KristyGilbert

Edited to add this intro: Hey all, I'm new to 17th Shard. I'm Dragonsteel's lead editor on Emberdark and will handle most of the typo reports. @Treamayne Good catch. Thanks! This is correct for this character's idiolect. It's not the most proper, but they're saying they want to keep the prisoners as prisoners (type of person) rather than keeping them in the state of being imprisoned. This is artistic license on Hoid's part. @RShara This is an intentional difference. Dusk believes in many gods, so one of many is not capitalized when discussed in general. But when you use a title in place of a name, it gets capitalized. We do the same thing with, "Yes, Captain, I'll get right on that" vs. "The captain told me to get right on that." Sak's origins are written as intended (as Peter mentioned). @Argent This is a typo in the art. Good catch. @Glamdring804 Good catch! @lacrossedeamon The list is not necessarily exhaustive, and the three-part list makes a nice rhythm in her dialogue. Good catch! There isn't an established byname for Nohadon in this style. I'll bring it up with Brandon, but it might just be something Starling calls him. @Nightstar The Bright The bittersting scorpion is a Patji creature, so it is probably deadly at both ends. I'll check, though. @NameIess Yup. Thanks!