward the others in the room. Renarin still leaned forward, hands clasped, eyes on the floor. Navani and Dalinar were sharing a look. Kaladin continued to lean against the wall, arms folded, but he shifted his posture, uncomfortable. “Well,” Dalinar finally said. “We’ll have to take this one goal at a time. First Kholinar.” “Pardon, Uncle,” Jasnah said. “While I don’t disagree with that first step, now is not the time to think only of the immediate future. If we are to avoid a Desolation that breaks society, then we’ll need to use the past as our guide and make a plan.” “She’s right,” Renarin whispered. “We’re facing something that killed the Almighty himself. We fight terrors that break the minds of men and ruin their souls. We can’t think small.” He ran his hands through his hair, which was marked by less yellow than his brother’s. “Almighty. We have to think big—but can we take it all in without going mad ourselves?” Dalinar took a deep breath. “Jasnah, you have a suggestion of where to start this plan?” “Yes. The answer is obvious. We need to find the Heralds.” Kaladin nodded in agreement. “Then,” Jasnah added, “we need to kill them.” “What?” Kaladin demanded. “Woman, are you insane?” “The Stormfather laid it out,” Jasnah said, unperturbed. “The Heralds made a pact. When they died, their souls traveled to Damnation and trapped the spirits of the Voidbringers, preventing them from returning.” “Yeah. Then the Heralds were tortured until they broke.” “The Stormfather said their pact was weakened, but did not say it was destroyed,” Jasnah said. “I suggest that we at least see if one of them is willing to return to Damnation. Perhaps they can still prevent the spirits of the enemy from being reborn. It’s either that, or we completely exterminate the parshmen so that the enemy has no hosts.” She met Kaladin’s eyes. “In the face of such an atrocity, I would consider the sacrifice of one or more Heralds to be a small price.” “Storms!” Kaladin said, standing up straight. “Have you no sympathy?” “I have plenty, bridgeman. Fortunately, I temper it with logic. Perhaps you should consider acquiring some at a future date.” “Listen, Brightness,” Kaladin began. “I—” “Enough, Captain,” Dalinar said. He gave Jasnah a glance. Both fell quiet, Jasnah without so much as a peep. Shallan had never seen her respond to someone with the respect she gave Dalinar. “Jasnah,” Dalinar said. “Even if the pact of the Heralds still holds, we can’t know that they’d stay in Damnation—or the mechanics for locking away the Voidbringers there. That said, locating them seems like an excellent first step; they must know much that can greatly assist us. I will leave it to you, Jasnah, to plan out how to accomplish that.” “What … what of the Unmade?” Renarin said. “There will be others, like the creature we found down here.” “Navani has been researching them,” Dalinar said. “We need to go even further, Uncle,” Jasnah said. “We need to watch the movements of the Voidbringers. Our only hope is to defeat their armies so soundly that even if their leaders are constantly reborn, they lack the manpower to overwhelm us.” “Protecting Alethkar,” Kaladin said, “doesn’t have to mean completely crushing the parshmen and—” “If you wish, Captain,” Jasnah snapped, “I can get you some mink kits to cuddle while the adults plan. None of us want to talk about this, but that does not make it any less inevitable.” “I’d love that,” Kaladin responded. “In turn, I’ll get you some eels to cuddle. You’ll feel right at home.” Jasnah, curiously, smiled. “Let me ask this, Captain. Do you think ignoring the movement of Voidbringer troops would be wise?” “Probably not,” he admitted. “And do you think, perhaps, that you could train your squire Windrunners to fly up high and scout for us? If spanreeds are proving unreliable these days, we’ll need another method of watching the enemy. I’d happily cuddle skyeels, as you offer, if your team would be willing to spend some time imitating them.” Kaladin looked to Dalinar, who nodded appreciatively. “Excellent,” Jasnah said. “Uncle, your coalition of monarchs is a superb idea. We need to pen the enemy in and prevent them from overrunning all of Roshar. If…” She trailed off. Shallan paused, looking at the doodle she’d been doing. Actually, it was a bit more complex than a doodle. It was … kind of a full sketch of Kaladin’s face, with passionate eyes and a determined expression. Jasnah had noticed a creationspren in the form of a small gemstone that had appeared on the top of her page, and Shallan blushed, shooing it away. “Perhaps,” Jasnah said, glancing at Shallan’s sketchbook, “we could do with a short break, Uncle.” “If you wish,” he said. “I could use something to drink.” They broke up, Dalinar and Navani chatting softly as they went to check with the guards and servants in the main hallway. Shallan watched them go with a sense of longing, as she felt Jasnah loom over her. “Let us chat,” Jasnah said, nodding toward the far end of the long, rectangular room. Shallan sighed, closed her notebook, and followed Jasnah to the other end, near a pattern of tiles on the wall. This far from the spheres brought for the meeting, the lighting was dim. “May I?” Jasnah said, holding out her hand for Shallan’s notebook. She relinquished it. “A fine depiction of the young captain,” Jasnah said. “I see … three lines of notes here? After you were pointedly instructed to take the minutes.” “We should have sent for a scribe.” “We had a scribe. To take notes is not a lowly task, Shallan. It is a service you can provide.” “If it’s not a lowly task,” Shallan said, “then perhaps you should have done it.” Jasnah closed the sketchpad and fixed Shallan with a calm, level stare. The type that made Shallan squirm. “I remember,” Jasnah said, “a nervous, desperate young woman. Frantic to earn my goodwill.” Shallan didn’t reply. “I understand,” Jasnah said, “that you have enjoyed independence. What you accomplished here is remarkable, Shallan. You even seem to have earned my uncle’s trust—a challenging task.” “Then maybe we can just call the wardship finished, eh?” Shallan said. “I mean, I’m a full Radiant now.” “Radiant, yes,” Jasnah said. “Full? Where’s your armor?” “Um … armor?” Jasnah sighed softly, opening up the sketchpad again. “Shallan,” she said in a strangely … comforting tone. “I’m impressed. I am impressed, truly. But what I’ve heard of you recently is troubling. You’ve ingratiated yourself with my family, and made good on the causal betrothal to Adolin. Yet here you are with wandering eyes, as this sketch testifies.” “I—” “You skip meetings that Dalinar calls,” Jasnah continued, soft but immovable. “When you do go, you sit at the back and barely pay attention. He tells me that half the time, you find an excuse to slip out early. “You investigated the presence of an Unmade in the tower, and frightened it off basically alone. Yet you never explained how you found it when Dalinar’s soldiers could not.” She met Shallan’s eyes. “You’ve always hidden things from me. Some of those secrets were very damaging, and I find myself unwilling to believe you don’t have others.” Shallan bit her lip, but nodded. “That was an invitation,” Jasnah said, “to talk to me.” Shallan nodded again. She wasn’t working with the Ghostbloods. That was Veil. And Jasnah didn’t need to know about Veil. Jasnah couldn’t know about Veil. “Very well,” Jasnah said with a sigh. “Your wardship is not finished, and won’t be until I’m convinced that you can meet minimum requirements of scholarship—such as taking shorthand notes during an important conference. Your path as a Radiant is another matter. I don’t know that I can guide you; each order was distinctive in its approach. But as a young man will not be excused from his geography lessons simply because he has achieved competence with the sword, I will not release you from your duties to me simply because you have discovered your powers as a Radiant.” Jasnah handed back the sketchpad and walked toward the ring of chairs. She settled next to Renarin, prodding him gently to speak with her. He looked up for the first time since the meeting had begun and nodded, saying something Shallan couldn’t hear. “Mmmm…” Pattern said. “She is wise.” “That’s perhaps her most infuriating feature,” Shallan said. “Storms. She makes me feel like a child.” “Mmm.” “Worst part is, she’s probably right,” Shallan said. “Around her, I do act more like a child. It’s like part of me wants to let her take care of everything. And I hate, hate, hate that about myself.” “Is there a solution?” “I don’t know.” “Perhaps … act like an adult?” Shallan put her hands to her face, groaning softly and rubbing her eyes with her fingers. She’d basically asked for that, hadn’t she? “Come on,” she said, “let’s go to the rest of the meeting. As much as I want an excuse to get out of here.” “Mmm…” Pattern said. “Something about this room…” “What?” Shallan asked. “Something…” Pattern said in his buzzing way. “It has memories, Shallan.” Memories. Did he mean in Shadesmar? She’d avoided traveling there—that was at least one thing in which she’d listened to Jasnah. She made her way back to her seat, and after a moment’s thought, slipped Jasnah a quick note. Pattern says this room has memories. Worth investigating in Shadesmar? Jasnah regarded the note, then wrote back. I’ve found that we should not ignore the offhand comments of our spren. Press him; I will investigate this place. Thank you for the suggestion. The meeting started again, and now turned to discussion of specific kingdoms around Roshar. Jasnah was most keen on getting the Shin to join them. The Shattered Plains held the easternmost of the Oathgates, and that was already under Alethi control. If they could gain access to the one farthest to the west, they could travel the breadth of Roshar—from the entry point of the highstorms to the entry point of the Everstorms—in a heartbeat. They didn’t talk tactics too specifically; that was a masculine art, and Dalinar would want his highprinces and generals to discuss the battlefields. Still, Shallan didn’t fail to notice the tactical terms Jasnah used now and then. In things like this, Shallan had difficulty understanding the woman. In some ways, Jasnah seemed fiercely masculine. She studied whatever she pleased, and she talked tactics as easily as she talked poetry. She could be aggressive, even cold—Shallan had seen her straight-up execute thieves who had tried to rob her. Beyond that … well, it probably was best not to speculate on things with no meaning, but people did talk. Jasnah had turned down every suitor for her hand, including some very attractive and influential men. People wondered. Was she perhaps simply not interested? All of this should have resulted in a person who was decidedly unfeminine. Yet Jasnah wore the finest makeup, and wore it well, with shadowed eyes and bright red lips. She kept her safehand covered, and preferred intricate and fetching styles of braids from her hairdresser. Her writings and her mind made her the very model of Vorin femininity. Next to Jasnah, Shallan felt pale, stupid, and completely lacking in curves. What would it be like, to be so confident? So beautiful, yet so unconstrained, all at once? Surely, Jasnah Kholin had far fewer problems in life than Shallan. At the very least, she created far fewer for herself than Shallan did. It was about this point that Shallan realized she’d missed a good fifteen minutes of the meeting, and had again lapsed in her note-taking. Blushing furiously, she huddled up on her chair and did her best to remain focused for the rest of the meeting. At the end, she presented a sheet of formal shorthand to Jasnah. The woman looked it over, then cocked a perfectly shaped eyebrow at the line at the center where Shallan had grown distracted. Dalinar said some stuff here, the line read. It was very important and useful, so I’m sure you remember it without needing a reminder. Shallan smiled apologetically and shrugged. “Please write this out in longhand,” Jasnah said, handing it back. “Have a copy sent to my mother and to my brother’s head scribe.” Shallan took it as a dismissal and rushed away. She felt like a student who had just been released from lessons, which angered her. At the same time, she wanted to run off and immediately do as Jasnah had asked, to renew her mistress’s faith in her, which angered her even more. She ran up the steps out of the tower’s basement, using Stormlight to prevent fatigue. The different sides within her clashed, snapping at each other. She imagined months spent under Jasnah’s watchful care, training to become a mousy scribe as her father had always wanted. She remembered the days in Kharbranth, when she’d been so uncertain, so timid. She couldn’t return to that. She wouldn’t. But what to do instead?

 

 

 

 

So just like the scene with the thugs, I know this is a hotly discussed scene based on morality and etc. A with the other scene, I am not discussing the morality of Kaladin and Jasnah. I am looking at this scene from what I feel is Jasnah’s perspective and the why. Why she is saying what she is saying. What she is feeling. This is again to better understand Jasnah the character. So here we go. Jasnah views her and Shallan’s relationship as still a wardship. She feels just because Shallan gained powers, does not change that Shallan is still a student in need of education. A 10 year old that can fly still needs to learn math and language. So too a 17 year old (If I recall her age correctly, if I am wrong, please let me know and I will correct) still needs the training of a scholar. This sense of normality both assures Shallan while also grating on her nerves. We see Jasnah’s paranoia on being spied on or potentially assassinated. Given how many times people have tried to kill her before we even got to meet her, nonetheless in the books we have read, I feel this paranoia is warranted. After all it is not paranoia if they really are out to get you. Jasnah is also respectful to her brother’s rule. She makes sure to include notes for him to review so he can be kept abreast of what is happening in his absence. This being a war meeting, Jasnah begins by covering tactical issues. She reasons that they have to prevent the voidbringers from gaining too great a foot hold, otherwise team humanity will be fighting a defensive/losing battle. Kaladin says they aren’t our enemies. Jasnah (in my opinion), annoyed responds that of course they are the enemies. They are in the process of conquering the world. That even if they are not immediately hostile, their leaders are, and those leaders can possess them turning them hostile. Navani agrees. Kaladin replies that they should just fight the fused. This again (in my opinion) frustrates Jasnah. They just established that the fused possess the parshendi, so trying to separate who you fight is an exercise in futility. On top of that, in “normal” war when you are on the battlefield, you cannot exactly say to an enemy “hey can you step to the side so I can attack your leader instead of you? I don’t have any problems with you. I just want to kill him”. Now as I said at the beginning of this scene, I am not commenting on whether what Kaladin said was right or wrong. I am (in my opinion) looking at this exchange from Jasnah’s perspective and rationale. Keep in mind we just had a scene with Jasnah prior to this where she realized based on the blow to technology, that these Desolations were so devastating that they actually sent humanity back to the “stone age”. Jasnah has been driving herself to exhaustion and stress with every fiber of her being to try and prevent this. Unfortunately she was not able to. I would imagine she sees it as a personal failure. Like she felt she failed to protect her father from the assassin in white. Now that the desolation is here, she is doing the best she can to protect the people she loves, and survive. All Kaladin is doing (in my opinion she would think this) is ignoring the issues at hand, and preventing any true discussion. That is why I think the fight escalates. Jasnah feels this is a very extreme and dangerous situation. Such situations require research, and hard choices. Denying the existence of such issues only results in greater problems. I feel Jasnah really is taking the desolations as a responsibility she is placing on her own shoulders. She is terrified of making a mistake. Of having not thought of something spelling the end of her and everyone she loves. That is why she is aggressive right back at Kaladin. There are no second chances in a situation like this. You make a mistake, its game over. Period. So she will research and discuss every part, on any chance any hope could be come to. Even when both Kaladin and Jasnah are bullheaded and butting heads, she adapts. Even when Kaladin calls her insane (which considering her history, that barb probably cut especially deep). She knows they need information regardless what they ultimately decide to do. So she concedes in the argument, so long as it means something real is accomplished. Fine, let him say I cuddle eels, if it means we get the info we need to protect. To preserve against the end of the world. Jasnah then notices Shallan’s drawing of Kaladin, and suggests taking a break. Jasnah comments how being a scribe is not such a lowly task as Shallan implies. Jasnah does not belittle useful occupations. Jasnah tries to discuss what happened with Shallan, while Shallan acts petulant and lashes out. With patience Jasnah gives credit where credit is due and lists Shallan’s accomplishments. But she also lists multiple concerning actions Shallan has been taking lately. Actions that do not care whether you are a radiant or not, they still need to be done. Jasnah gives Shallan an opportunity to open up. To confide in her. Despite this, Shallan remains closed off. In resignation Jasnah makes it explicit that despite being a radiant, Shallan still has responsibilities, and Jasnah will hold her to them. Jasnah feels Shallan needs structure, and Shallan ends up admitting to Pattern that Jasnah is probably right. Jasnah listens when Shallan mentions what Pattern said about the room, showing despite their disagreement, Jasnah is always open to new information. Shallan then remarks to herself how Jasnah uses tactical terms, and held her own in the militaristic discussion. She muses that Jasnah is a woman of contradictions. She defies labels and stands up for others to be able to do the same. Then we get Shallan’s idealized version of Jasnah once more. She thinks Jasnah is so perfect, that everything is effortless to her, and she has hardly any problems. I hope through this thread I have show the reality is quite different. Everything Jasnah has attained she has had to fight and work for. I find it interesting that Shallan now feels that studying under Jasnah would result in her being a mousey scribe, while in Way of Kings, she felt studying under Jasnah was liberating and allowed her to be more herself.


 

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A short time later, Shallan Davar—now safely tucked back into a blue havah—strolled through the hallway beneath Urithiru. She was pleased with the work that Veil was doing with the men, but storms, did she have to drink so much? Shallan burned off practically an entire barrel’s worth of alcohol to clear her head. She took a deep breath, then stepped into the former library room. Here she found not only Navani, Jasnah, and Teshav, but a host of ardents and scribes. May Aladar, Adrotagia from Kharbranth … there were even three stormwardens, the odd men with the long beards who liked to predict the weather. Shallan had heard that they would occasionally use the blowing of the winds to foretell the future, but they never offered such services openly. Being near them made Shallan wish for a glyphward. Veil didn’t keep any handy, unfortunately. She was basically a heretic, and thought about religion as often as she did seasilk prices in Rall Elorim. At least Jasnah had the backbone to pick a side and announce it; Veil would simply shrug and make some wisecrack. It— “Mmmm…” Pattern whispered from her skirt. “Shallan?” Right. She’d been just standing in the doorway, hadn’t she? She walked in, unfortunately passing Janala, who was acting as Teshav’s assistant. The pretty young woman stood with her nose perpetually in the air, and was the type of person whose very enunciation made Shallan’s skin crawl. The woman’s arrogance was what Shallan didn’t like—not, of course, that Adolin had been courting Janala soon before meeting Shallan. She had once tried to avoid Adolin’s former romantic partners, but … well, that was like trying to avoid soldiers on a battlefield. They were just kind of everywhere. A dozen conversations buzzed through the room: talk about weights and measures, the proper placement of punctuation, and the atmospheric variations in the tower. Once she’d have given anything to be in a room like this. Now she was constantly late to the meetings. What had changed? I know how much a fraud I am, she thought, hugging the wall, passing a pretty young ardent discussing Azish politics with one of the stormwardens. Shallan had barely perused those books that Adolin had brought her. On her other side, Navani was talking fabrials with an engineer in a bright red havah. The woman nodded eagerly. “Yes, but how to stabilize it, Brightness? With the sails underneath, it will want to spin over, won’t it?” Shallan’s proximity to Navani had offered ample opportunity to study fabrial science. Why hadn’t she? As it enveloped her—the ideas, the questions, the logic—she suddenly felt she was drowning. Overwhelmed. Everyone in this room knew so much, and she felt insignificant compared to them. I need someone who can handle this, she thought. A scholar. Part of me can become a scholar. Not Veil, or Brightness Radiant. But someone— Pattern started humming on her dress again. Shallan backed to the wall. No, this … this was her, wasn’t it? Shallan had always wanted to be a scholar, hadn’t she? She didn’t need another persona to deal with this. Right? … Right? The moment of anxiety passed, and she breathed out, forcing herself to steady. Eventually she pulled a pad of paper and a charcoal pencil out of her satchel, then sought out Jasnah and presented herself. Jasnah cocked an eyebrow. “Late again?” “Sorry.” “I intended to ask your help understanding some of the translations we’re receiving from the Dawnchant, but we haven’t time before my mother’s meeting starts.” “Maybe I could help you—” “I have a few items to finish up. We can speak later.” An abrupt dismissal, but nothing more than Shallan had come to expect. She walked over to a chair beside the wall and sat down. “Surely,” she said softly, “if Jasnah had known that I’d just confronted a deep insecurity of mine, she’d have shown some empathy. Right?” “Jasnah?” Pattern asked. “I do not think you are paying attention, Shallan. She is not very empathetic.” Shallan sighed. “You’re empathetic though!” “The pathetic part, at least.” She steeled herself. “I belong here, Pattern, don’t I?” “Mmm. Yes, of course you do. You’ll want to sketch them, right?” “The classic scholars didn’t just draw. The Oilsworn knew mathematics—he created the study of ratios in art. Galid was an inventor, and her designs are still used in astronomy today. Sailors couldn’t find longitude at sea until the arrival of her clocks. Jasnah’s a historian—and more. That’s what I want.” “Are you sure?” “I think so.” Problem was, Veil wanted to spend her days drinking and laughing with the men, practicing espionage. Radiant wanted to practice with the sword and spend time around Adolin. What did Shallan want? And did it matter? Eventually Navani called the meeting to order, and people took seats. Scribes on one side of Navani, ardents from a variety of devotaries on the other—and far from Jasnah. As the stormwardens settled down farther around the ring of seats, Shallan noticed Renarin standing in the doorway. He shuffled, peeking in, but not entering. When several scholars turned toward him, he stepped backward, as if their stares were physically forcing him out. “I…” Renarin said. “Father said I could come … just listen maybe.” “You’re more than welcome, Cousin,” Jasnah said. She nodded for Shallan to get him a stool, so she did—and didn’t even protest being ordered about. She could be a scholar. She’d be the best little ward ever. Head down, Renarin rounded the ring of scholars, keeping a white-knuckled grip on a chain hung from his pocket. As soon as he sat, he started pulling the chain between the fingers of one hand, then the other. Shallan did her best to take notes, and not stray into sketching people instead. Fortunately, the proceedings were more interesting than usual. Navani had most of the scholars here working on trying to understand Urithiru. Inadara reported first—she was a wizened scribe who reminded Shallan of her father’s ardents—explaining that her team had been trying to ascertain the meaning of the strange shapes of the rooms and tunnels in the tower. She went on at length, talking of defensive constructions, air filtration, and the wells. She pointed out groupings of rooms that were shaped oddly, and of the bizarre murals they’d found, depicting fanciful creatures. When she eventually finished, Kalami reported on her team, who were convinced that certain gold and copper metalworks they’d found embedded in walls were fabrials, but they didn’t seem to do anything, even with gems attached. She passed around drawings, then moved on to explaining the efforts—failed so far—they’d taken to try to infuse the gemstone pillar. The only working fabrials were the lifts. “I suggest,” interrupted Elthebar, head of the stormwardens, “that the ratio of the gears used in the lift machinery might be indicative of the nature of those who built it. It is the science of digitology, you see. You can judge much about a man by the width of his fingers.” “And this has to do with gears … how?” Teshav asked. “In every way!” Elthebar said. “Why, the fact that you don’t know this is a clear indication that you are a scribe. Your writing is pretty, Brightness. But you must give more heed to science.” Pattern buzzed softly. “I never have liked him,” Shallan whispered. “He acts nice around Dalinar, but he’s quite mean.” “So … which attribute of his are we totaling and how many people are in the sample size?” Pattern asked. “Do you think, maybe,” Janala said, “we are asking the wrong questions?” Shallan narrowed her eyes, but checked herself, suppressing her jealousy. There was no need to hate someone simply because they’d been close to Adolin. It was just that something felt … off about Janala. Like many women at court, her laughter sounded rehearsed, contained. Like they used it as a seasoning, rather than actually feeling it. “What do you mean, child?” Adrotagia asked Janala. “Well, Brightness, we talk about the lifts, the strange fabrial column, the twisting hallways. We try to understand these things merely from their designs. Maybe instead we should figure out the tower’s needs, and then work backward to determine how these things might have met them.” “Hmmm,” Navani said. “Well, we know that they grew crops outside. Did some of these wall fabrials provide heat?” Renarin mumbled something. Everyone in the room looked at him. Not a few seemed surprised to hear him speak, and he shrank back. “What was that, Renarin?” Navani asked. “It’s not like that,” he said softly. “They’re not fabrials. They’re a fabrial.” The scribes and scholars shared looks. The prince … well, he often incited such reactions. Discomforted stares. “Brightlord?” Janala asked. “Are you perhaps secretly an artifabrian? Studying engineering by night, reading the women’s script?” Several of the others chuckled. Renarin blushed deeply, lowering his eyes farther. You’d never laugh like that at any other man of his rank, Shallan thought, feeling her cheeks grow hot. The Alethi court could be severely polite—but that didn’t mean they were nice. Renarin always had been a more acceptable target than Dalinar or Adolin. Shallan’s anger was a strange sensation. On more than one occasion, she’d been struck by Renarin’s oddness. His presence at this meeting was just another example. Was he thinking of finally joining the ardents? And he did that by simply showing up at a meeting for scribes, as if he were one of the women? At the same time, how dare Janala embarrass him? Navani started to say something, but Shallan cut in. “Surely, Janala, you didn’t just try to insult the son of the highprince.” “What? No, no of course I didn’t.” “Good,” Shallan said. “Because, if you had been trying to insult him, you did a terrible job. And I’ve heard that you’re very clever. So full of wit, and charm, and … other things.” Janala frowned at her. “… Is that flattery?” “We weren’t talking of your chest, dear. We’re speaking of your mind! Your wonderful, brilliant mind, so keen that it’s never been sharpened! So quick, it’s still running when everyone else is done! So dazzling, it’s never failed to leave everyone in awe at the things you say. So … um…” Jasnah was glaring at her. “… Hmm…” Shallan held up her notebook. “I took notes.” “Could we have a short break, Mother?” Jasnah asked. “An excellent suggestion,” Navani said. “Fifteen minutes, during which everyone should consider a list of requirements this tower would have, if it were to somehow become self-sufficient.” She rose, and the meeting broke up into individual conversations again. “I see,” Jasnah said to Shallan, “that you still use your tongue like a bludgeon rather than a knife.” “Yeah.” Shallan sighed. “Any tips?” Jasnah eyed her. “You heard what she said to Renarin, Brightness!” “And Mother was about to speak to her about it,” Jasnah said, “discreetly, with a judicious word. Instead, you threw a dictionary at her head.” “Sorry. She gets on my nerves.” “Janala is a fool, just bright enough to be proud of the wits she has, but stupid enough to be unaware of how outmatched they are.” Jasnah rubbed her temples. “Storms. This is why I never take wards.” “Because they give you so much trouble.” “Because I’m bad at it. I have scientific evidence of that fact, and you are but the latest experiment.” Jasnah shooed her away, rubbing her temples…

That reminded her of what Jasnah had said, though, and Shallan found herself glancing at the woman. “I know my cousin is intimidating,” Renarin whispered to her. “But you’re a Radiant too, Shallan. Don’t forget that. We could stand up to her if we wanted to.” “Do we want to?” Renarin grimaced. “Probably not. So often, she’s right, and you just end up feeling like one of the ten fools.”

 

 

 

 

I find it interesting that Shallan mused that Jasnah at least “had the backbone to pick a side and announce it”. Despite the off hand mention, as I have illustrated in this thread, I think that is very accurate. Jasnah has had to stand up for herself in defense of her beliefs despite overwhelming opposition. Even in light of this opposition, Jasnah still respects individuals of the opposing side so long as they return the respect and are genuinely good people seeking enlightenment. I think that speaks greatly on her character. This contrasts nicely with Janala, who in many ways is actually the type of person we are led to believe Jasnah is. Rich, self important, with her nose perpetually in the air. Shallan approaches Jasnah, and Jasnah admonishes her for her lateness, again. Shallan muses that had Jasnah known what she had just gone through, she would have shown some empathy, to which Pattern replies that she is not very empathetic. As I have mentioned before, I find this backing and forthing on the characters interpretation of Jasnah interesting. We have seen how much Jasnah cares for Shallan. How worried she can get over her. How often Jasnah puts forward a strong exterior, but underneath lies a multi layered and complicated woman. Just another surface commentary from a character disregarding what lies beneath. Renarin shows up feeling uncertain, and Jasnah immediately welcomes him before anyone could object or make him feel further outcasted. Later when Renarin is mocked, Shallan rushes to his defense. After taking a break, Jasnah explains that Navani was going to speak to Janala discreetly but also make it very clear how unacceptable her conduct was. Jasnah knows when to take action, and when to trust others to take action. She is just as protective of Renarin, and we see much later in the book how she was there for him when he was younger. Just because she does not exhibit an immediate outburst in response does not mean she does not have feelings for Renarin, and does not mean she will take no actions in his defense. We have another instance of Jasnah admitting fault. She takes responsibility for Shallan’s actions as her mentor, blaming herself that she has shortcomings as a teacher. I find Renarin’s comments about Jasnah interesting. He finds her intimidating, yet admits that standing up to her although is an option, is unfavorable because Jasnah usually is right which causes him to feel foolish. As we have just seen with Jasnah talking to Shallan, it is not because Jasnah insults or derides the person. Quite the contrary, she talks respectfully and measured. The individual on the other end gets upset/flustered because they end up being wrong and it makes them feel self conscious. To imagine how it feels for Jasnah that she must walk on eggshells around everyone else, all the time, for fear that she would injure their pride for “being right”. That the alternative is to remain silent and pretend ignorance so everyone else can feel better about themselves. To Jasnah, she would rather be cast in a negative light and be authentic, than pretend to be something she is not.



 

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Oathbringer 476

Jasnah trembled as she read the madman’s words. She turned over the sheet, and found the next one covered in similar ideas, repeated over and over. This couldn’t be a coincidence, and the words were too specific. The abandoned Herald had come to Kholinar—and had been dismissed as a madman. She leaned back in her seat and Ivory—full-sized, like a human—stepped over to the table. Hands clasped behind his back, he wore his usual stiff formal suit. The spren’s coloring was jet black, both clothing and features, though something prismatic swirled on his skin. It was as if pure black marble had been coated in oil that glistened with hidden color. He rubbed his chin, reading the words. Jasnah had rejected the nice rooms with balconies on the rim of Urithiru; those had such an obvious entrance for assassins or spies. Her small room at the center of Dalinar’s section was far more secure. She had stuffed the ventilation openings with cloth. The airflow from the hallway outside was adequate for this room, and she wanted to make sure nobody could overhear her by listening through the shafts. In the corner of her room, three spanreeds worked tirelessly. She had rented them at great expense, until she could acquire new ones of her own. They were paired with reeds in Tashikk that had been delivered to one of the finest—and most trustworthy—information centers in the princedom. There, miles and miles away, a scribe was carefully rewriting each page of her notes, which she had originally sent to them to keep safe. “This speaker, Jasnah,” Ivory said, tapping the sheet she’d just read. Ivory had a clipped, no-nonsense voice. “This one who said these words. This person is a Herald. Our suspicions are true. The Heralds are, and the fallen one still is.” “We need to find him,” Jasnah said. “We must search Shadesmar,” Ivory said. “In this world, men can hide easily—but their souls shine out to us on the other side.” “Unless someone knows how to hide them.” Ivory looked toward the growing stack of notes in the corner; one of the pens had finished writing. Jasnah rose to change the paper; Shallan had rescued one of her trunks of notes, but two others had gone down with the sinking ship. Fortunately, Jasnah had sent off these backup copies. Or did it matter? This sheet, encrypted by her cipher, contained lines and lines of information connecting the parshmen to the Voidbringers. Once, she’d slaved over each of these passages, teasing them from history. Now their contents were common knowledge. In one moment, all of her expertise had been wiped away. “We’ve lost so much time,” she said. “Yes. We must catch what we have lost, Jasnah. We must.” “The enemy?” Jasnah asked. “He stirs. He angers.” Ivory shook his head, kneeling beside her as she changed the sheets of paper. “We are naught before him, Jasnah. He would destroy my kind and yours.” The spanreed finished, and another started writing out the first lines of her memoirs, which she’d worked on intermittently throughout her life. She’d thrown aside a dozen different attempts, and as she read this latest one, she found herself disliking it as well. “What do you think of Shallan?” she asked Ivory, shaking her head. “The person she’s become.” Ivory frowned, lips drawing tight. His sharply chiseled features, too angular to be human, were like those of a roughed-out statue the sculptor had neglected to finish. “She … is troubling,” he said. “That much hasn’t changed.” “She is not stable.” “Ivory, you think all humans are unstable.” “Not you,” he said, lifting his chin. “You are like a spren. You think by facts. You change not on simple whims. You are as you are.” She gave him a flat stare. “Mostly,” he added. “Mostly. But it is, Jasnah. Compared to other humans, you are practically a stone!” She sighed, standing up and brushing past him, returning to her writing desk. The Herald’s ravings glared at her. She settled down, feeling tired. “Jasnah?” Ivory asked. “Am I … in error?” “I am not so much a stone as you think, Ivory. Sometimes I wish I were.” “These words trouble you,” he said, stepping up to her again and resting his jet-black fingers on the paper. “Why? You have read many troubling things.” Jasnah settled back, listening to the three spanreeds scratching paper, writing out notes that—she feared—would mostly be irrelevant. Something stirred deep within her. Glimmers of memory from a dark room, screaming her voice ragged. A childhood illness nobody else seemed to remember, for all it had done to her. It had taught her that people she loved could still hurt her. “Have you ever wondered how it would feel to lose your sanity, Ivory?” Ivory nodded. “I have wondered this. How could I not? Considering what the ancient fathers are.” “You call me logical,” Jasnah whispered. “It’s untrue, as I let my passions rule me as much as many. In my times of peace, however, my mind has always been the one thing I could rely upon.” Except once. She shook her head, picking up the paper again. “I fear losing that, Ivory. It terrifies me. How would it have felt, to be these Heralds? To suffer your mind slowly becoming untrustworthy? Are they too far gone to know? Or are there lucid moments, where they strain and sort through memories … trying frantically to decide which are reliable and which are fabrications…” She shivered. “The ancient ones,” Ivory said again, nodding. He didn’t often speak of the spren who had been lost during the Recreance. Ivory and his fellows had been mere children—well, the spren equivalent—at the time. They spent years, centuries, with no older spren to nurture and guide them. The inkspren were only now beginning to recover the culture and society they had lost when men abandoned their vows. “Your ward,” Ivory said. “Her spren. A Cryptic.” “Which is bad?” Ivory nodded. He preferred simple, straightforward gestures. You never saw Ivory shrug. “Cryptics are trouble. They enjoy lies, Jasnah. Feast upon them. Speak one word untrue at a gathering, and seven cluster around you. Their humming fills your ears.” “Have you warred with them?” “One does not war with Cryptics, as one does honorspren. Cryptics have but one city, and do not wish to rule more. Only to listen.” He tapped the table. “Perhaps this one is better, with the bond.” Ivory was the only new-generation inkspren to form a Radiant bond. Some of his fellows would rather have killed Jasnah, instead of letting him risk what he had done. The spren had a noble air about him, stiff-backed and commanding. He could change his size at will, but not his shape, except when fully in this realm, manifesting as a Shardblade. He had taken the name Ivory as a symbol of defiance. He was not what his kin said he was, and would not suffer what fate proclaimed. The difference between a higher spren like him and a common emotion spren was in their ability to decide how to act. A living contradiction. Like human beings. “Shallan won’t listen to me any longer,” Jasnah said. “She rebels against every little thing I tell her. These last few months on her own have changed the child.” “She never obeyed well, Jasnah. That is who she is.” “In the past, at least she pretended to care about my teaching.” “But you have said, more humans should question their places in life. Did you not say that they too often accept presumed truth as fact?” She tapped the table. “You’re right, of course. Wouldn’t I rather have her straining against her boundaries, as opposed to happily living within them? Whether she obeys me or not is of little import. But I do worry about her ability to command her situation, rather than letting her impulses command her.” “How do you change this, if it is?” An excellent question. Jasnah searched through the papers on her small table. She’d been collecting reports from her informants in the warcamps—the ones who had survived—about Shallan. She’d truly done well in Jasnah’s absence. Perhaps what the child needed was not more structure, but more challenges. “All ten orders are again,” Ivory said from behind her. For years it had been only the two of them, Jasnah and Ivory. Ivory had been dodgy about giving odds on whether the other sapient spren would refound their orders or not. However, he’d always said that he was certain that the honorspren—and therefore the Windrunners—would never return. Their attempts to rule Shadesmar had apparently not endeared them to the other races. “Ten orders,” Jasnah said. “All ended in death.” “All but one,” Ivory agreed. “They lived in death instead.” She turned around, and he met her eyes with his own. No pupils, just oil shimmering above something deeply black. “We must tell the others what we learned from Wit, Ivory. Eventually, this secret must be known.” “Jasnah, no. It would be the end. Another Recreance.” “The truth has not destroyed me.” “You are special. No knowledge is that can destroy you. But the others…” She held his eyes, then gathered the sheets stacked beside her. “We shall see,” she said, then carried them to the table to bind them into a book.

 

 

 

 

Amazing scene right here. We get it all. Fear, doubt, compassion, and inner strength. Jasnah literally trembled at the thought of madness. Being unable to trust yourself and your own senses. She sympathizes with the Heralds. Earlier in the book she mentioned locating the Heralds, gaining information from them, requesting they return to damnation to potentially buy time, or if they refuse kill them so they return (knowing that even if it doesn’t slow down the voidbringers, the heralds could just return no worse for wear). To me this shows she does not think on possibilities lightly. She understands what they are going through and is terrified of potentially going through it again. She hints that she experienced that once in her life and it scarred her. Yet it still needs to be acknowledged. It still needs to be discussed. This shows great inner strength. This also shows what a deep cut Kaladin calling her insane must have been. We are again reminded what the stakes are in this war. The enemy stirs, he angers. He intends to destroy both Jasnah’s and Ivory’s kind. Despite the gravity of the situation, Jasnah still has time to talk about Shallan and the concern she has for her ward. Jasnah admits to Ivory and herself that she is not “stone”. She has emotions. She has fears. She cares about the people in her life, and doesn’t want to lose them. Even though she feels that the people she loved caused whatever happened to her in the past to question her sanity, she still loves them and wants to protect them. That is the driving force behind Jasnah. Love for her family. From before Gavilar’s death, to the coming desolation, Jasnah’s goal was to see her family safe. Jasnah muses on how Shallan seems to rebel against her simply to rebel. Through talking it out with Ivory, Jasnah realizes that by trying to help Shallan with structure, she may in fact be suffocating her. Making Shallan obey Jasnah is unimportant. Jasnah is not ordering Shallan around because she thinks she is better than her, nor because she treats everyone that way. Jasnah was keeping the ward relationship because she truly felt Shallan would benefit from it. Now that she is realizing that may not be the case. That maybe Shallan needs to find her own way. I think that is awesome. It shows a level of self reflection, and consideration of Jasnah that is down right endearing. She truly cares about Shallan’s well being, and works to get to know her as a person, rather than just a student. Works to learn what would genuinely help Shallan. Finally we see that Jasnah is not keeping secrets out of spite, nor to be deceptive. Any information she keeps from the other characters is either out of respect to Ivory (as I mentioned earlier in this thread) or because of the danger it may pose. Even then she is hesitant to keep information to herself.



 

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Oathbringer page 520

The ancient Siln dynasty in Jah Keved had been founded after the death of King NanKhet. No contemporary accounts survived; the best they had dated from two centuries later. The author of that text—Natata Ved, often called Oileyes by her contemporaries—insisted that her methods were rigorous, although by modern standards, historical scholarship had been in its infancy. Jasnah had long been interested in NanKhet’s death, because he’d ruled for only three months. He’d succeeded to the throne when the previous king, his brother NanHar, had taken ill and died while on campaign in what would become modern Triax. Remarkably, during the brief span of his reign, NanKhet survived six assassination attempts. The first had come from his sister, who had wanted to place her husband on the throne. After surviving poisoning, NanKhet had put them both to death. Soon after, their son had tried to kill him in his bed. NanKhet, apparently a light sleeper, struck down his nephew with his own sword. NanKhet’s cousin tried next—that attack left NanKhet blinded in one eye—and was followed by another brother, an uncle, and finally NanKhet’s own son. At the end of three exasperating months, according to Oileyes, “The great, but weary, NanKhet called for an accounting of all his household. He gathered them together at a grand feast, promising the delights of distant Aimia. Instead, when all were assembled, NanKhet had them executed one by one. Their bodies were burned in a grand pyre, upon which was cooked the meat for the feast that he ate alone, at a table set for two hundred.” Natata Oileyes was known to have had a passion for the dramatic. The text sounded almost delighted when she’d explained how he’d died by choking on the food at that very feast, alone with nobody to help him. Similar tales repeated themselves throughout the long history of the Vorin lands. Kings fell, and their brothers or sons took the throne. Even a pretender of no true lineage would usually claim kinship through oblique and creative genealogical justifications. Jasnah was simultaneously fascinated and worried by these accounts. Thoughts about them were unusually present in her mind as she made her way into Urithiru’s basement. Something in her readings the night before had lodged this particular story in her brain. She soon peeked into the former library beneath Urithiru. Both rooms—one on either side of the hallway that led to the crystal pillar—were filled with scholars now, occupying tables carried down by squads of soldiers. Dalinar had sent expeditions down the tunnel the Unmade had used to flee. The scouts reported a long network of caverns. Following a stream of water, they’d marched for days, and eventually located an exit into the mountain foothills of Tu Fallia. It was nice to know that, in a pinch, there was another way out of Urithiru—and a potential means of supply other than through the Oathgates. They maintained guards in the upper tunnels, and for now it seemed safe enough in the basement. Therefore, Navani had transformed the area into a scholarly institute designed to solve Dalinar’s problems and to provide an edge in information, technology, and pure research. Concentrationspren rippled in the air like waves overhead—a rarity in Alethkar, but common here—and logicspren darted through them, like tiny stormclouds. Jasnah couldn’t help but smile. For over a decade, she’d dreamed of uniting the best minds of the kingdom in a coordinated effort. She’d been ignored; all anyone had wanted to discuss was her lack of belief in their god. Well, they were focused now. Turned out that the end of the world had to actually arrive before people would take it seriously. Renarin was there, standing near the corner, watching the work. He’d been joining the scholars with some regularity, but he still wore his uniform with the Bridge Four patch. You can’t spend forever floating between worlds, Cousin, she thought. Eventually you’ll need to decide where you want to belong. Life was so much harder, but potentially so much more fulfilling, when you found the courage to choose. The story of the old Veden king, NanKhet, had taught Jasnah something troubling: Often, the greatest threat to a ruling family was its own members. Why were so many of the old royal lines such knots of murder, greed, and infighting? And what made the few exceptions different? She’d grown adept at protecting her family against danger from without, carefully removing would-be deposers. But what could she do to protect it from within? In her absence, already the monarchy trembled. Her brother and her uncle—who she knew loved each other deeply—ground their wills against one another like mismatched gears. She would not have her family implode. If Alethkar was going to survive the Desolation, they’d need committed leadership. A stable throne. She entered the library room and walked to her writing stand. It was in a position where she could survey the others and have her back to a wall. She unpacked her satchel, setting up two spanreed boards. One of the reeds was blinking early, and she twisted the ruby, indicating she was ready. A message came back, writing out, We will begin in five minutes. She passed the time scrutinizing the various groups in the room, reading the lips of those she could see, absently taking notes in shorthand. She moved from conversation to conversation, gleaning a little from each one and noting the names of the people who spoke. —tests confirm something is different here. Temperatures are distinctly lower on other nearby peaks of the same elevation— —we have to assume that Brightlord Kholin is not going to return to the faith. What then?— —don’t know. Perhaps if we could find a way to conjoin the fabrials, we could imitate this effect— —the boy could be a powerful addition to our ranks. He shows interest in numerology, and asked me if we can truly predict events with it. I will speak with him again— That last one was from the stormwardens. Jasnah tightly pursed her lips. “Ivory?” she whispered. “I will watch them.” He left her side, shrunken to the size of a speck of dust. Jasnah made a note to speak to Renarin; she would not have him wasting his time with a bunch of fools who thought they could foretell the future based on the curls of smoke from a snuffed candle. Finally, her spanreed woke up. I have connected Jochi of Thaylenah and Ethid of Azir for you, Brightness. Here are their passcodes. Further entries will be strictly their notations. Excellent, Jasnah wrote back, authenticating the two passcodes. Losing her spanreeds in the sinking of the Wind’s Pleasure had been a huge setback. She could no longer directly contact important colleagues or informants. Fortunately, Tashikk was set up to deal with these kinds of situations. You could always buy new reeds connected to the princedom’s infamous information centers. You could reach anyone, in practice, so long as you trusted an intermediary. Jasnah had one of those she’d personally interviewed—and whom she paid good money—to ensure confidentiality. The intermediary would burn her copies of this conversation afterward. The system was as secure as Jasnah could make it, all things considered. Jasnah’s intermediary would now be joined by two others in Tashikk. Together, the three would be surrounded by six spanreed boards: one each for receiving comments from their masters, and one each to send back the entire conversation in real time, including the comments from the other two. That way, each conversant would be able to see a constant stream of comments, without having to stop and wait before replying. Navani talked of ways to improve the experience—of spanreeds that could be adjusted to connect to different people. That was one area of scholarship, however, that Jasnah did not have time to pursue. Her receiving board started to fill with notes written by her two colleagues. Jasnah, you live! Jochi wrote. Back from the dead. Remarkable! I can’t believe you ever thought she was dead, Ethid replied. Jasnah Kholin? Lost at sea? Likelier we’d find the Stormfather dead. Your confidence is comforting, Ethid, Jasnah wrote on her sending board. A moment later, those words were copied by her scribe into the common spanreed conversation. Are you at Urithiru? Jochi wrote. When can I visit? As soon as you’re willing to let everyone know you aren’t female, Jasnah wrote back. Jochi—known to the world as a dynamic woman of distinctive philosophy—was a pen name for a potbellied man in his sixties who ran a pastry shop in Thaylen City. Oh, I’m certain your wonderful city has need of pastries, Jochi wrote back jovially. Can we please discuss your silliness later? Ethid wrote. I have news. She was a scion—a kind of religious order of scribe—at the Azish royal palace. Well stop wasting time then! Jochi wrote. I love news. Goes excellently with a filled doughnut … no, no, a fluffy brioche. The news? Jasnah just wrote, smiling. These two had studied with her under the same master—they were Veristitalians of the keenest mind, regardless of how Jochi might seem. I’ve been tracking a man we are increasingly certain is the Herald Nakku, the Judge, Ethid wrote. Nalan, as you call him. Oh, are we sharing nursery tales now? Jochi asked. Heralds? Really, Ethid? If you haven’t noticed, Ethid wrote, the Voidbringers are back. Tales we dismissed are worth a second look, now. I agree, Jasnah wrote. But what makes you think you’ve found one of the Heralds? It’s a combination of many things, she wrote. This man attacked our palace, Jasnah. He tried to kill some thieves—the new Prime is one of them, but keep that in your sleeve. We’re doing what we can to play up his common roots while ignoring the fact that he was intent on robbing us. Heralds alive and trying to kill people, Jochi wrote. And here I thought my news about a sighting of Axies the Collector was interesting. There’s more, Ethid wrote. Jasnah, we’ve got a Radiant here. An Edgedancer. Or … we had one. Had one? Jochi wrote. Did you misplace her? She ran off. She’s just a kid, Jasnah. Reshi, raised on the streets. I think we may have met her, Jasnah wrote. My uncle encountered someone interesting in one of his recent visions. I’m surprised you let her get away from you. Have you ever tried to hold on to an Edgedancer? Ethid wrote back. She chased after the Herald to Tashikk, but the Prime says she is back now—and avoiding me. In any case, something’s wrong with the man I think is Nalan, Jasnah. I don’t think the Heralds will be a resource to us. I will provide you with sketches of the Heralds, Jasnah said. I have drawings of their true faces, provided by an unexpected source. Ethid, you are right about them. They aren’t going to be a resource; they’re broken. Have you read the accounts of my uncle’s visions? I have copies somewhere, Ethid wrote. Are they real? Most sources agree that he’s … unwell. He’s quite well, I assure you, Jasnah wrote. The visions are related to his order of Radiants. I will send you the latest few; they have relevance to the Heralds. Storms, Ethid wrote. The Blackthorn is actually a Radiant? Years of drought, and now they’re popping up like rockbuds. Ethid did not think highly of men who earned their reputations through conquest, despite having made the study of such men a cornerstone of her research. The conversation continued for some time. Jochi, growing uncharacteristically solemn, spoke directly of the state of Thaylenah. It had been hit hard by the repeated coming of the Everstorm; entire sections of Thaylen City were in ruin. Jasnah was most interested in the Thaylen parshmen who had stolen the ships that had survived the storm. Their exodus—combined with Kaladin Stormblessed’s interactions with the parshmen in Alethkar—was painting a new picture of what and who the Voidbringers were. The conversation moved on as Ethid transcribed an interesting account she’d discovered in an old book discussing the Desolations. From there, they spoke of the Dawnchant translations, in particular those by some ardents in Jah Keved who were ahead of the scholars at Kharbranth. Jasnah glanced through the library room, seeking out her mother, who was sitting near Shallan to discuss wedding preparations. Renarin still lurked at the far side of the room, mumbling to himself. Or perhaps to his spren? She absently read his lips. —it’s coming from in here, Renarin said. Somewhere in this room— Jasnah narrowed her eyes. Ethid, she wrote, weren’t you going to try to construct drawings of the spren tied to each order of Radiant? I’ve gotten quite far, actually, she wrote back. I saw the Edgedancer spren personally, after demanding a glimpse. What of the Truthwatchers? Jasnah wrote. Oh! I found a reference to those, Jochi wrote. The spren reportedly looked like light on a surface after it reflects through something crystalline. Jasnah thought for a moment, then briefly excused herself from the conversation. Jochi said he needed to go find a privy anyway. She slipped off her seat and crossed the room, passing near Navani and Shallan. “I don’t want to push you at all, dear,” Navani was saying. “But in these uncertain times, surely you wish for stability.” Jasnah stopped, freehand resting idly on Shallan’s shoulder. The younger woman perked up, then followed Jasnah’s gaze toward Renarin. “What?” Shallan whispered. “I don’t know,” Jasnah said. “Something odd…” Something about the way the youth was standing, the words he had spoken. He still looked wrong to her without his spectacles. Like a different person entirely. “Jasnah!” Shallan said, suddenly tense. “The doorway. Look!” Jasnah sucked in Stormlight at the girl’s tone and turned away from Renarin, toward the room’s doorway. There, a tall, square-jawed man had darkened the opening. He wore Sadeas’s colors, forest green and white. In fact, he was Sadeas now, at least its regent. Jasnah would always know him as Meridas Amaram. “What’s he doing here?” Shallan hissed. “He’s a highprince,” Navani said. “The soldiers aren’t going to forbid him without a direct command.” Amaram fixated on Jasnah with regal, light tan eyes. He strode toward her, exuding confidence, or was it conceit? “Jasnah,” he said when he drew close. “I was told I could find you here.” “Remind me to find whoever told you,” Jasnah said, “and have them hanged.” Amaram stiffened. “Could we speak together more privately, just for a moment?” “I think not.” “We need to discuss your uncle. The rift between our houses serves nobody. I wish to bridge that chasm, and Dalinar listens to you. Please, Jasnah. You can steer him properly.” “My uncle knows his own mind on these matters, and doesn’t require me to ‘steer’ him.” “As if you haven’t been doing so already, Jasnah. Everyone can see that he has started to share your religious beliefs.” “Which would be incredible, since I don’t have religious beliefs.” Amaram sighed, looking around. “Please,” he said. “Private?” “Not a chance, Meridas. Go. Away.” “We were close once.” “My father wished us to be close. Do not mistake his fancies for fact.” “Jasnah—” “You really should leave before somebody gets hurt.” He ignored her suggestion, glancing at Navani and Shallan, then stepping closer. “We thought you were dead. I needed to see for myself that you are well.” “You have seen. Now leave.” Instead, he gripped her forearm. “Why, Jasnah? Why have you always denied me?” “Other than the fact that you are a detestable buffoon who achieves only the lowest level of mediocrity, as it is the best your limited mind can imagine? I can’t possibly think of a reason.” “Mediocre?” Amaram growled. “You insult my mother, Jasnah. You know how hard she worked to raise me to be the best soldier this kingdom has ever known.” “Yes, from what I understand, she spent the seven months she was with child entertaining each and every military man she could find, in the hopes that something of them would stick to you.” Meridas’s eyes widened, and his face flushed deeply. To their side, Shallan audibly gasped. “You godless whore,” Amaram hissed, releasing her. “If you weren’t a woman…” “If I weren’t a woman, I suspect we wouldn’t be having this conversation. Unless I were a pig. Then you’d be doubly interested.” He thrust his hand to the side, stepping back, preparing to summon his Blade. Jasnah smiled, holding her freehand toward him, letting Stormlight curl and rise from it. “Oh, please do, Meridas. Give me an excuse. I dare you.” He stared at her hand. The entire room had gone silent, of course. He’d forced her to make a spectacle. His eyes flicked up to meet hers; then he spun and stalked from the room, shoulders hunched as if trying to shrug away the eyes—and the snickers—of the scholars. He will be trouble, Jasnah thought. Even more than he has been. Amaram genuinely thought he was Alethkar’s only hope and salvation, and had a keen desire to prove it. Left alone, he’d rip the armies apart to justify his inflated opinion of himself. She’d speak with Dalinar. Perhaps the two of them could devise something to keep Amaram safely occupied. And if that didn’t work, she wouldn’t speak to Dalinar about the other precaution she would take. She’d been out of touch for a long time, but she was confident there would be assassins for hire here, ones who knew her reputation for discretion and excellent pay. A high-pitched sound came from beside her, and Jasnah glanced to find Shallan sitting perkily on her seat, making an excited noise in the back of her throat and clapping her hands together quickly, the sound muffled by her clothed safehand. Wonderful. “Mother,” Jasnah said, “might I speak for a moment with my ward?” Navani nodded, her eyes lingering on the doorway where Amaram had exited. Once, she’d pushed for the union between them. Jasnah didn’t blame her; the truth of Amaram was difficult to see, and had been even more so in the past, when he’d been close to Jasnah’s father. Navani withdrew, leaving Shallan alone at the table stacked with reports. “Brightness!” Shallan said as Jasnah sat. “That was incredible!” “I let myself be pushed into abundant emotion.” “You were so clever!” “And yet, my first insult was not to attack him, but the moral reputation of his female relative. Clever? Or simply the use of an obvious bludgeon?” “Oh. Um … Well…” “Regardless,” Jasnah cut in, wishing to avoid further conversation about Amaram, “I’ve been thinking about your training.” Shallan stiffened immediately. “I’ve been very busy, Brightness. However, I’m sure I’ll be able to get to those books you assigned me very soon.” Jasnah rubbed her forehead. This girl … “Brightness,” Shallan said, “I think I might have to request a leave from my studies.” Shallan spoke so quickly the words ran into one another. “His Majesty says he needs me to go with him on the expedition to Kholinar.” Jasnah frowned. Kholinar? “Nonsense. They’ll have the Windrunner with them. Why do they need you?” “The king is worried they might need to sneak into the city,” Shallan said. “Or even through the middle of it, if it’s occupied. We can’t know how far the siege has progressed. If Elhokar has to reach the Oathgate without being recognized, then my illusions will be invaluable. I have to go. It’s so inconvenient. I’m sorry.” She took a deep breath, eyes wide, as if afraid that Jasnah would snap at her. This girl. “I’ll speak with Elhokar,” Jasnah said. “I feel that might be extreme. For now, I want you to do drawings of Renarin’s and Kaladin’s spren, for scholarly reasons. Bring them to me for…” She trailed off. “What is he doing?” Renarin stood near the far wall, which was covered in palm-size tiles. He tapped a specific one, and somehow made it pop out, like a drawer. Jasnah stood, throwing back her chair. She strode across the room, Shallan scampering along behind her. Renarin glanced at them, then held up what he’d found in the small drawer. A ruby, long as Jasnah’s thumb, cut into a strange shape with holes drilled in it. What on Roshar? She took it from him and held it up. “What is it?” Navani said, shouldering up beside her. “A fabrial? No metal parts. What is that shape?” Jasnah reluctantly surrendered it to her mother. “So many imperfections in the cut,” Navani said. “That will cause it to lose Stormlight quickly. It won’t even hold a charge for a day, I bet. And it will vibrate something fierce.” Curious. Jasnah touched it, infusing the gemstone with Stormlight. It started glowing, but not nearly as brightly as it should have. Navani was, of course, right. It vibrated as Stormlight curled off it. Why would anyone spoil a gem with such a twisted cut, and why hide it? The small drawer was latched with a spring, but she couldn’t see how Renarin had gotten it undone. “Storms,” Shallan whispered as other scholars crowded around. “That’s a pattern.” “A pattern?” “Buzzes in sequence…” Shallan said. “My spren says he thinks this is a code. Letters?” “Music of language,” Renarin whispered. He drew in Stormlight from some spheres in his pocket, then turned and pressed his hands against the wall, sending a surge of Stormlight through it that extended from his palms like twin ripples on the surface of a pond. Drawers slid open, one behind each white tile. A hundred, two hundred … each revealing gemstones inside. The library had decayed, but the ancient Radiants had obviously anticipated that. They’d found another way to pass on their knowledge.

 

 

 

 

One of the most important things in the world to Jasnah is keeping her family safe. Protecting them. One of her biggest tenants is history being a guide. Learning from the past. We see both at the very front of her thoughts with this scene. Looking to the past regarding prior dynasties and seeking to learn from them, in order to preserve her family and not fall to the same mistakes others have made. For over a decade Jasnah dreamed of bringing together the best minds of the kingdom together for the betterment of humanity. Instead all they cared about was her heresy. How frustrating must that have been for Jasnah wanting to save the people she loved, only to be continually pestered about beliefs she had every right to hold. We get a brief glimpse of mothering Jasnah towards Renarin. Knowing whatever path he chooses will be hard, but silently cheering him on to find the courage to choose. At the same time she trusts in his strength to choose, she also shows her protect side by having Ivory watch the stormwardens that seek to use Renarin. Finally we get to see Jasnah with friends! Friends that I might add are both from other countries (Azir and Thaylenah). Friends that I might also add that one of which has to pretend to be a woman in order to publish scholarly works. Jasnah holds no judgement towards that pastry chef, and speaks with him fondly. It does not matter that he is a man, nor from another country. All that matters to her is that he is a learned individual who questions and wants to learn more.

Jasnah, just like she said she would during her fight with Kaladin, continues to research the heralds, their functions, and the parshmen. She takes in the new information, acknowledging the new picture of what and who the voidbringers are. She discounts nothing so long as it is well reasoned and researched. Her concern regarding Renarin works just the way she approaches everything else. Research first. Confirm first. Do not act brashly. Renarin is acting oddly. Jasnah goes to Shallan to get her thoughts. Aiming to discuss with others and get their input. It is then they are interrupted and we get another epic Jasnah scene. This portion I feel the need to break down in list form regarding the order of occurence

 

Amaram enters the room and approaches Jasnah, drawing close without her permission

Jasnah makes it clear from the get go she has no intention nor desire to speak with him

Amaram disregards this response, and then requests to speak privately

Jasnah again makes it clear to him the answer is no (for the second time now)

Amaram pushes more, and implies that Jasnah should manipulate Dalinar to do as he wants

Jasnah respects Dalinar’s thoughts, and has no intention of “steering” him

Amaram jumps of course to religion as everyone does regarding Jasnah. She must be infecting him with her beliefs. She must be luring him away from the faith! (we of course know otherwise as per their conversation in Dalinar’s vision)

Jasnah corrects him

Amaram pushes her again, now the third time.

Jasnah tells him no again and to leave.

Amaram mentions being close once, to which she corrects that was her father, not her.

Jasnah warns him a fourth time to leave.

He ignores her and steps closer, and expresses concern over seeing her well

We are up to fifth time. Jasnah says she is well now leave. This is still not enough

Amaram grabs her by the arm and asks why has she refused him.

 

I think you all get my point that I do not have to continue in list form. Jasnah has already told him to leave five times. Each time Amaram has only gotten more insistent and closer, violating her personal space against her express wishes. She has had to be continually and relentlessly pushed to respond, and oh boy does she respond. He wants to know why? She makes sure to tell him and make clear why. The “noble” Amaram’s response? He goes to draw his shardblade. The second time he has done something like this. The first being on Dalinar and just like Dalinar, Jasnah checkmates Amaram handedly. She didn’t want this. She didn’t want a spectacle, but he forced it. We then learn more of why Jasnah despises Amaram. He is an egotistical narcissistic brightlord willing to see armies (and as we know, all of roshar) be torn apart to satisfy his overly inflated opinion of himself. She muses that she would speak with Dalinar to work out something. Not force Dalinar. Not “steer” him. Talk because they respect each other and work well together. Despite how Jasnah was pushed into this interaction, she still takes responsibility for her part in in and uses it as an educational moment for Shallan. Shallan then takes the opportunity to mention going to Kholinar. Jasnah listened and although not sold on it yet, says she will discuss it with Elhokar, showing she respects his authority to confer with him over her ward. The scene closes with an awesome Renarin moment.

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Oathbringer page 648

This time Vizier Noura herself stepped forward and took it. “ ‘Verdict,’ ” she read from the top. “ ‘By Jasnah Kholin.’ ” The others pushed through the guards, gathering around, and began reading it to themselves. Though this was the shortest of the essays, he heard them whispering and marveling over it. “Look, it incorporates all seven of Aqqu’s Logical Forms!” “That’s an allusion to the Grand Orientation. And … storms … she quotes Prime Kasimarlix in three successive stages, each escalating the same quote to a different level of Superior Understanding.” One woman held her hand to her mouth. “It’s written entirely in a single rhythmic meter!” “Great Yaezir,” Noura said. “You’re right.” “The allusions…” “Such wordplay…” “The momentum and rhetoric…” Logicspren burst around them in the shape of little stormclouds. Then, practically as one, the scions and viziers turned to Dalinar. “This is a work of art,” Noura said. “Is it … persuasive?” Dalinar asked. “It provokes further consideration,” Noura said, looking to the others, who nodded.

 

 

Just had to include this bit to show how differently two cultures view Jasnah. In Alethkar, the first thing on everyone’s mind is Jasnah’s heresy and her “coldness”. In Azir on the other hand, her work is lauded and her name inspires marvel and amazement. Truly makes me feel Alethkar does not know what they have in Jasnah.


 

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Oathbringer page 974

She and the bridgemen passed no fewer than six squads of sentries on their way to the library rooms with the murals and—more importantly—the hidden gemstone records. Arriving, she idled in the doorway, impressed by the operation that Jasnah had organized down here since Navani had been forced to step back from the research. Each gemstone had been removed from its individual drawer, catalogued, and numbered. While one group listened and wrote, others sat at tables, busy translating. The room buzzed with a low hum of discussion and scratching reeds, concentrationspren dotting the air like ripples in the sky. Jasnah strolled along the tables, looking through pages of translations. As Navani entered, the bridgemen gathered around Renarin, who blushed, looking up from his own papers, which were covered in glyphs and numbers. He did look out of place in the room, the only man in uniform rather than in the robes of an ardent or stormwarden. “Mother,” Jasnah said, not looking up from her papers, “we need more translators. Do you have any other scribes versed in classical Alethelan?” “I’ve lent you everyone I have. What is Renarin studying over there?” “Hm? Oh, he thinks there might be a pattern to which stones were stored in which drawers. He’s been working on it all day.” “And?” “Nothing, which is not surprising. He insists he can find a pattern if he looks hard enough.” Jasnah lowered her pages and looked at her cousin, who was joking with the men of Bridge Four. Storms, Navani thought. He truly looks happy. Embarrassed as they ribbed him, but happy. She’d worried when he had first “joined” Bridge Four. He was the son of a highprince. Decorum and distance were appropriate when dealing with enlisted soldiers. But when, before this, had she last heard him laugh? “Maybe,” Navani said, “we should encourage him to take a break and go out with the bridgemen for the evening.” “I’d rather keep him here,” Jasnah said, flipping through her pages. “His powers need additional study.” Navani would talk to Renarin anyway and encourage him to go out more with the men. There was no arguing with Jasnah, any more than there was arguing with a boulder. You just stepped to the side and went around. “The translation goes well,” Navani asked, “other than the bottleneck on numbers of scribes?” “We’re lucky,” Jasnah said, “that the gemstones were recorded so late in the life of the Radiants. They spoke a language we can translate. If it had been the Dawnchant…” “That’s close to being cracked.” Jasnah frowned at that. Navani had thought the prospect of translating the Dawnchant—and writings lost to the shadowdays—would have excited her. Instead, it seemed to trouble her. “Have you found anything more about the tower’s fabrials in these gemstone records?” Navani asked. “I’ll be certain to prepare a report for you, Mother, with details of each and every fabrial mentioned. So far, those references are few. Most are personal histories.” “Damnation.” “Mother!” Jasnah said, lowering her pages. “What? I wouldn’t have thought you would object to a few strong words now and—” “It’s not the language, but the dismissal,” Jasnah said. “Histories.” Oh, right. “History is the key to human understanding.” Here we go. “We must learn from the past and apply that knowledge to our modern experience.” Lectured by my own daughter again. “The best indication of what human beings will do is not what they think, but what the record says similar groups have done in the past.” “Of course, Brightness.” Jasnah gave her a dry look, then set her papers aside. “I’m sorry, Mother. I’ve been dealing with a lot of lesser ardents today. My didactic side might have inflated.” “You have a didactic side? Dear, you hate teaching.” “Which explains my mood, I should think. I—” A young scribe called for her from the other side of the room. Jasnah sighed, then went to answer the question. Jasnah preferred to work alone, which was odd, considering how good she was at getting people to do what she wanted. Navani liked groups—but of course, Navani wasn’t a scholar. Oh, she knew how to pretend. But all she really did was nudge here and there, perhaps provide an idea. Others did all the real engineering. She poked through the papers Jasnah had set aside. Perhaps her daughter had missed something in the translations. To her mind, the only scholarship of importance was stuffy, dusty writings of old philosophers. When it came to fabrials, Jasnah barely knew her pairings from her warnings.… What was this? The glyphs were scrawled in white on the highprince’s wall, the paper read. We quickly ascertained the implement of writing to be a stone pried free near the window. This first sign was the roughest of them, the glyphs malformed. The reason for this later became apparent, as Prince Renarin was not versed in writing glyphs, save the numbers. The other pages were similar, talking about the strange numbers found around Dalinar’s palace in the days leading up to the Everstorm. They’d been made by Renarin, whose spren had given him warning that the enemy was preparing an assault. The poor boy, uncertain of his bond and frightened to speak out, had instead written the numbers where Dalinar would see them. It was a little odd, but in the face of everything else, it didn’t really register. And … well, it was Renarin. Why had Jasnah collected all of these? I have a description for you, finally, Jasnah, another said. We’ve convinced the Radiant that Lift found in Yeddaw to visit Azimir. Though she has not yet arrived, you can find sketches of her spren companion here. It looks like the shimmer you see on a wall when you shine light through a crystal. Troubled, Navani set the sheets down before Jasnah could return. She got a copy of the translated portions from the gemstones—several young scribes were assigned to making these available—then slipped out to go check on Dalinar.

 

 

 

 

Nice little tidbit here on Jasnah’s capabilities as a ruler. Navani is impressed with how Jasnah has everything organized and has three disparate groups (stormwardens, scholars, and ardents) all working together towards a common goal. Two of those groups by the way that oppose Jasnah in her beliefs, yet she succeeds in getting them to work under her and accomplishing tasks. Jasnah is trying to keep an eye on Renarin and research everything about him before coming to any conclusions. I find this interaction between Navani and Jasnah funny and interesting. History, in fact any history, is important in Jasnah’s mind. Even personal histories are worthy of note as it causes us to learn more about ourselves. We get another apology from Jasnah! It is funny, for someone that everyone (in the books) acts like is perfect, arrogant, and egotistical, Jasnah sure does admit when she is wrong, apologizes, and tries to do better an awful lot.


 

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Oathbringer page 981

In the distance, a voice … “You must find the most important words a man can say.” Which key was it? He got one into the lock, but it wouldn’t turn. He couldn’t see. He blinked, feeling dizzy. “Those words came to me from one who claimed to have seen the future,” the voice said, echoing in the hallway. Feminine, familiar. “ ‘How is this possible?’ I asked in return. ‘Have you been touched by the void?’ “The reply was laughter. ‘No, sweet king. The past is the future, and as each man has lived, so must you.’ “ ‘So I can but repeat what has been done before?’ “ ‘In some things, yes. You will love. You will hurt. You will dream. And you will die. Each man’s past is your future.’ “ ‘Then what is the point?’ I asked. ‘If all has been seen and done?’ “ ‘The question,’ she replied, ‘is not whether you will love, hurt, dream, and die. It is what you will love, why you will hurt, when you will dream, and how you will die. This is your choice. You cannot pick the destination, only the path.’ ” Dalinar dropped the keys again, sobbing. There was no escape. He would fall again. Wine would consume him like a fire consumed a corpse. Leaving only ash. There was no way out. “This started my journey,” the voice said. “And this begins my writings. I cannot call this book a story, for it fails at its most fundamental to be a story. It is not one narrative, but many. And though it has a beginning, here on this page, my quest can never truly end. “I wasn’t seeking answers. I felt that I had those already. Plenty, in multitude, from a thousand different sources. I wasn’t seeking ‘myself.’ This is a platitude that people have ascribed to me, and I find the phrase lacks meaning. “In truth, by leaving, I was seeking only one thing. “A journey.” For years, it seemed that Dalinar had been seeing everything around him through a haze. But those words … something about them … Could words give off light? He turned from his door and walked down the corridor, searching for the source of the voice. Inside the royal reading room, he found Jasnah with a huge tome set before her at a standing table. She read to herself, turning to the next page, scowling. “What is that book?” Dalinar asked. Jasnah started. She wiped her eyes, smearing the makeup, leaving her eyes … clean, but raw. Holes in a mask. “This is where my father got that quote,” she said. “The one he…” The one he wrote as he died. Only a few knew of that. “What book is it?” “An old text,” Jasnah said. “Ancient, once well regarded. It’s associated with the Lost Radiants, so nobody references it anymore. There has to be some secret here, a puzzle behind my father’s last words. A cipher? But what?” Dalinar settled down into one of the seats. He felt as if he had no strength. “Will you read it to me?” Jasnah met his eyes, chewing her lip as she’d always done as a child. Then she read in a clear, strong voice, starting over from the first page, which he’d just heard. He had expected her to stop after a chapter or two, but she didn’t, and he didn’t want her to. Dalinar listened, rapt. People came to check on them; some brought Jasnah water to drink. For once, he didn’t ask them for anything. All he wanted was to listen. He understood the words, but at the same time he seemed to be missing what the book said. It was a sequence of vignettes about a king who left his palace to go on a pilgrimage. Dalinar couldn’t define, even to himself, what he found so striking about the tales. Was it their optimism? Was it the talk of paths and choices? It was so unpretentious. So different from the boasts of society or the battlefield. Just a series of stories, their morals ambiguous. It took almost eight hours to finish, but Jasnah never gave any indication she wanted to stop. When she read the last word, Dalinar found himself weeping again. Jasnah dabbed at her own eyes. She had always been so much stronger than he was, but here they shared an understanding. This was their send-off to Gavilar’s soul. This was their farewell. Leaving the book on the lectern, Jasnah walked over to Dalinar as he stood up. They embraced, saying nothing. After a few moments, she left.

 

 

 

 

Another touching moment between Jasnah and Dalinar. The love of her father drove Jasnah to seek “The Way of Kings” which she found out was the source of her father’s cryptic message to Dalinar. Sharing in their grief of a brother and father lost. Sharing in the words of the Way of Kings. Jasnah first sought it to answer the question of her father’s death, but like Dalinar, she heard something that touched her. She continued to read without pause. She didn’t have to be prompted by Dalinar to do so. She chose to. In tears the both of them spent nearly eight hours together reading it. Their last farewell to Gavilar. Looks like quite an emotional moment to me.

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Oathbringer page 994

That left the one in Panatham in Babatharnam—which the combined Iriali and Riran armies might have captured already—and one in Akinah, which Jasnah was confident had been destroyed long ago. Jah Keved made the most sense for the enemy to attack, didn’t it? Only … once you engaged yourself in Jah Keved, you were stuck fighting a long war of attrition. You lost mobility, had to dedicate enormous resources to it. He shook his head, feeling frustrated. He left the map, trailed by Navani, and stepped into the other room for refreshment. At the wine table, he forced himself to pour a warm, spiced orange. Something with no kick. Jasnah joined the group, delivering a stack of papers to her mother. “May I see?” Ialai asked. “No,” Jasnah replied; Dalinar hid a smile in his drink. “What secrets are you keeping?” Ialai asked. “What happened to your uncle’s grand talk of unification?” “I suspect that each monarch in this room,” Jasnah said, “would prefer to know that state secrets are allowed to remain their own. This is an alliance, not a wedding.” Queen Fen nodded at that. “As for these papers,” Jasnah continued, “they happen to be a scholarly report which my mother has not yet reviewed. We will release what we discover, once we are certain that our translations are correct and that nothing in these notes might give our enemies an advantage against this city.” Jasnah cocked an eyebrow. “Or would you prefer our scholarship be sloppy?” The Azish seemed mollified by this. “I just think,” Ialai said, “you showing up here with them is a slap in the face for the rest of us.” “Ialai,” Jasnah said, “it is good you are here. Sometimes, an intelligent dissenting voice tests and proves a theory. I do wish you’d work harder on the intelligent part.” Dalinar downed the rest of his drink and smiled as Ialai settled back in her chair, wisely not escalating a verbal battle against Jasnah. Unfortunately, Ruthar did not have similar sense. “Don’t mind her, Ialai,” he said, mustache wet with wine. “The godless have no concept of proper decency. Everyone knows that the only reason to abandon belief in the Almighty is so that you can explore vice.” Oh, Ruthar, Dalinar thought. You can’t win this fight. Jasnah has thought about the topic far more than you have. It’s a familiar battleground to her

 

 

Included this scene for two reasons. First, I think it is great to see Jasnah stop Ialai in her tracks. Jasnah is intelligent, competent and in control. Ruthar of course goes to the only thing anyone seems to think is worth talking of regarding Jasnah. Her faith. Just because she is a heretic, she must be a horrible sinner. Doesn’t matter she had been spending the better part of six years trying to stop the end of the world. Doesn’t matter she nearly died multiple times doing it. But because she doesn’t believe in the national religion, she must be a horrible person that seeks to sin anytime she can. Jasnah has had to fight this every step of the way, to the point that Dalinar knows it is a familiar battleground to her, and Ruthar doesn’t have a chance. I say again as I have said before, how much it feel that despite all your accomplishments. Everything you have done. All of it is forgotten in the face of your personal beliefs. To be attacked about it relentlessly. And people (in the book) wonder why Jasnah holds just a stern exterior. To me it is plain as day.

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Oathbringer page 1041

Sometime near the end of this discussion, Dalinar noticed Renarin shifting uncomfortably in his seat. As the Azish scribes began explaining their code of rules and guidelines for the coalition, Renarin excused himself in a hoarse voice, and left. Dalinar glanced at Navani, who seemed troubled. Jasnah stood to follow, but was interrupted by a scribe bringing her a small sheaf of documents. She accepted them and moved to Navani’s side so they could study them together.

 

 

Jasnah’s instinct is to check on Renarin and be there for him. It is only because of the pressing nature of what is happening that she is stopped. Jasnah cares for Renarin. It has been spelled out all across Oathbringer in Jasnah’s way. Because of what we have seen of Jasnah. Because of her interactions with those she cares about. Because of her feelings for Renarin, what to come was not a surprise to me. I feel it was building all along.


 

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Oathbringer page 1084

Jasnah carefully stepped out of the way of a troop of soldiers running for the Oathgate. She had been informed via spanreed that troops were gathering in Urithiru to come help. Unfortunately, they would soon have to acknowledge what she already knew. Thaylen City was lost. Their adversary had played this hand too well. That angered her, but she kept that emotion in check. At the very least, she hoped that Amaram’s band of malcontents would soak up arrows and spears long enough to let the Thaylen civilians evacuate. Lightning from the storm lit the city red. Focus. She had to focus on what she could do, not what she had failed to do. First, she had to see that her uncle didn’t get himself killed fighting a useless battle. Second, she needed to help evacuate Thaylen City; she had already warned Urithiru to prepare for refugees. Both these goals would wait a short time as she dealt with a matter even more pressing. “The facts align,” Ivory said. “The truth that has always been, will now soon manifest to all.” He rode upon the high collar of her dress, tiny, holding on with one hand. “You are correct. A traitor is.” Jasnah undid the buttons on her safehand sleeve and pinned it back, exposing the gloved hand underneath. In preparation, she’d also worn a scout’s yellow and gold havah, with shorter skirts slit at the sides and front, trousers underneath. Sturdy boots. She turned out of the path of another group of cursing soldiers and strode up the steps to the doorway of the temple of Pailiah’Elin. True to the information she’d been given, she found Renarin Kholin kneeling on the floor inside, head bowed. Alone. A spren rose from his back, bright red, shimmering like the heat of a mirage. A crystalline structure, like a snowflake, though it dripped light upward toward the ceiling. In her pouch, she carried a sketch of the proper spren of the Truthwatchers. And this was something different. Jasnah put her hand to the side, then—taking a deep breath—summoned Ivory as a Shardblade.

 

 

It may not appear to be at first, but this is a very difficult scene for Jasnah. She is trying to push herself to do it. Continually reinforcing that it must be done. Focus, must focus.

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Oathbringer page 1097

Jasnah moved into the temple, gripping her Shardblade, stepping on slippered feet. The red spren rising from Renarin—like a snowflake made of crystal and light—seemed to sense her and panicked, disappearing into Renarin with a puff. A spren is, Ivory said. The wrong spren is. Renarin Kholin was a liar. He was no Truthwatcher. That is a spren of Odium, Ivory said. Corrupted spren. But … a human, bonded to one? This thing is not. “It is,” Jasnah whispered. “Somehow.” She was now close enough to hear Renarin whispering. “No … Not Father. No, please…”

 

 

Interesting tidbit here “Renarin Kholin was a liar”. The implication being the evidence Jasnah gathered indicates Renarin is a complicit and willing traitor.

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Oathbringer page 1120

Now, neither knew what they’d become. Renarin could feel the spren trembling inside him, hiding and whispering about the danger. Jasnah had found them. Renarin had seen that coming. He knelt in the ancient temple of Pailiah, and to his eyes it was full of colors. A thousand panes of stained glass sprouted on the walls, combining and melting together, creating a panorama. He saw himself coming to Thaylen City earlier in the day. He saw Dalinar talking to the monarchs, and then he saw them turning against him. She will hurt us! She will hurt us! “I know, Glys,” he whispered, turning toward a specific section of stained glass. This showed Renarin kneeling on the floor of the temple. In the sequence of stained glass panels, Jasnah approached him from behind, sword raised. And then … she struck him down.

 

 

A possible future. One being reinforced by Glys (not saying Glys is the cause of the future, or pushing it to happen. Just pointing out the nature of self fulfilling prophesies)

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oathbringer page 1125

Jasnah stopped one pace behind Renarin. She could hear his whispers clearly now. “Father. Oh, Father…” The young man whipped his head in one direction, then another, seeing things that weren’t there. “He sees not what is, but what is to come,” Ivory said. “Odium’s power, Jasnah.”

 

 

More evidence. Renarin is clearly (or so it seems) using powers from the other side. He has lied about them. Kept them secret. There is a spy in Kholin’s house (though we know it is Taravangian, Jasnah did not). The only conclusion could be Renarin

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Oathbringer page 1130

Jasnah raised her Blade over Renarin’s head. Make it quick. Make it painless. Most threats to a dynasty came from within. Renarin was obviously corrupted. She’d known there was a problem the moment she’d read that he had predicted the Everstorm. Now, Jasnah had to be strong. She had to do what was right, even when it was so, so hard. She prepared to swing, but then Renarin turned and looked at her. Tears streaming down his face, he met her eyes, and he nodded. Suddenly they were young again. He was a trembling child, weeping on her shoulder for a father who didn’t seem to be able to feel love. Little Renarin, always so solemn. Always misunderstood, laughed at and condemned by people who said similar things about Jasnah behind her back. Jasnah froze, as if standing at the edge of a cliff. Wind blew through the temple, carrying with it a pair of spren in the form of golden spheres, bobbing in the currents. Jasnah dismissed her sword. “Jasnah?” Ivory said, appearing back in the form of a man, clinging to her collar. Jasnah fell to her knees, then pulled Renarin into an embrace. He broke down crying, like he had as a boy, burying his head in her shoulder. “What’s wrong with me?” Renarin asked. “Why do I see these things? I thought I was doing something right, with Glys, but somehow it’s all wrong.…” “Hush,” Jasnah whispered. “We’ll find a way through it, Renarin. Whatever it is, we’ll fix it. We’ll survive this, somehow.” Storms. The things he’d said about Dalinar … “Jasnah,” Ivory said, becoming full size as he stepped free of her collar. He leaned down. “Jasnah, this is right. Somehow it is.” He seemed completely stunned. “It is not what makes sense, yet it is still right. How. How is this thing?” Renarin pulled back from her, his tearstained eyes going wide. “I saw you kill me.” “It’s all right, Renarin. I’m not going to.” “But don’t you see? Don’t you understand what that means?” Jasnah shook her head. “Jasnah,” Renarin said. “My vision was wrong about you. What I see … it can be wrong.”

 

 

Here we go. The big scene. The moment some have said is the first time we see emotion and genuine love from Jasnah. I think I have shown otherwise. Love has always been there. Just had to know where to look. Despite all the evidence. Despite everything indicating Renarin is the spy, Jasnah is still struggling. She keeps trying to convince herself to do it. But she realizes she can’t. It doesn’t matter if it could mean the world will end and the enemy will win. All that matters is her being there for that scared little boy she helped raise. The little boy she loved like a son.

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Oathbringer page 1134

Renarin ran after Jasnah through the Loft Wards of the city. People clogged the streets, but she didn’t use those. She leaped off buildings, dropping onto rooftops of the tiers below. She ran across each of these, then leaped down to the next street. Renarin struggled to follow, afraid of his weakness, confused by the things he’d seen. He dropped to a rooftop, feeling sudden pain at the fall—though Stormlight healed that. He limped after her until the pain left. “Jasnah!” he called. “Jasnah, I can’t keep up!” She stopped at the edge of a rooftop. He reached her, and she took his arm. “You can keep up, Renarin. You’re a Knight Radiant.” “I don’t think I’m a Radiant, Jasnah. I don’t know what I am.” An entire stream of gloryspren flew past them, hundreds in a sweeping formation that curved toward the base of the city. Something was glowing down there, a beacon in the dim light of an overcast city. “I know what you are,” Jasnah said. “You’re my cousin. Family, Renarin. Hold my hand. Run with me.” He nodded, and she towed him after her, leaping from the rooftop, ignoring the monstrous creature that climbed up nearby. Jasnah seemed focused on only one thing. That light.

 

And now Jasnah gives voice to the reason for her decision “You’re my cousin. Family”. Her family is what drove Jasnah to exhaustion for six years. To save them. Protect them. And now together with her family, they drive forward.

 

(I skipped the scene where Jasnah is doing some soulcasting amazingness as it does not give us any information on her as a character. Still epic though lol)

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Oathbringer page 1142

“The enemy is trying to crush this city, Captain,” Dalinar said, lowering his arm. “We’re going to hold it against his forces.” “Seven Radiants?” Jasnah said, skeptical. “Uncle, that seems a tall order, even if one of us is—apparently—the storming Assassin in White.” “I serve Dalinar Kholin,” Szeth-son-son-Vallano whispered. His face, for some reason, was streaked with grey. “I cannot know truth, so I follow one who does.” “Whatever we do,” Shallan said, “we should do it quickly. Before those soldiers—” “Renarin!” Dalinar barked. “Sir!” Renarin said, scrambling forward. “We need to hold out until troops arrive from Urithiru. Fen doesn’t have the numbers to fight alone. Get to the Oathgate, stop that thunderclast up there from destroying it, and open the portal.” “Sir!” Renarin saluted. “Shallan, we don’t have an army yet,” Dalinar said. “Lightweave one up for us, and keep these soldiers busy. They’re consumed by a bloodlust that I suspect will make them easier to distract. Jasnah, the city we’re defending happens to have a big storming hole in its wall. Can you hold that hole and stop anyone who tries to get through?” She nodded, thoughtful.

 

 

Just including this scene because it shows that Jasnah has no problem falling in line and following orders so long as the source is an individual she trusts and respects, and the order makes sense. Decorum when it is required, action when it is not.

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Oathbringer page 1150

Jasnah stepped over a corpse. Her Blade vanished in a puff of Stormlight, and Ivory appeared next to her, his oily black features concerned as he regarded the sky. “This place is three, still,” he said. “Almost three.” “Or three places are nearly one,” Jasnah replied. Another batch of gloryspren flocked past, and she could see them as they were in the Cognitive Realm: like strange avians with long wings, and a golden sphere in place of the head. Well, being able to see into the Cognitive Realm without trying was one of the least unnerving things that had happened so far today. An incredible amount of Stormlight thrummed inside her—more than she’d ever held before. Another group of soldiers broke through Shallan’s illusions and charged over the rubble through the gap in the wall. Jasnah casually flipped her hand toward them. Once, their souls would have resisted mightily. Soulcasting living things was difficult; it usually required care and concentration—along with proper knowledge and procedure. Today, the men puffed away to smoke at her barest thought. It was so easy that a part of her was horrified. She felt invincible, which was a danger in itself. The human body wasn’t meant to be stuffed this full of Stormlight. It rose from her like smoke from a bonfire. Dalinar had closed his perpendicularity, however. He had been the storm, and had somehow recharged the spheres—but like a storm, his effects were passing. “Three worlds,” Ivory said. “Slowly splitting apart again, but for now, three realms are close.” “Then let’s make use of it before it fades, shall we?” She stepped up before the rent portion of the wall, a gap as wide as a small city block. Then raised her hands.

 

 

Jasnah given seemingly absolute power does not tempt her. In fact it horrifies and concerns her. She recognizes the dangers that it poses to her self, to her body, and to others. Jasnah is not the type to grab for power, steam rolling any in her way. She works with people she respects. The signs of this above and throughout the three books tells me she will work well with Dalinar, Adolin, and the other highprinces in preserving the Alethi and fighting the Voidbringers.

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Oathbringer page 1156

She reached the top of the wall and found her mother there with Queen Fen and some soldiers. They had made a command station at one of the old guard posts. Soldiers huddled outside with pikes pointed toward two Fused in the sky. Bother. Jasnah strode along the wall, taking in the melee of illusions and men outside. Shallan stood at the back; most of the spheres around her had been drained already. She was burning through Stormlight at a terrible rate. “Bad?” she asked Ivory. “It is,” he said from her collar. “It is.” “Mother,” Jasnah called, approaching where Fen and Navani stood by the guard post. “You need to rally the troops within the city and clear the enemy inside.” “We’re working on it,” Navani said. “But— Jasnah! In the air—” Jasnah raised an absent hand without looking, forming a wall of black pitch. A Fused crashed through it, and Jasnah Soulcast a flick of fire, sending the thing screaming and flailing, burning with a terrible smoke. Jasnah Soulcast the rest of the pitch on the wall to smoke, then continued forward. “We must take advantage of Radiant Shallan’s distraction and cleanse Thaylen City. Otherwise, when the assault comes from outside once more, our attention will be divided.” “From outside?” Fen said. “But we have the wall fixed, and— Storms! Brightness!” Jasnah stepped aside without looking as the second Fused swooped down—the reactions of spren in Shadesmar allowed her to judge where it was. She turned and swung her hand at the creature. Ivory formed and sliced through the Fused’s head as it passed, sending it curling about itself—eyes burning—and tumbling along the wall top. “The enemy,” Jasnah said, “will not be stopped by a wall, and Brightness Shallan has feasted upon almost all of the spheres Uncle Dalinar recharged. My Stormlight is nearly gone. We have to be ready to hold this position through conventional means once the power is gone.” “Surely there aren’t enough enemy troops to…” Fen’s consort said, but trailed off as Jasnah pointed with Ivory—who obligingly formed again—toward the waiting parshman armies. Neither the hovering red haze nor the breaking lightning of the storm was enough to drown out the red glows beginning to appear in the parshmen’s eyes. “We must be ready to hold this wall as long as it takes for troops to arrive from Urithiru,” Jasnah said. “Where is Renarin? Wasn’t he to deal with that thunderclast?” “One of my soldiers reported seeing him,” Fen said. “He had been slowed by the crowds. Prince Adolin expressed an intention to go help.” “Excellent. I will trust that task to my cousins, and instead see what I can do to keep my ward from getting herself killed.”

 

 

Jasnah, ever economical and tactical breaks down the situation in the battle to Fen and Navani. She takes in the information, considers what areas need support, and reasons what needs to be done. Finally she asks regarding Renarin, and once told he is working on, she trusts in his and Adolin’s capabilities to accomplish their goal. All, in my opinion, hallmarks of an excellent leader.

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Oathbringer page 1178

A woman with jet-black hair that had escaped its usual braids. It blew free as she stepped between the enemy and Shallan, Radiant, and Veil. The ground turned glossy, the surface of the stone Soulcast into oil. Veil, Shallan, and Radiant were able to glimpse it in the Cognitive Realm. It changed so easily. How did Jasnah manage that? Jasnah Soulcast a spark from the air, igniting the oil and casting up a field of flames. The Fused raised hands before their faces, stumbling back. “That should buy us a few moments.” Jasnah turned toward Radiant, Veil, and Shallan. She took Shallan by the arm—but Shallan wavered, then puffed away. Jasnah froze, then turned to Veil. “Here,” Radiant said, tired, stumbling to her feet. She was the one Jasnah could feel. She blinked away tears. “Are you … real?” “Yes, Shallan. You did well out here.” She touched Radiant’s arm, then glanced toward the Fused, who were venturing into the fires despite the heat. “Damnation. Perhaps I should have opened a pit beneath them instead.” Shallan winced as the last of her army—like the shredded light of a setting sun—vanished. Jasnah proffered a gemstone, which Radiant drank eagerly. Amaram’s troops had begun to form ranks again. “Come,” Jasnah said, pulling Veil back to the wall, where steps grew from the stone itself. “Soulcast?” Shallan asked. “Yes.” Jasnah stepped onto the first, but Shallan didn’t follow. “We shouldn’t have ignored this,” Radiant said. “We should have practiced this.” She slipped—for a moment—into viewing Shadesmar. Beads rolled and surged beneath her. “Not too far,” Jasnah warned. “You can’t bring your physical self into the realm, as I once assumed you could, but there are things here that can feast upon your mind.” “If I want to Soulcast the air. How?” “Avoid air until you practice further,” Jasnah said. “It is convenient, but difficult to control. Why don’t you try to turn some stone into oil, as I did? We can fire it as we climb the steps, and further impede the enemy.” “I…” So many beads, so many spren, churning in the lake that marked Thaylen City. So overwhelming. “That rubble near the wall will be easier than the ground itself,” Jasnah said, “as you’ll be able to treat those stones as distinct units, while the ground views itself all as one.” “It’s too much,” Shallan said, exhaustionspren spinning around her. “I can’t, Jasnah. I’m sorry.” “It is well, Shallan,” Jasnah said. “I merely wanted to see, as it seemed you were Soulcasting to give your illusions weight. But then, concentrated Stormlight has a faint mass to it. Either way, up the steps, child.” Radiant started up the stone steps. Behind, Jasnah waved her hand toward the approaching Fused—and stone formed from air, completely encasing them. It was brilliant. Any who saw it in only the Physical Realm would be impressed, but Radiant saw so much more. Jasnah’s absolute command and confidence. The Stormlight rushing to do her will. The air itself responding as if to the voice of God himself. Shallan gasped in wonder. “It obeyed. The air obeyed your call to transform. When I tried to make a single little stick change, it refused.” “Soulcasting is a practiced art,” Jasnah said. “Up, up. Keep walking.” She sliced the steps off as they walked. “Remember, you mustn’t order stones, as they are more stubborn than men. Use coercion. Speak of freedom and of movement. But for a gas becoming a solid, you must impose discipline and will. Each Essence is different, and each offers advantages and disadvantages when used as a substrate for Soulcasting.” Jasnah glanced over her shoulder at the gathering army. “And perhaps … this is one time when a lecture isn’t advisable. With all my complaints about not wanting wards, you’d think I would be able to resist instructing people at inopportune times. Keep moving.” Feeling exhausted, Veil, Shallan, and Radiant trudged up and finally reached the top of the wall.

 

 

Here we see Jasnah while holding off the fused still take the time to care for, and encourage Shallan while recognizing Shallan’s accomplishments. Shallan requests Jasnah teach her about soulcasting, and in fine ole Jasnah fashion she does exactly that. Shallan then feels overwhelmed and thinks it is a deficiency on her part. Jasnah reassures her it is fine, and then humbly relates that it takes time and work to learn the level of Jasnah’s skill. That Shallan isn’t just going to get it immediately. I find it ironic that at the same time Jasnah admonishes her capabilities as a teacher, she does a wonderful job. She is understanding, and supportive, while at the same time pushing her student to learn more.

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Oathbringer page 1182

Not the old fits, where he grew weak. He had new ones now, that neither he nor Glys could control. To his eyes, glass grew across the ground. It spread out like crystals, forming lattices, images, meanings and pathways. Stained-glass pictures, panel after panel. These had always been right. Until today—until they had proclaimed that Jasnah Kholin’s love would fail. He read this latest set of stained-glass images, then felt his fear drain away. He smiled. This seemed to confuse the Fused as they lowered their salutes.

 

 

I included this quote because I think this portion is poignant “until they had proclaimed that Jasnah Kholin’s love would fail”. In order for love to fail, it has to be there in the first place all along. Love I feel this thread has shown all throughout all three books, and love that I think we will learn even more of when we get to see Jasnah’s flashbacks.

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Oathbringer page 1193

Shallan wanted to sleep. She felt … weaker … more tired than the other two. Jasnah approached along the wall walk, then leaned down beside her. “Shallan? Are you well?” “Just tired,” Veil lied. “You have no idea how draining that was, Brightness. I could use a stiff drink.” “I suspect that would help very little,” Jasnah said, rising. “Rest here a while yet. I want to make absolutely certain the enemy is not returning.” “I swear to do better, Brightness,” Radiant said, taking Jasnah’s hand. “I wish to fulfill my wardship—to study and learn until you determine I am ready. I will not flee again. I’ve realized I have very far to go yet.” “That is well, Shallan.” Jasnah moved off.

 

 

I know by this point I am kind of beating a dead horse, but here again Jasnah takes the time to notice how Shallan is feeling and care for her. To see her safe and make certain the enemy is not coming back.

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Oathbringer page 1220

“Everyone in this storming country breaks the Codes,” Dalinar said, loudly, then looked over his shoulder. He continued, more softly. “I broke the Codes hundreds of times. You don’t have to be perfect, you only have to do your duty.” “No. I’ll be highprince, but not king. I just … no. I don’t want that burden. And before you complain that none of us want it, I’d also be terrible at the job. You think the monarchs would listen to me?” “I can’t be king of Alethkar,” Dalinar said softly. “I have to lead the Radiants—and need to divest myself of that power in Alethkar, to move away from that highking nonsense. We need a ruler in Alethkar who won’t be pushed over, but who can also deal with diplomats in diplomatic ways.” “Well, that’s not me,” Adolin repeated. “Who, then?” Dalinar demanded. Shallan cocked her head. “Hey. Have you boys ever considered…”

 

 

I included this scene because it basically lists Jasnah’s qualifications as all three end up agreeing Jasnah is the best choice. Adolin points out whoever is king needs to be able to have the other monarchs listen to the person. Dalinar comments they have to be the type of person who won’t be pushed over, but also can handle issues diplomatically. Balance. Strong hand, but even governance.

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Oathbringer page 1222

The doors to the room slammed open, the noise of it sending a shock through the room, complaints falling silent. Even Turi sat up to note Jasnah Kholin standing in the doorway. She wore a small but unmistakable crown on her head. The Kholin family, it seemed, had chosen their new monarch. Turi grinned at the looks of worry on the faces of many of the others in the room. “Oh my,” he whispered to Palona. “Now this should be interesting.”

 

 

And now we close with Queen Jasnah. The reactions of all attending certainly seems to confirm that Dalinar’s, Adolin’s, and Shallan’s thoughts on Jasnah as Queen were right.

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@Pathfinder This is an awesome post! Great job, and thank you.

I liked Jasnah when I read Way of Kings. I did, and your post reminded me of that (thanks again!). And I have always considered her character to be great even though I personally dont like her.

And why don’t I? I dont think it is about me not getting that she is a good person, because I do, especially after this post. I understand that she is caring and not really cold. That all she does is for good. That she has a tough time, filled with hardships. 

My problem is easily divided into three parts, I think:

1. Im still not fond of her cold demeanor, which she puts up for the world to see. That is how we see her most of the time, and I find it annoying. When I read a lot of her lines and scenes in Oathbringer, she feels a little full of herself, and I dont like that. I don’t think that she is (or rather, I think she might be, but subconsciously). This is probably more my own fault than hers though. I just cant look away from my annoyance, even though I know that I’m not really annoyed with the Jasnah that exists deep down.

2. She is (and this, I would argue, is the one actual problem with Jasnahs character) overpowered. If Stormlight had been a tv-game, everyone would have been calling for Brandon to nerf her. She is an amazing fighter, a great scholar, incredibly knowledgeable, diplomatically skilled, keeps track of assassins, Ghostbloods and Heralds, might already have Shardplate, is able to get everyone to do what she wants them to do, and is intelligent, beautiful, rich, kind, caring and has a high position in society. No matter what the problem is, all characters can turn to Jasnah. That bothers me. In order for me to relate to her, she needs to have a weakness, a flaw that actively hinders her in an area which is currently important to her. As of now, she doesn’t have that. 

3. I just dont get the hype. I often get stuck loving characters who are minor/side characters, or as is the case in Stormlight, universally disliked (poor Amaram). I tend to have bias against the characters a LOT of other people love, but which I don’t get the hype for. In Jasnahs case, that is increased because of my other problems with her character. This is a fault of mine, and not anything directly related to Jasnah. 

But it was an educational text, and I am impressed with the work and sheer dedication on your part. Thanks for encouraging me to check it out!

 

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@Pathfinder This is an awesome post! Great job, and thank you.

I liked Jasnah when I read Way of Kings. I did, and your post reminded me of that (thanks again!). And I have always considered her character to be great even though I personally dont like her.

And why don’t I? I dont think it is about me not getting that she is a good person, because I do, especially after this post. I understand that she is caring and not really cold. That all she does is for good. That she has a tough time, filled with hardships. 

My problem is easily divided into three parts, I think:

1. Im still not fond of her cold demeanor, which she puts up for the world to see. That is how we see her most of the time, and I find it annoying. When I read a lot of her lines and scenes in Oathbringer, she feels a little full of herself, and I dont like that. I don’t think that she is (or rather, I think she might be, but subconsciously). This is probably more my own fault than hers though. I just cant look away from my annoyance, even though I know that I’m not really annoyed with the Jasnah that exists deep down.

2. She is (and this, I would argue, is the one actual problem with Jasnahs character) overpowered. If Stormlight had been a tv-game, everyone would have been calling for Brandon to nerf her. She is an amazing fighter, a great scholar, incredibly knowledgeable, diplomatically skilled, keeps track of assassins, Ghostbloods and Heralds, might already have Shardplate, is able to get everyone to do what she wants them to do, and is intelligent, beautiful, rich, kind, caring and has a high position in society. No matter what the problem is, all characters can turn to Jasnah. That bothers me. In order for me to relate to her, she needs to have a weakness, a flaw that actively hinders her in an area which is currently important to her. As of now, she doesn’t have that. 

3. I just dont get the hype. I often get stuck loving characters who are minor/side characters, or as is the case in Stormlight, universally disliked (poor Amaram). I tend to have bias against the characters a LOT of other people love, but which I don’t get the hype for. In Jasnahs case, that is increased because of my other problems with her character. This is a fault of mine, and not anything directly related to Jasnah. 

But it was an educational text, and I am impressed with the work and sheer dedication on your part. Thanks for encouraging me to check it out!

 

Remember that we only get a couple Jasnah PoVs. Most of our perception of her comes from Shallan's PoVs, and Shallan is.........very much an unreliable observer when it comes to Jasnah.

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2 minutes ago, RShara said:

Remember that we only get a couple Jasnah PoVs. Most of our perception of her comes from Shallan's PoVs, and Shallan is.........very much an unreliable observer when it comes to Jasnah.

Thanks for reminding me of this. It’s very true. But at the same time, I need to judge the character from what we see and hear of her. I think that she needs more POVs of her own to truly shine, because everyone except Kaladin loves and admires her, and might not notice her flaws or weaknesses.

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29 minutes ago, Toaster Retribution said:

@Pathfinder 

1. Im still not fond of her cold demeanor, which she puts up for the world to see. That is how we see her most of the time, and I find it annoying. When I read a lot of her lines and scenes in Oathbringer, she feels a little full of herself, and I dont like that. I don’t think that she is (or rather, I think she might be, but subconsciously). This is probably more my own fault than hers though. I just cant look away from my annoyance, even though I know that I’m not really annoyed with the Jasnah that exists deep down.

2. She is (and this, I would argue, is the one actual problem with Jasnahs character) overpowered. If Stormlight had been a tv-game, everyone would have been calling for Brandon to nerf her. She is an amazing fighter, a great scholar, incredibly knowledgeable, diplomatically skilled, keeps track of assassins, Ghostbloods and Heralds, might already have Shardplate, is able to get everyone to do what she wants them to do, and is intelligent, beautiful, rich, kind, caring and has a high position in society. No matter what the problem is, all characters can turn to Jasnah. That bothers me. In order for me to relate to her, she needs to have a weakness, a flaw that actively hinders her in an area which is currently important to her. As of now, she doesn’t have that. 

3. I just dont get the hype. I often get stuck loving characters who are minor/side characters, or as is the case in Stormlight, universally disliked (poor Amaram). I tend to have bias against the characters a LOT of other people love, but which I don’t get the hype for. In Jasnahs case, that is increased because of my other problems with her character. This is a fault of mine, and not anything directly related to Jasnah. 

But it was an educational text, and I am impressed with the work and sheer dedication on your part. Thanks for encouraging me to check it out!

 

1. Totally respect you do not enjoy her outward self. Totally entitled to your opinion. But for informational purposes it is a defensive mechanism. When she nearly died from soulcasting for the first time, she kept reciting in her brain to be calm and be rational. When she lost her father and was torn apart inside, she was fighting through her emotions to try and make sense of it all. It is how she copes. I will also point out, just about every single time she is cold and coarse to someone, they deserve it. They instigated the response. Otherwise she is respectful and considerate. 

2. I cannot recall if I covered this in my post, but Jasnah will not come to the forefront till the back five of stormlight. I see her becoming queen as a means to maintain and keep the peace of Alethkar while Dalinar handles the voidbringer war. To me for now she will be in the background till the back five. She is the furthest along radiant than all the others. When they catch up, let us speak again about the level of power. When we see the full force that Odium can bring to bear, that challenged even the heralds who as per WoB were confirmed to have once had access to amounts of investiture no radiant could attain (prior to Honor's death), let us speak again about her level of power. I see her return to the forefront to be when the stakes have rose significantly. So personally I do not think her level of power is a problem. 

3. To each their own. I think the hype for me at least is multi layered. She is a strong independent woman who is fully capable which is a concept that for a very long time unfortunately was unseen in novels. So she provides a character women can look up to, and identify with. She is rational, educated, and very intelligent. When a good chunk of movies, television, and novels involve the physically strong man of action who solves problems by cutting his way with his martial prowess, those who are more cerebrally inclined have her to identify with and look up to. For those who are magic system geeks, for myself at least, she has one of the most interesting power systems of all the radiants. Add the incredibly clever, and innovative ways she employs said abilities, and all I want to see is more. She is an atheist in a world that sees such as an abomination yet she holds true to her convictions. She is an atheist that is portrayed in a respectful and thoughtful manner. That gives individuals who are atheists themselves someone to identify with and look up to. Finally I feel as evidenced from this post, despite the view few view points we get of Jasnah, she is an incredibly layered and well thought out character (to me).

So again, you are totally entitled for her to just not work for you, but I do appreciate that you took the time to read the reasons why she does fit for myself and others. 

 

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@Toaster Retribution not expecting to change your mind here but just wanted to add in another thought to consider.

I agree with this part of what you said, very very much. 

2 hours ago, Toaster Retribution said:

I think that she needs more POVs of her own to truly shine, because everyone except Kaladin loves and admires her, and might not notice her flaws or weaknesses.

I think it's much better to look at the way society as a whole looks at her. The brilliant, beautiful, spinster pariah. 

She is not well liked by anyone we see outside of her family and Shallan.

You're also correct in this description. 

2 hours ago, Toaster Retribution said:

2. She is (and this, I would argue, is the one actual problem with Jasnahs character) overpowered. If Stormlight had been a tv-game, everyone would have been calling for Brandon to nerf her. She is an amazing fighter, a great scholar, incredibly knowledgeable, diplomatically skilled, keeps track of assassins, Ghostbloods and Heralds, might already have Shardplate, is able to get everyone to do what she wants them to do, and is intelligent, beautiful, rich, kind, caring and has a high position in society. No matter what the problem is, all characters can turn to Jasnah. That bothers me. In order for me to relate to her, she needs to have a weakness, a flaw that actively hinders her in an area which is currently important to her. As of now, she doesn’t have that.

But if you were to strip away his PoV's I think nearly the same things could be said about Dalinar. He's incredibly capable. Maybe not brilliant but able to figure out what he needs in order to accomplish his goals consistently. Able to get people to bend to his will whether they like it or not... Most of Dalinar's struggles, Especially in tWoK, were internal. Without his PoV's, he'd have just seemed to be a force of personality slowly pushing his way towards the rule of Alethkar. 

If it weren't for her gender, and her religious beliefs, I think she'd be celebrated as another Blackthorn. 

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