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The Great Wyver

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  1. Yeah thats what im probably gonna do And im probably not gonna do a water thing
  2. "I don't know about that. I've had a couple centuries to memorize navigational skills." The earlier stuttering had dissapeared.
  3. Alright I got a story folks Day 9: Heavy Well I had the idea of 'hey lets do a miner scene!' and just improved the rest of the story from that. I was going to do a reread but once it his like 6 paragraphs I decided that I probably wasn't going to go through and fix every little thing on here- but I probably will do it for the Blog edition that I made a blog for (will edit link into this parenthesis as soon as im done). Also a quick tip about writing; listening to music (especially music related to what youre writing) helps a lot. I happened to be playing hollow knight before i wrote this and was in the crystal peak. The background ambience was peak (pun intended) and the background pick sounds kinda help me with the, uh, i think its onamotapeia or whatever its called? I dont think I wrote the ending very well (My first idea was that the crystal would tempt him into eating it, then the crystal would posses him or something; idk) but whatever. I probably should've made it longer; a story like this probably better functions in a longer text. I might do a longer version for the Blog version.
  4. "Nice! I've been around for... 9ish? Maybe 10? I don't count nowadays. But yeah." The yellow light fades into a more relaxed light red.
  5. "Um... wait! You've been alive for 10 centuries?" It doesn't seem awed; more like the "YOU TOO!?" type surprised. Compass's light becomes a lemony yellow.
  6. "Oh, and, uh, you can call me Compass for now..." Compass replied, a bit taken aback from his showoffiness.
  7. "Um... hi?" The Sphere tries making small conversation to pass the time. "Um. Yeah. Hi. What's your name?" It turns a light blue.
  8. "Spice Level" sure is a way of putting it. And yeah ill check out Fireborne, whos it written by?
  9. I might do an Inktober thing I just need to think of a good story thing BUT MIPO WANTS TO STAY AS A KINGS WIT SO DONT
  10. Yeah I have read & own the whole series Yeah fair enough
  11. Oh so a sort of Fourth Wing type thing?
  12. Alright Are they nobles or commoners or something in between? It could be a 'The children of the king go on an adventure to slay [evil thing here]' type thing
  13. Ok good. Anyways; so basically, the kids are training to become either magicions or knights or something. And they are either bffs or siblings. And they have a teacher, and shed full of weapons.
  14. Im sorry Are these 6 year olds playing with weapons? Please tell me they are at least ten
  15. you insane?" But Jan smiled.
  16. But you call the Ghost Busters(TM) and they take care o Bob so youre still possesed
  17. But you do because your possesed by a hungry spirit called Bob
  18. Huh That sounds... like a very dark story. Maniac who kidnaps people, puts them into a factory, then drugs them on 'You-need-to-escape-now' juice? Interesting.
  19. "Well even if it is, look. The center of the forest is there, and the Town is just above it. So how about that?"
  20. somehow. Jane was shocked. "Where
  21. airplane?" But Jan wasn't convinced.
  22. "He's a chef. Also, I, and specifically I, did not try to kill you. It was the dragon."
  23. "Look, Mr. Dwarf, if we wanted to kill you we already would've."
  24. "...No?" The Sphere thought for a moment. "I am one -hundred percent sure that North is that way." It bobbed in front of them. "...And the town is North. Trust me, I've never been wrong with stuff like this. In fact, it gave me my nickname."
  25. "Oh, no, its just up ahead! Walk for a couple minutes and we'll be there!"
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