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The sky is filled with pink fire as the sun breaches the horizon behind the black silhouettes of trees. Tall loblollies with blackened scaly bark that resemble teardrops hanging into the sky, green needles filled with yellow buds in the springtime. Clouds are gathering, moving quickly to chase you down and leave you damp in first period. Best to keep moving.

You emerge from the sports field that borders the forest, an empty memory of children laughing and running and playing together, the spraypainted lines and zones nearly invisible in the overgrown grass. Here and there is a stray brick, concrete, wood, or plastic rubble. Pay them no heed.

Continuing on, you climb a mostly intact chain link fence and drop into a parking lot. The lines in white and yellow are preserved far better here, where the scorch marks don’t cover them up. No one is here at the school this weekend, but there are plenty of cars in the parking lot. Technically. You’re sure that some of them could still be considered cars, if you squint at them.

The sun beats down on you, and a humid spring breeze carries the smell of wildflowers and burning plastic as you step onto the quad. This space between the school buildings is a haven, where students are allowed to go outside at lunch or wait for their parents during afternoon carpool. There are benches, tables, trees, a small garden, and a basketball court. You pass by the numerous backpacks full of flaky ashen binders and notebooks, left behind by the shadows imprinted on the walls. 

The door is locked, and the receptionist doesn’t seem to notice you’re there, so you let yourself in through the hole in the window, gingerly picking yourself over the rubble. A bell rings, or really, an automated noise played over the PA system. If you’re not quick, you’ll be late for class.

You quickly make your way through the halls, weaving your way through the statue-like maze of students trying to get to class. You always seem to spot the same students on their route between classes, and though you couldn’t name them, you could probably guess which classes they have. You enter the senior wing, and climb the steps to the third floor, and enter the math hall. They seem to have installed a new window and left it open, as there is a cold, wet breeze blowing in, making puddles on the dirty floor, running the ink on the freshman’s presentations tacked to the wall.

You can’t count the number of days where you’ve showed up, stared blankly in the same seven classes, learned what seems like nothing, not spoken to anyone new, and gone home hungry. Graduation must be soon, right?

You finally make it to class, a few seconds before the bell rings. Your usual seat has been taken by the gaping hole in the side of the classroom, so you sit on the opposite side. Someone has left their laptop here, and you are about to move it to the side before it suddenly flashes to life, a message crossing the screen in green boot up text. 

To the Winslow Survivor: wake up. you are not in school. wake up. there is no graduation. wake up. the world is ended. wake up. don’t trust Mono. wake up. wake up. wake up. 
WAKE UP.

 

credit @Through The Living Girl for inspiration and Mono.

Edited by Through The Living Grass

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Usseewa

Posted

hewo

uwu

wait Mono?

also i didn't finish reading yet

Verdance

Posted

Uh idk this is not canon to your universe ofc

the idea was Mono becomes authoritarian and then the people fight back

then Mono just nukes everything

Usseewa

Posted

oh damn i just finished reading it

gave me chills, i love it

 

is the person, like, traumatized/insane or being mind-controlled/deceived Matrix-style? Or do we gotta figure it out :3

 

3 minutes ago, Through The Living Grass said:

Uh idk this is not canon to your universe ofc

the idea was Mono becomes authoritarian and then the people fight back

then Mono just nukes everything

Oh, that's rlly cool! I love it!

Verdance

Posted

Radiation caused people outside to be vaporized, people inside to be pompei’d

this is not scientific 

the survivor of winslow got lucky and lives with radiation poisoning, memory loss, and extreme suceptibility to manipulation. He’s thirty four years old and has gone to school every day of his life until today.

Usseewa

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3 minutes ago, Through The Living Grass said:

Radiation caused people outside to be vaporized, people inside to be pompei’d

this is not scientific 

the survivor of winslow got lucky and lives with radiation poisoning, memory loss, and extreme suceptibility to manipulation. He’s thirty four years old and has gone to school every day of his life until today.

until today?

also damn that's extremely depressing/dystopian lol (I'm fine dw)

ya, i figured they got nuked

Verdance

Posted

Its a metaphor

for public school 

:3

idk, kind of intrusive actually, if you already have plans for your world. 

Verdance

Posted

21 minutes ago, Through The Living Girl said:

until today?

also damn that's extremely depressing/dystopian lol (I'm fine dw)

ya, i figured they got nuked

Lets say some other survivors realize that a computer genius is still mostly alive somewhere and try and break his cycle.

Usseewa

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46 minutes ago, Through The Living Grass said:

Lets say some other survivors realize that a computer genius is still mostly alive somewhere and try and break his cycle.

yes exactly 

basically my manga

 

kinda

Verdance

Posted

14 minutes ago, Through The Living Girl said:

yes exactly 

basically my manga

 

kinda

Well, idk, this was a hit of inspiration i had thinking about how school feels like eternal punishment and a dystopian nightmare at the same time, and the whole thing with Mono sparked it for some reason

Dont try and conform your story to this, it’s actually pretty rude because i disnt ask your permission first

Usseewa

Posted (edited)

2 minutes ago, Through The Living Grass said:

Well, idk, this was a hit of inspiration i had thinking about how school feels like eternal punishment and a dystopian nightmare at the same time, and the whole thing with Mono sparked it for some reason

Dont try and conform your story to this, it’s actually pretty rude because i disnt ask your permission first

i mean CC-SA but idk what applies on the shard but anyway ignore this sentence

yeah, it would probably be better to ask first in the future, but I'm fine with what you did/are doing.

 

edit: oop, you technically didn't credit me lol, so not CC-SA

Edited by Through The Living Girl
Verdance

Posted

4 minutes ago, Through The Living Girl said:

i mean CC-SA but idk what applies on the shard but anyway ignore this sentence

yeah, it would probably be better to ask first in the future, but I'm fine with what you did/are doing.

 

edit: oop, you technically didn't credit me lol, so not CC-SA

Fix ed

Usseewa

Posted

Just now, Through The Living Grass said:

Fix ed

oh, thx

I'm gonna ask if we have any rights for our content since idk of Codeofconduct says anything 

Verdance

Posted

If someone stole my IP and distributed it throughout the internet frankly i would be thrilled

though i would question their sanity

anyhow imma sign off for the moment, GL with your project

Usseewa

Posted

actually nvm it doesn't rlly matter and I'd probably come across as

"is what we post copyrighted or anything?"

meaning "CAN I STEAL WHAT OTHER PEOPLE CREATE" (this is not what i actually am)

 

 

Just now, Through The Living Grass said:

If someone stole my IP and distributed it throughout the internet frankly i would be thrilled

though i would question their sanity

anyhow imma sign off for the moment, GL with your project

what if they claimed it as their own...?

lile "look at this idea i came up with!"

also bye-bye

Verdance

Posted

I mean none of this stuff is good enough for me to care about claiming rights to

its not like im trying to make money off of it

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