Chapter 66 "Szeth started toward the bridge, and the others trailed along. None of them flying-to avoid revealing themselves."
Should this be "Neither of them flying"? I also feel that the "others trailed along" reads oddly since only Kaladin is described in the scene. This makes it seem like there are many people. (I understand there's Syl and Nightblood I don't know if that is the reasoning for this verbage)
I have read all of stormlight (except Wind and Truth, my current read), most of Mistborn Era 1, Elantris, Warbreaker and Skyward. After WAT I'm going to finally go through Mistborn then the secret project books.
I have read all of stormlight (except Wind and Truth, my current read), most of Mistborn Era 1, Elantris, Warbreaker and Skyward. After WAT I'm going to finally go through Mistborn then the secret project books.
Hello everyone! I'm new here! I'm a big fan of the stormlight series and I thought I'd finally get active in the discussion forums in the hopes of someday becoming a beta reader!