Ethrabalien
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I found two. First, the ORDERINESS vs ORDERLINESS is still present in the Kindle version. Second: She breathed in the potent air, walked through the darkness with her hands out to the sides. (when Venli is walking through the chasm) 58% on the kindle version - looks like a comma splice to me