SkeletonFlower

Hi, yes UK ebook. Sorry, I should have specified! Maybe it would be helpful if another UK reader could confirm, especially the italics in chapter 131 as that was really subtle on my Kindle and could just be the font. x

Aside from the ones already pointed out which I won't repeat, I have found a few more errors/inconsistencies. Chapter 12, Page 140 Missing a question mark after ‘bad haircut’. Chapter 21, Page 256 This line doesn’t seem to flow quite right in context due to the word ‘however’. I think it makes better sense if 'however' is removed entirely. Chapter 31, page 361 I think this one should be “humans” instead of “human”, but it reads ambiguously and may be correct as is. It’s difficult as ‘spren’ can be both singular and plural, but I instinctively read it as plural here. Better to point it out than leave it, I suppose! Chapter 31, Page 363 There is a period instead of a question mark at the end of this sentence. Also, a comma should be added after ‘what if’ to isolate the parenthetical phrase 'by meddling'. Chapter 36, page 430 This is not wrong as such, but I think this one would read better with either a sentence break, semi-colon or dash following ‘colors’, and then a comma after the phrase ‘in this case’. Chapter 49, Page 571 Formless is referred to as ‘it’ here. She is referred to using ‘she/her’ pronouns in all other instances. Chapter 53, page 611 This might be for emphasis, but million is repeated twice here. Thought it was worth pointing out just in case this was done in error. Chapter 88, page 1604, Epigraph “Antilight” is unhyphenated here, but it is hyphenated as 'anti-Light' in all other instances. Chapter 88, Page 1604 Missing a comma after ‘sign’. Chapter 95, page 1135 Missing a comma before ‘however’. I double checked every 'however' for you and this is the only instance where this occurs in this book. Chapter 131, page 1453 The ‘d’ in ‘do’ is unitalicized at the start of this sentence. Whole book This is just me being pedantic, but there is inconsistent use of a comma in sentences where there is no parenthetical phrase following the word 'then'. In almost all cases in the book, a comma isn't used when no parenthetical phrase follows 'then' - except in these 3 (that I've found): Lastly, there is inconsistent use of a comma after the word ‘otherwise’ when it starts a sentence. There are 5 sentences that I’ve found beginning with ‘otherwise’, yet only 3 of them have a comma following the word when it should be present in all cases. They are: It has been a joy to read this book. Thank you for all the incredible work that you and your team do! If you’re ever looking for another gamma/beta reader, I would be honored to be a part of the cosmere’s future.

Chapter 3, page 24 Double spacing after the word ‘there’. Chapter 17, page 159 There is an extra space here too, likely relating to the missing comma which should follow the phrase 'I admit'.