This was a good read!
I was kind of expecting there to be a twist at the end but honestly, I was so focused on Davis's internal thoughts that the thought of Davis not being real didn't really occur to me. Wasn't totally surprised by that though. The twist with Chaz though was dark and unexpected. Good for dupe Davis to let it go and move on.
The whole indiscriminate killing of dupes was kind of disconcerting. I wouldn't want real cops to get that comfortable with just carelessly murdering people. I mean, I'm sure we've all attempted to murder civilians in video games but as the realism is increased, I would hope the moral revulsion of ending life would be in full effect.
Not that I expect it to happen but I'm mildly interested in re-reading the entire story as events originally occurred. That is, see what's going through Davis's head the first time around. Probably a lot more brooding, anger, and lack of character growth. Yeah, maybe not.
Do you guys think the "thing" powering the snapshots is some subdued Epic? Also, what did you make of the 2018 time period and yet having holographic computers, autocabs, no physical currency, and fractured governments? I suppose it's just some other Reckoner's Core Possibility where tech is more advanced than us by a few decades.